| "The Hearts of the Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: SammyJams On: February 18, 2017 08:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazing story! So sad it was abandoned.
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Reviewed By: myangelamy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have waited quite a while for this please don't make me wait that long again. the story is wonderful.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 19:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... glad that sesshoumaru & inuyasha are alive... and they have kagome with them... but the mating marks are gone and naraku has the jewel... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 20:02 PDT
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omfg i loved t update soon oh and happy Halloween XD
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you! but then again i love you for writing this story omg naraku! i hate the bastered kill him i thought midoriko like sesshomaru not naraku oh wait now i get it she's gonna betray naraku and kill him easy by making him think she wants him right? but anyway inuyasha and sesshomaru will they know about kagome sharing her soul and if so what will inuyasha and sesshomaru think? oh well keep going with the story i just read it today and i love it write more please ok thanx and oh yeah will kagome see her family again whatever happened to miroku and sango and i thought shippo was gonna get with rin oh and if you can can you make it so all of kagomes friends from the past come to her time and that her family is still alive oh yeah and if you do a sequal that would be sweet well seeya oh and don't forget write more bye!
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you! but then again i love you for writing this story omg naraku! i hate the bastered kill him i thought midoriko like sesshomaru not naraku oh wait now i get it she's gonna betray naraku and kill him easy by making him think she wants him right? but anyway inuyasha and sesshomaru will they know about kagome sharing her soul and if so what will inuyasha and sesshomaru think? oh well keep going with the story i just read it today and i love it write more please ok thanx and oh yeah will kagome see her family again whatever happened to miroku and sango and i thought shippo was gonna get with rin oh and if you can can you make it so all of kagomes friends from the past come to her time and that her family is still alive oh yeah and if you do a sequal that would be sweet well seeya oh and don't forget write more bye!
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you! but then again i love you for writing this story omg naraku! i hate the bastered kill him i thought midoriko like sesshomaru not naraku oh wait now i get it she's gonna betray naraku and kill him easy by making him think she wants him right? but anyway inuyasha and sesshomaru will they know about kagome sharing her soul and if so what will inuyasha and sesshomaru think? oh well keep going with the story i just read it today and i love it write more please ok thanx and oh yeah will kagome see her family again whatever happened to miroku and sango and i thought shippo was gonna get with rin oh and if you can can you make it so all of kagomes friends from the past come to her time and that her family is still alive oh yeah and if you do a sequal that would be sweet well seeya oh and don't forget write more bye!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [nsi] On: July 12, 2007 15:20 PDT
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Midoriko...did...WHAT!?!??!?!?!?!? Ohhhh jeeeeez this CAN'T be good!!!!! Can't wait for the update!!!!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK I am confused but I trust you. So please update....please.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story has it all! Kagome is actually mated to the 2 inu brothers and now Midoriko is controlling her body and goes to Naraku; not to mention the 2 inu's are losing their souls? This is a most excellent story and I have enjoyed reading it very much. I do hope you update again soon! I hope this story will have a happy ending with Kagome bearing pups with both of her mates and of course them being still alive.
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shaping up nicely. I find the two on one twist refreshing, who says love must be between two people? You do seem to be switching gears rather suddenly in a few places but only enough to make one say, "Huh....Oh Ok thats where she was heading." Instead of,"Huh...Uh WTF?" as in some other cases. I'm deffinatly enjoying the story though I look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 15:46 PDT
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P.S. I've been wondering -- this story started out with Kagome caring for a hanyou baby, right? I mean, wasn't that a big part of the plot? Where the heck is he?!!?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 15:42 PDT
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Very interesting, as always! I love the twists and turns. And we learned another unpleasant piece of Sesshoumaru's past. Wonder how his son died? And, once again, Kagome cannot be the first for her mates. *sigh* She can't even be the first to bear them a child. Heck, maybe Midoriko will have a better life with Naraku. At least she was HIS first love. LOL! And now Inu and Sess have both fallen under the spell of ANOTHER woman they think is beautiful?!!? Great day in the morning! I say Kagome should definitely let Midoriko keep the body and take her chances with Naraku -- maybe he'll be faithful. LOL! Seriously, are Inu and Sess the heroes of this piece or not? Because I am not impressed by their love for Kagome yet. But, I am SO very thankful that you brought out Midoriko and not Kikyou. (I'm already sick to death of the way Takahashi-san has turned kagome into nothing more than a vessel for Kikyou's power. Nothing she does or IS is because she's Kagome, anymore. I swear, Takahashi should change the name of the manga to "Kikyou." She's obviously fallen in love with her. Ooops! Sorry. I didn't mean to rant.) Anyway, it was great to see a new chapter for this story, and I can't wait for the next one!! You're doing a fabulous job!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 00:22 PDT
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Nice job! Kouga's sacrifice was SO sad! Beautifully-writtten. Nice that Sess was able to bring him back, but I hope Kagome is able to restore his legs to strength for him. Hmmm. Now I'm feeling REALLY sorry for Kagome. NEITHER of her mates loved her first. You're creating a disturbing past for Sess, with a dead mate. And Sess is acting cold towards her. Both of her mates slept with/MATED another woman -- Nakori, and now we find out both had previous loves, too. I'm sorry, but I think she should have chosen Kouga instead of these two faithless, flighty inus. She is definitely not getting the love and devotion she deserves from them. I DO like it that she might be pregnant. Um, why can't she purify the jewel? She hasn't lost her powers completely, has she? Because the poor girl needs SOMETHING! I liked how strong and capable she was in the beginning. Nice to see Kaede! This is a beautiful, wonderful story! I just hope you bring out more of her mates' love for her soon.
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Reviewed By: Sannah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO! Why did you have to kill Kouga now that he wasn't an insensitive jerk? But, other than that I love this story! Personally I like the Brothers and Kagome being together at once. Both of them seem right for her, and I wouldn't choose if I was her. Please hurry and update
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