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Reviewed By: Kyokie On: March 18, 2008 17:43 CDT
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I've never read a crosover before (this is my first) and I thought it was great! You did a great job with the story and there were some very hilarious parts. he next tme I read a crossover I hope it will be as good as yours! I don't think I could write a very good crossover. Syanora!-Kyokie
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Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. There is really nothing I can say I have alredy said. The only thing that came to mind was that not much was said about the kitten in the end. That is pretty much it.
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Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite chapter yet. The rules about mustang made me giggle. I loved the part with the kitten. I also enjoyed the club meeting/class. Basicly, I loved all of it.
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Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the snape part. I liked your idea of Ed teaching a club. I think you have done a wonderful job. I really can't think of anything negitive to say except I know the fic will end soon. sadness.
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Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are doing a good job. I have nothing new to add that I have not said. I like your writing style and this fic keeps my attention very well.
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Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It makes me laugh so much. Of all the crosses between HP and FMA this is the first to include Winry. I have been waiting for that to happen. Hehe.
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Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the first chapture. It kept my attention very well and it totaly surprized me. I love Al, but I love sadness too. I am absolutly going to read the rest of this fic.
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!!!! I love how you mixed FMA with Harry Potter! It really worked!
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 00:45 CDT
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Chapter 8 was really good because it explained all the theory really well. I like this story because it shows the difference between magic and alchemy. I like how it explains that alchemy has to be practiced and learned; you're not just born with the knowledge. I think that's one of the things that wizards and withes take for granted and don't really think about, which must unbearable for Ed. I mean he thinks about everything in a scientific way and is really smart and for him to see that just anybody can use magic without really thinking about it would make him understandably very...angry. Anyway it's a really good story! Man you can write!
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:16 CDT
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This absolutely the best fanfiction I've ever read!!!!!!!! I am not saying that to be nice either, it's true!!! I could never enjoy Harry Potter or FMA this much if they were by themselves and thats saying alot if you've ever seen me read Harry Potter!
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Title: (yay)
Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 22:46 CDT
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OMG!!!!! I was dying to write this! It's like if I don't write it the energy behind the words will burst out of my chest and kill me!!! OMG! I am such a Harry Potter fan it's actually a little sad. It's cool how they used a portkey to get to hogwarts. I think it's a little out-of-character for Dumbledore to warn the students that the military were trained to kill for 2 reasons: 1)Dumbledore would never allow anyone to be killed or fatally wounded deliberatly on hogwarts grounds, and 2)because I dought that anyone of those characters from FMA would try to hurt a child. On the upside, the style of writing is spot-on. I don't think I've seen anybody write so close to the Harry Potter style before. Also, the speech before the feast is pretty much exactly the way it was in the sixth book. You even put the phrase "tuck in" in there! Good job! I think you've got the Harry Potter thing down. Very satisfying, except for the part where you killed Al...But I guess I could forgive you for that; I mean it had to happen sometime right? I'm just glad that when it did Harry Potter was there to comfort me...(lol) Onto chapter three!!!(^_^) I'm sorry but I'm a Harry Potter freak so I have to say this: HARRY POTTER ROCKS!!!!!!!!! (couldn't help myself)
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Title: (!!!)
Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 22:24 CDT
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i just read the first chapter and before i continue i feel i must write this: HOW COULD YOU KILL AL?????????????????????????????????????????????????? I mean c'mon!!!! But you needn't worry...I'm not the kind of person that would throw anything worse than a video tape at you but you might wanna watch out for a few of my friends (lol!). Anyway, there's no more point in writing this as i've already said what I wanted you to read so without further complaints i shall read the next chapter...
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Title: Satisfied
Reviewed By: ~Wit On: August 13, 2007 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome end to an awesome story. a tiny bit rushed,though. Do you have a sequel in mind? gee, I wish that Harry, Hermione and Ron had come into contact with him a little bit more than that. I mean, they only saw each other a few times! I was mildly dissapointed that it had to end, but the ending phrase was wholly satisfying. Thank you for a good read to pass the time. ;)
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Reviewed By: Anime1girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. I hope you update the next chapter. I really can't wait for it.
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Reviewed By: ohscrewit WRITE MORE On: June 19, 2007 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh for the love of all things good in this world, a cliffhanger??!! PLEASE HURRY!!!!
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