| "Bane of Existence/Love of A Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 06, 2006 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story and hope you will continue the story. I love the pairing that you picked! I'm so wondering what happens next. Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: mac65 On: February 26, 2006 21:46 CST
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Ilike this story so far... I really love the idea of a Yusuke/Kagome/kurama pairing...even the characterization of Sess is great! My only concern is why kagome is the way she is.. almost like a split personality. I mean, she is so tough and all, and stands her ground, ordering Inuyasha off her proprty; but when she is back in the past, she seems to behave like a helpless female???!!! That part just irritates me, because I can't see why in the story she is behaving this way. I know there needs to be some angst, but I would appreciate it if Kags could start to become stronger a bit sooner! Other than that, please keep up the good work and update soonest!
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Title: Whee~
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really know how to leave someone in suspense don't you? I can't wait to find out who is the one that found her, I have guesses, but when it comes to your stories one can never be certain. I hope that you update soon because I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! (When am I not?) Keep up the great work! ~Tijiya
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Title: Keeps getting better
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I read this it keeps getting better and better! Wow, that could have gone better. But I half expected Inuyasha to react like that. I quite agree with Sesshomaru-sama! Please hurry up with the next chapter, I can't wait to read it! Keep up the fantastic job! ~Tijiya
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 16:17 CST
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*pulls out a big sharp pointy thing* now.... *looks at pointy then to writer* update and you and pointy shall never be aquainted..... but if it's any testimony i LOOOOOOOVVVVEEEEE it!
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Reviewed By: WhiteWolf931 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good but you need to finish it please
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh awsome!!!! This has been a great story so far. I like the twist of self doubt that Kagome struggles with, it's great because I can so see it as a reality for her. I look forward to the next chapter. I am at the edge of my seat to see how things work when Kagome and the boys go to the past. I can't wait for the bonds between Kuruma, Kagome and Yusuke come together more as a unit and not just Yusuke and Kagome. I'm chomping at the bit here. Great work and keep it up. Looking forward to more. Oh and by the way I don't always leave a review when I read but know that you are on my story favorites list and that I do read even if I don't always review.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well ... that is certainly going to throw a wrench into the works. Poor Inuyasha won't know what hit him. Not that I feel any pity for him... keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 04:06 CST
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Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama|Youko
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 04:05 CST
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ba-boom ba-boom awesome
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, another chapter! Wow, that last part had my mouth resembling that of a fishes! You're coming out with surprises left and right. No matter how hard I try to catch them, they catch me first! I can't wait to read the next chapter, which will probably be just as, or more so, enjoyable to read. Keep up the terrific work and update soon please! ~Tijiya
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 08:54 CST
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Keiko so deserved that! You really don't like her, do you? Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama|Youko
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: DBDPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ok i like so far! im not done reading the other chapters but i wanted to let you know that this was good so far... and the funny part was here, in chap2, was the very last sentance "she touched me ya know" heheehehheheheeehHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAA!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 15:15 CST
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Aww! how come you didn't kill keiko off in a dark ally way somewhere? she deserves to die for hurtin' yusuke like that and then gettin' mad when she sees him w/ another girl. fab fic! update soon!
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Title: Better and Better
Reviewed By: Tijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is only getting better and better as I continue to read. I figured that the encounter with Keiko would come up soon and I was not disapointed to say in the least. Kagome is one of those women who can and will back up her words, I'm almost afraid to know what would happen should Keiko confront Kagome again! ^^ Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter anxiously so please update soon! ~Tijiya
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