| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 00:45 CST
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Yea! Way to go Bas! Protect his kitty. That was a great chapter Sue! I just love how protective he is and just how jelous she is. Ha! Bas has to know by now that he is now on kitty territory! Possessive, Jelous. Either way... he's cat food for the the soul.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 22:48 CST
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lol!! ardmore!! i've been through there many a time! and damn! that was one hell of a fight! lol!!! i can't believe she did that to that poor demon... ouch... flat shoes indeed... man, how's bas gonna drive when he's about to pass out?
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely enjoyed this episode. Wonderful. The relationship development is just great and it keeps me at the edge of my seat. Please continue.
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Title: More please!
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid bounty hunters ruining the moment! Great story, i really like Sidney. More please!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 20:21 CST
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great chapter sue! Since they are in Oklahoma, you should have had bas and syd stop through broken arrow so that they can visit me! you know you wanna! I really love the developing relationship between bas and syd, they complement each other well. You did an awesome job on the action scene, it flowed very well, and I could vividly "see" the fight as it unfolded. The banter between the wi d youkai and syd is hilarious. Anyways, can't wait until the next installment. ~fute~
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Reviewed By: floopyloopyoopy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAAAAH!!! i wanna kno what happens next! You're a really great writer, i admire your writing. Not just the style but the ideas and how well you plan everything out! I wanna thank you SOOOO much for writing these stories for the pleasure of the public for free even when you have a family to care for. =] THANK YOU THANK YOU and I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 18:51 CST
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Oh, I knew that they were going to get attacked at the festival!!! YAY!!! Bas with his sword, awesome!!!! I love your action scenes!!!!
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, nice chapter. Remembering the chapter of Justification with the amusement park, I sort of thought they'd have a romantic little interlude. I loved the little stuffed dog! Sorry I didn't review last chapter, Media Miner was being lame. That was a good chapter, too. Thanks so much for updating! Happy Holidays! ~Kat
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Title: Ayita
Reviewed By: Ayita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 13:54 CST
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I used to be your Anoki reviewer but now I have an actual account on MediaMiner so now I'm Ayita. Anyway, once again, Sueric, you start out another wonderful story that we all obsess about until you reach your wonderful yet sadly welcome conclusions. I hope your Christmas was wonderful and I'm anxiously awaiting your next update.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 12:51 CST
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Merry Christmas! Wonderful Chapter, cant wait for the next update
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 12:07 CST
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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to You and Yours, Sue.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:30 CST
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Great chapter, Sue. Thanks for the update, and I hope you had a wonderful Christmas.
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Title: aww! christmas!
Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yey!!!! she finally got him into that bed! but that was so underhanded! bad syd! lol... and yey for oklahoma!!! "where the wind comes sweeping down the plain!!" ;) oh! but now i worry that since he's sleeping better that he wont hear the bad guys! ...glave? that's a damn scary name! lol! great chapter! and i hope you had a wonderful christmas w/ your family!!
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