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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 04:02 CDT
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First off, I would like to say that I squealed with happiness when I saw you updated; this was the very first HPFMA crossover that I ever read, and it consequently got me absolutely hooked on them (I retreated into my room and read for five days straight). xD This latest chapter was excellent, as always, and even though I was hoping for some more Malfoy vs. Ed, having Envy burst in during a lesson was great! I'll definately be sad to see this story end, but I'm sure you'll go out with a bang! Good luck with any writer's block!
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Reviewed By: ~Mari-chan~ On: June 12, 2007 11:58 CDT
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I can't say that I really saw it comming but I was hopeing that either Envy or Scar showed up, though I was wishing that they would do it in the Great Hall where everyone would be able to see the fight. I can't wait until the next chapter!! I absolutly love your style of writting!! Thank you so much for updating this fic, if you ever need anything then just simply ask.. Yours always, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: yaminorose On: June 11, 2007 21:42 CDT
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Wow, really didn't see that coming. I truly like your style of writing you have done a great job of combining to polar opposite stories while still sticking to the styles the authors intended. I'm truly sorry this is the last chapter, as there are very few well written FMA/HP crossovers, if you wouldn't mind rethinking a sequel, it would be apperciated. Okay, that's all I got
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Reviewed By: ChaosChiq [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 08:53 CDT
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Love the story, congrats on graduation, and I hope you do decide to update soon. Sorry in a rush but I had just enough time to read ;P
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 10:26 CDT
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Once again, totally worth the wait. Ed's musings on the equivalency of magic were particularly well thought out. I love your style and can safely say I'd read pretty much anything you'd write. The quote from MacBeth was an excellent addition too.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 23:26 CDT
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OMG this is possibly the best fic...Harry Potter or FMA that I have ever read!!! I can't wait to see what happens! PLEASE update this fic and don't leave it alone, I hate it when the best fics just stop for one reason or another. I will do anything you ask, just continue this fic... With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 21:45 CDT
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Quick correction: Edward is an officer (as opposed to enlisted personnel), he holds the rank of Major. Thus, to leave military service, he would have to "resign his commission" not "enlistment"
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 22:40 CDT
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I did pay attention to all of your A/N and am making this longer than ten words. As such, I am expecting you to update sooner than two months from now. I just found your story today and am pleased to say that I like your style and the story, it may not be long or romantic, but I find that if you are able to convey emotion without drabbling like a mindless fool it is a very good thing. It seems that you have a few missed words and a couple of spelling errors but I have definitely read worse (shudders at the memory). I loved the way you ended chapter eight, is the cat the color of Al's eyes? I don't know because I've read and seen it where his eyes (when he had his body) were gray or blue or golden or brown so I am really not sure. I need to stop now, or this will be the longest review I have ever left, and trust me that is long... So, faster updates gets you more reviews haha =)
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: March 17, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE GOOD CHAPTER!!!! please hurry up and update tho
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:52 CDT
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That was an awesome chapter! Totally the best one yet--and the ending was just too cute! x3
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Reviewed By: ChaosChiq [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I thought the ending was so cute! This is definately in my top 3 fave stories on this site, kepp writing!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely worth the wait. The rules were hilarious and the ending was perfect. I'm a little disappointed that you're planning on ending it after ten chapters when you've clearly given it enough potential to become an epic.
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!!! Is there anyone out there??? Is there any chance to get an update to this story anytime soon? I am going crazy waiting for it!!! Please upate soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: February 03, 2007 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WILL YOU FREAKING UPDATE ALREADY?! GOOD LORD
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 23:42 CST
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Heh. I was just rereading (AGAIN) and decided to drop another review for you. :3 Just thinking about how the next chapter is going to be gives me warm fuzzies inside. Hope everything's going okay, and I'll wait patiently (or as patiently as I can) for the next chapter. Good luck with writer's block, hope to see an update soon!
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