| "When You Least Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn On: July 12, 2002 23:37 CDT
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She just can't seem to stay out of trouble can she? :) It's great you had them crash-land on the same planet her would-be rescuers are on. Can't wait to see what happens when 17 recognizes 18... yet another sub-plot to keep it interesting. Keep it coming! |
Reviewed By: masamune On: July 12, 2002 23:02 CDT
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yay, you finally updated! i was beginning to think it was the end for this fic! spiify job, of course! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 15:11 CDT
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Yea!!!! Girl, you just don't know how much you made my day!!! I hope you're serious about updating!!! I love this story so much I can't wait for more!!! Sorry it's so hard though. Well, maybe it'll get easier to write once you get back in the groove of things. I dunno, just a thought. Well, obviously I can't wait for more! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Princess Kitana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! You're killing me here! Please e-mail me when you do. kitana82483@aol.com
~*~ Princess Kitana ~*~ |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You will not believe how much I love finding your fics on this site since ff.net is down. I have been going thru update withdrawals since it seems like no one but you is updating on their own websites.
I can't believe Vegeta was beat so easily. He must have really been hurt by that beam falling on him. Does Karrorott find out that Bulma was on the same planet & then was kidnapped again by Juu? Thanks for the updates, all of them, can't wait for another--on any fic. |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Vegeta kicks seventtens sorry ass.You just gatta let vegeta have his revenge Jadedbest.DOnt be cruel.I was a little suprised to see Vegeta beat so eaisly.I love the fic please continue.remember Give vegeta the revenge.Please. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 12, 2002 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't believe Veggie was taken down so easily. He must've been really hurt for that to happen. Can't wait to find out where they're taking Bulma and 18. This is getting so exciting so don't take too long to update. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 07, 2002 21:27 CDT
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Wow, this is a great story. You've really done a good job of incorporating all of the major characters into new and interesting roles. Really enjoyed it, hope you update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Veggiesgirl389 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good! I had to give u one 9 Sorry! Can't talk now cuz i have to get on with the story! hee hee. I'll review at the end if I get there!!! |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 07:51 CDT
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Jadedbest, u didn't finish it! I gotta know what's gonna happen! Hurry!
-Bri |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Ah, finally! After a long wait i get to read this. I liked the Vegeta-gets-his-butt-kicked scene. Not in that he got his butt kicked, but in that it was done with such style i will anticipating 17's own butt-kicking.... i'm sure he'll get it one way or another. But will 18 reach her brother? Will Bulma give Frieza a headache? Will Nappa survive? Will Vegeta get to kill Frieza? Will Kakarott and his friends end up saving Bulma....
You are too impatient.... I got some of them up and am working on the rest... (sigh) They are coming out harder now....
Oh, don't kill me for the new story, eh? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shateera On: June 19, 2002 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv da fic because it's about Bulma bein a princess and everything and Raddish coming 2 get her from a planet etc.So, luv it and everything and can't wait 4 da next chappie! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 20:52 CDT
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hey!!!! i love this one...plz update faster
hm...it's shaping up very nicely...lol.so y'know just don't leave us hanging |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job JB. I like the fact that you made Krillin a leader. I know the guy is noseless and is about as tall as a barstool, but that doesn't mean that he doesn't have potential in some form or another. Also things don't look good for Vegeta and company and I hope that ship is able to withstand the assault. Oh btw, Cha put up 2 new chaps to DITH. If you haven't checked them out then do so cause they are A+. Update when you can. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey JB, great chapter as always, I just can't figure out how Krillen became ruler for life, I mean he's a nice guy, but a leader? Hope you update soon! |
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