| "When You Least Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nissa On: September 12, 2002 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took a while...but it was worth the wait! |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: August 22, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story...it kinda freaked me out when my name was in it...that's kinda funny...but anyways, i really like your story and update it soon! thanx |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 16, 2002 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! 17 & 18 are reunited! Let's hope he's on their side now and helps them get the heck out of there. And looks like Vegeta's going to be having some hospitality on that little planet though I wonder how long that will last? Hopefully the guys will see he genuinely does care about Bulma, even if he can't admit it himself. Great update :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 15, 2002 02:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to say that if you're stumped on how things to move things along in "The Show", then take your time. Please don't rush on my account ok? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 15, 2002 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a chapter! I'm so glad Cell took out Frieza. I bet his last thoughts were "Oh man, this sucks" ^_^. Sorry I couldn't resist. I hope 17 comes to his senses and helps 18 get out of there. I don't like Bulma's chances for escape. The thought of Cell touching her in any way makes me wanna vomit :P. Please make it so that K/R find Veggie. Bulma could certainly use their help right about now. Awesome update, and I can't wait for more. TTYL |
Reviewed By: tinie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pllleeeaaaaassssse update soon! i want more! gotta have it *screams and pulls on her hair*...*clears throat* anyway, awesome fic once again, sorry i didn't review on all the other chapters but they were good as well. ^_^ i hope you update this real soon. ok, till next time... tinie |
Reviewed By: shippouchan On: July 28, 2002 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic!!! more v/b scenes please ^-^ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 12:58 CDT
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This was a great chapter. The suspense is suffocating. Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter and so much quicker than the last update! I thought I would never get to read the end of this story, but now that I'm reading it again, I don't want it to end!
How's Chi-Chi going to get away from the Baron? I feel so sorry for her, and I usally can't stand her! And poor Bulma and Eighteen. Are they going to become Zarbon's play things? And is Vegeta still alive?!? Will Kakarot make it in time?!? This sounds like a soap opera!!!
Well, I guess that's all for now...I'm looking forward to your next chapter as soon as you get it written. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 23, 2002 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, oops. Also wanted to mention that Krillin seemed OOC. He was so OOC I laughed. He seemed--too--polite and formal. I'm used to relaxed, laid back, coward Krillin. Might be just me though.... That and that 'He looks like he's constipated.' comment when Vegeta was powering up for Perfect Cell. Fav line by Krillin. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 23, 2002 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(blushes) Ah, um...well, I didn't actually take into account that soccor mom bit. I just thought Androids--Android 18--kicked Vegeta's butt--hate--mom--'death'. See? No soccor there. Just DBZ stuff.... So sue me....
Surprise hmm? Well, the best i can hope for is Veg in the regen tank and coming out ike he did in the manga! (dreamy eyes) That was a Dirty Dancing moment if you catch my drift....
"He had her and he knew it. She knew it. And worst of all, he knew she knew it." I'm sorry, but once again, lol. I'm not supposed to laugh, but it was so funny. Seriously.... No, I've only had one coke...though I should have a date on Sat and he's brining me Vanilla Coke and Mint Skittle, taking me to Golden Corral on their steak day (medium rare, nice and bloody) and maybe a movie.... See you can have fun and not have a dime on you! lol
Well, see ya next chapter. Shiryou, via (gg) your request, is almost ready.... |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 23, 2002 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, you updated again! this fic is one of my favorites of yours. i can't wait to find out how vegeta's going to swing this one! he's going to have to get kakarott to help him!!! if he survives... eeeek!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 23, 2002 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, just when K/CC declare their love for each other and you think things will work out, now CC has to hook up with that freak so that he'll free her dad. UGH!! That Baron has a face that would bring about an early menopause. It's nice to see Krillin being a take charge type of person. Looks like Radditz has his eyes on Nissa. I hope they can find Veggie. Something tells me that his injuries are serious. What's gonna happen to B/18? Just thinking what could happen makes me ill, specially since Zarbon and Frieza are in the picture. Can't wait for more ^_^. Btw, great chap! |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: July 16, 2002 14:32 CDT
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ey girl.. god job as usual! im looking forward to what happens next and PLEASE update My Friend cause you know im so loving that story right now! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 15, 2002 05:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
FFN is up and running (who knows how long that'll last). Cha updated DITH. Awesome chap. Ya gotta check it out ^_^. TTYL |
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