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Title: Damaged Tears
Reviewed By: DamagedTears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
zomg...you mean i have to WAIT to see how this ends? oh the world is so cruel *cries* i can't wait to see what hhaappeennssss
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and Inuyasha are such BAKAs!!!!! They both need to stop blaming themselves every time something bad happens and trust in each other. It's the only way they are going to be strong enough to get poor Taro back. I love that kid BTW. Fantastic story...couldn't stop reading and I can't wait to see what happens next! p.s. When this is all over I think I'd say bag the feudal era and go live in the modern era!!!
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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 13:10 EDT
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Good read so far. Look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 01:17 EDT
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i like your story... very interesting... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 18:30 EDT
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and so you stop there because? man you gotta update fast. but you do have children so i can wait. i love your story, i read from chapter 1 to 19, stopping to let you know how annoying kagome is. update soon
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 22:17 EDT
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why must you make kagome such a wimpy, crybaby bitch who can't seem to get through her thick head that inuyasha loves her? and i know it happens in real life too, but the way she's acting is getting annoying. i would have knocked the shit out of her if i were her friend. inuyasha may not want to lay a hand on her, but if i were a character, i would have knocked some sense into her. great story by the way.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 15:04 EDT
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I started reading this story a long time ago, but never got past the first 2 chapters because I had my own new little bundle of joy to deal with and... *sigh* alas, family comes first. But now I have a little more free time of my own and I am able to get caught up on stories and even write stories of my own. I'm babbling... anyway, this is a real lovely story. Truly a joy to read. I can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww...this was such a sad yet cute chapter!! this is such a great story and i hope that you'll update soon
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 04:09 EDT
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I'm glad that they finally talked about what was bothering them!!!!!!!!!!! Glad that you updated and it's okay to live the normal life lolz!!!!! At least you cared to tell us ^____^ Can't wait to read what happens next ^-^
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awe.... so many problems come with love , as well as joy. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Im so happy for the update. As a mom of two little ones I totally understand. I'll be here waiting the next update!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It was so SAD (but not surprising) that Inuyasha and Kagome blamed themselves for Taro being taken. And it was also not surprising unfortunately that they misunderstood each other's signals. They love each other so much those two......but they still have so much to learn. And they are still so insecure in their relationship. It makes you want to cry sometime, it's so sad. That they would literally die for each other without question....but are sometimes afraid to simply SPEAK honestly with each other. They definitely have some more growing up to do. Now, I just hope that they find Taro soon. He's been with those twisted people much too long. And Inuyasha and Kagome deserve to really kick some butt after all this.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 01:53 EST
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Inuyasha, I doubt she blames you. She probably blames herself, I wouldn't blame you at all, I would hold myself responsible, believing I was too weak. Please update soon!!I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:27 EST
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I'm glad that Kagome is alright now even though Taro is still gone...still, good job with the story and I can't wait for more updates from you^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter......but sad. I'm glad that Kagome was revived without the use of Tenseiga, though. With what they have coming, she really needed that option open to her. But I am sad for she and Inuyasha. They love each other so much, but there seems to be a disconnect somewhere. The idealized vision Kagome had made of Inuyasha after her relations with her bastard of a husband were destined to fall back to Earth. But it is hard to watch. And poor little Taro. I really hope that they can get to him soon. I'll definitely be looking for the update.
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