| "Bane of Existence/Love of A Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 28, 2006 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! I'M SOO HAPPY!!!! I really liked it and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: TwiLiteVixen (@ff.net) On: July 12, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smirks* Do I forsee a threesom in the furure? Very good job. Methinks you have aquired another rabid fan...
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what the three of them do to Inuyasha if any thing. How they defeat Naraku and what happens with the rest of the Inu gang. Also if you bring Kieko back in to cause trouble.
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Title: Maleness-Goodness
Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok its been awhile since I last reviewed anyways these last two chapters were great. I loved it so when are they going to return to the village and have Kagome kick some butt? Anyways loved the entire story. Keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: kagssibling On: May 16, 2006 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story that you have writing. please continue with it. i love thw fact that you have made the characters very developed
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 14:04 CDT
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Wow... I've really missed out on a lot. The last chapter I read on AFFnet was where Keiko confronted Kagome. *snicker* At any rate-- I reiterate this-- WOW. Nicely written. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful story!!!! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tokugawa) On: April 24, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story its so cute ^.^ but Keiko needs to be hurt really badly, PELASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE... Pleaseeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: Tokugawa (A.k.a Jezebel.) On: April 24, 2006 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kenshin lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 17:40 CDT
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Love this story. My favorite characters for Kagome to be with, besides Inuyasha, are Yuske and Karama so to have a story where they are both with her is great! Keep writing please and I look forward to the next update. Hope it is soon.
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR (not logged in) On: April 02, 2006 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, original fic. Your style of writing and vocabulary is very clear and descriptive. Please update soon. I think one of the best things about this fic is inuyasha from a different point of view. : )
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Reviewed By: Kagome's Heart On: March 17, 2006 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is definetly good. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 17, 2006 07:06 CST
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Beautiful. Moving. Stunning. Funny. This work is amazing, and I can't wait to read more. Only one critique - fix the summary so it looks as good on the outside as it does on the inside. You've put 'piece' instead of 'peace'! Looking forward to more soon....
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:13 CST
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oh that was so awesome!! Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama|Youko I wonder what Shippou's reaction is going to be to their new looks and Kagome's to Youko.. Hey when are you going to have Kagome/Kurama|Youko moments?
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 09:34 CST
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Enjoying your work!
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