| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the plot thickens!!! this is going to be so freaking awesome...please keep going!!
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Title: Aww so kawaii
Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 20:32 CST
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oh so cute this chapter is so sweet. But...what is really Sydnie problem? Did she have a bad child fear of the dark. Well it doesn't matter I luv this cghapter update soon. P.S. Who are the people in the shadow? ?-?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet! Such a good chapter... I really loved Sydnie pestering Bas about his crests. Now, does she have them? Must wait and see... After all, she is full youkai, right? So she might, but Belle was hanyou and had them... Interesting. I eagerly await the next wonderful chapter. Thank you! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 16:11 CST
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How sweet, she orders blankets for him to stay warm! Hmm...I really wish we knew what was plaquing her as well, but I also know that we will find out if it's meant to be, so I'm not too worried haha! Hmm...I wonder when this Cody guy will come; I'm anxious to see Bas in a fight and use his sword!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter please update soon
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. Your are so awesome. I totally enjoyed all of your stories. I could not leave the computer until I finished at least a couple of chapters. Love your writing and your character development. I am not one to read fics with original characters but I have made an exception with you. Keep writing I love your plots as well. Where do you get your ideas? Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stories realy gettin good. Keep it up (good work that is) Have good christmas may not review againuntil after that
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: iluvsesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....If there was something higher than a ten, I'd totally give it to you. This story is amazing. How do you come up with this? You should totally keep going...I can't wait to find out what happens to Bas and Sydnie.*Throws hands in air* So good! (ahem) Anyway, yesh, is very good.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 15:28 CST
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Awww....that was a cute chapter!! She's all guarding the spoon, how cute!!!!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 14:58 CST
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Just wanted to tell you what an amazing job you're doing w/ this fic. When Syd smiled at Bas at the end of this chapter I smiled w/ her. Thank you for giving her the opportunity for a genuine smile. I love all of the characters that you're created. However there is just something about Syd's that speaks to my soul. I'm am really enjoying this fic. I just reread bertha, and the original purity, and I think I'm going to start on meta again. Anywho, I hope you are having an amazingly blessed holiday season. Thank you for sharing. ~fute
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wonderful as always. I absolutely love the way you're able to combine the characters of the original series of Inuyasha into the story of completely new characters. As far as the person who went overboard on "critiquing" your work, don't take it to heart. Obviously someone needs to go back and look over some of the lessons taught in English courses. What they call bad grammar and what not is something that you can actually get away with in speech, since not everyone speeks 100% grammatically correct you can get away with having "poor grammar" in a speech context. I hope they didn't get you down about your work because if that many things confused them, then they obviously haven't read too many of your stories, or even paid much attention to what they were reading. You've done an awesome job with this story and every other one that you have written. When I see update messages in my inbox for your story I actually get excited and have to read it right away. Keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:14 CST
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lol!!! when she goes "is it big or little" i was like... omg. she's about to make him blush like wildfire. lol... but she didn't mean it like that. but i thought it was funny... if i had been in the room i would have done a *snort! chuckle* kind of thing... lol... anyhow, another great chaper! love her damn curiosity! it's adorable! "what is it?...i dont want it... i just want to know what it is.." and then she's all no! dont take it away! adorable! will bas tell her more about gin? she doesn't have a mom :(... anyhow, loved it! have a good weekend!
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Title: OPPS
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SORRY Sue, I didn't mean to curse the f---- word. I thought it erased before I posted it. So sorry about that but I meant what I said. thank you J
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