| "When You Least Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 05:31 CDT
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if you dont update your stories i'm going to have to hunt you down with sporks i think. mostly this one. i been reading all of them but damn it this one is the best one so far...
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Title: When You Least Expect
Reviewed By: Goku-lover21 On: July 11, 2004 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story please update soon i know its been 2yrs. But i hope you finish it soon! Bye! :) Hera
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Reviewed By: ploplo On: January 22, 2003 19:04 CST
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Ok what is up with you write an exceptional story then you leave us hanging ? TOTALY NOT COOL!!!\
Update pleassssssssse! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-jaw drops- Wow...wow...wow...I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ This is an awesome story! Very well written and put together. THE SUSPENSE! AHHHHHHHHHH! XD -lol- Until next review! -waves- |
Reviewed By: Are you On: November 15, 2002 21:47 CST
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update? |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your fic, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Veggiesgirl389 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was really really good. I had 2 skip sum of the Freiza parts thou. i really don't like him. Neway your storys realllllly good and i want u 2 continue plz plz plz !!!!!!!! I need more!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: October 22, 2002 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kahlan: End? *_* Wow!
UG: O.o; uh, oh-kay.
Kahlan: So, will Bulma be raped like in Lisalu's fics? That alone would make Vegeta angry. Foolish Cell. He's being as foolish as Vegeta when he fought Cell.... *holds head* Woah, that's to weird. Oh, Kakarott shaking the ball was funny. Bulma did that in the anime. Bubba! She's so cool! Brings Vegeta back from the dead, she does! When oh when does episode 254 come!
UG: Gods, I can't beleive this woman is going to create me!
Kahlan: Belive it! I start tonight!
UG: EEP!
Kahlan: Oh, I want a lemon.... One more? Pwease?
UG: Lemon?
Kahlan: ^_~ You'll get one.... |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: October 22, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kahlan: Hey! I've been neglecting you as much as I have ssjprincess. As an apology....
*unknown girl with spiky black hair and blue eyes pops out of no where* Hello.
Kahlan: Meet a new character I will be creating....
ug: Um, who am I?
Kahlan: *shrugs* All I know is that you will be in a new story I will be posting. A shorter story than the usual. A/U kinda.... An odd pairing with Two Saiyans and a well-known human. All from Vegeta's POV
UG: An orgy?
Kahlan: O.O No! I couldn't.... Wait.... Yeah, if I were in it, I could write one....
UG: O.o;
Kahlan: Very good. I loved Frieza's death scene! Thank you for producing it as you promised.
UG: Who?
Kahlan: Nevermind. You'll hear about him.
UG: When?
Kahlan: You're as annoying as your father!
UG: Who's my father?
Kahlan: *evil smirk* That's one of the twists of the story!!!!
UG: O.O I'm scared.
Kahlan: As you should be. Now, 18 is free, Nappa is dead, and Radditz and Goku will find Vegeta. Come on--uh, UG, let's find out!
UG: *shrugs* Okay. |
Reviewed By: GOKU`S GIRL On: September 18, 2002 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
whats the point you need to work on it ok .ok i make um too it is haRD I KNOW JUST YOU NEED TO FLOW WIT HOLLA BACK. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: September 16, 2002 14:03 CDT
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Poor 18! I hope her brother remembers her soon. But more importantly... I hope she is able to get to Bulma before Vegeta & the gang are led into a trap. Look forward to next update! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Late is right, but so worth it! It's hard for me to believe this fic is giving you problems when you write it so well! I'm so in heaven! The only thing is, I have a new story planned and actually the first page written, and I think it may be better than The Truth. What are you going to do then?!? ;)
Well, as always, I can't wait to find out what's going to happen. Poor Bulma. Will she be raped by that fag, Zarbon. Will 18 get 17 to come around? Who is going to save Bulma and 18, and how are they going to do it? I know Chi-Chi and Kakarot have to hook-up, but how and when?!? I NEED to know!!!
As a last thought, I love you so much for going through so much trouble for me. I was having a terrible time with The Sister Saga. In truth, I haven't written anything new on it since May, but I forced out and outline for the next few chapters and I'm starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel! I hope to get it rolling again and hopefully finished! I'm getting sick of fighting with it! Well, until the next update. Well, actually until I get around to reading your updates on ff.net, which has taken away NC-17 fics...grrrr....Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 12, 2002 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was definitely worth waiting for! I feel so bad for 18. The way 17 rejected her was heartbreaking and it looks like part of his memory of her has been erased. I hope that 18 or the other warriors are able to locate Bulma in time. I don't like the ideas that are going thru Zarbon's head (Kami I hate that bastard!). At least Cell didn't touch her, even though I don't like the fact that he wants to use her to bait Vegeta. Of course I'm happy as sh*t that Veggie has recovered, but it seems like he's in denial (yet again) where his feelings for Bulma are concerned. Again, fab update JB. I don't know how you do it. Oh, before I forget, if you haven't check out Ember's fic "May The Spirits Keep You Safe", please do so. It'll blow you away, I guarantee it ^_^. Well enough of my babble for now. Keep up the great work! TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: September 12, 2002 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took a while...but it was worth the wait! |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: August 22, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story...it kinda freaked me out when my name was in it...that's kinda funny...but anyways, i really like your story and update it soon! thanx |
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