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Reviewed By: greatstoryimeanwowsogood On: January 19, 2007 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story mate love it bunches!!! write more and i will give you a cookie.
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Reviewed By: feefee On: January 17, 2007 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but you take foever to update which annoys me immensly!!!
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Reviewed By: wownicestory On: January 01, 2007 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O CLIFFHANGER. I HATE CLIFFHANGERS. MORE. MORE. MORE!!!!!! lol sorry but if u don't hurry up i'll go insane. if i already haven't.
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Title: I love this fan fic! Keep going!!!
Reviewed By: TwilightSeraphim On: December 20, 2006 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, this is TwilightSeraphim. I love this fan fiction so please keep on going. Nice touch with Ed's short rants! I'm starting a FMA fan fiction as well. Once i post it on here, can you read it and review? Thanks and keep up the good work! P.S. I can't post until the story is finished, so i'll post it on this site or fanfiction.net. Hope that you like it! Sincerely, TwilightSeraphim
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Reviewed By: ChaosChiq [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome. Don't forget to add some hilarity to the Alchemy Club and I'm sure that another great chapter will ensue.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have officially undertaken the mission to find you... and hug you. You can't believe how happy I am that this fic was finally updated. Ed's reaction to the hedgehog/pincushion transfiguration was quite poignent. After all who are we to take the life of another simply because we can? Oh what fools these mortals be!
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Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 16:16 CST
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Update soon, this looks like a very promising fanfics. not like the other cliche harry potter and FMA crossovers. I was very pleased! keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: December 16, 2006 06:42 CST
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Oh my! Please update soon with the happenings of the club, this is a good fic^^
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 00:41 CST
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It's good to know that there was a good reason for the lack of updates. :3 I was beginning to think you'd forgotten! However, this chapter HAS to have been my favorite. Good luck with all of your projects and schoolwork! I hope to see another update from you soon!
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Avarwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, when I saw this fic I was thinking "Uh-oh, here we go, another Ed gets dropped into the Harry Potter world fic." But it wasn't. It actually has a fairly believable plot overall, not to mention for Ed going to that world. The characters are all brilliant, by the way! It's hard to get characters to stay in character for one fandom, but here you've got a bunch of mix and matched characters from two different fandoms and you've completely mastered their personalities. I loved Ed's reaction to the transfiguration-- I was just waiting for him to explode about something involving magic (that wasn't height-related), and I'm really pleased with the option you picked. I never even really thought about how he might connect it to Nina until you pointed it out. I was a little disappointed when I noticed how far apart the updates were, but that, so far, has been the only upset that I've found in this story. That, and you keep ENDING the chapters! I would finish reading one and couldn't get to the next one fast enough! : D Clearly the time you take between updates is good, though, because the quality of chapters has yet to falter even in the slightest. Still, can't wait for the next one to come out! : D
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Reviewed By: SparkieGoesHuzzah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:45 CST
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! When I saw that you updated I screamed and nearly peed myself! xD
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Reviewed By: paytotheorderof On: November 28, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! i love this story, and i just finished w/ 'Changes'. AGH I NEED MORE!Font Color
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Reviewed By: chopsuey On: November 20, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHHHHH FANTASTIC!!!!! please for the love of God right more!!!!
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: November 19, 2006 22:12 CST
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I know I'm probably going to get told where I can shove my idea, but wouldn't it be deliciously ironic if Voldemort's evil plan number whatever was thwarted by Ed, in such a manner that Al was brought back? Or if the sorcerer's stone was capable of bringing Al back? Maybe I'm just stuck on poor Al, but really, can you blame me? I'm going to hide now, before I get my ideas shoved somewhere unpleasant. Bye!
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: November 19, 2006 21:43 CST
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You killed Al? How could you? *hides in a corner and cries* I hope you will be bringing him back. I'll read more and find out.
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