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 Reviewed By: EternalDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2007 23:25 EST
Comment/Review:
I love Ryou/Yugi! Too bad it isn't actually that couple...I've been keeping up with this story since chapter 1. Please do finish it. I totally love the yugi is yami's servant stories :D :D
 Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2007 00:58 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That's hot =D. This story is very interesting and well written. I hope to see from you soon =D.
 Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2007 23:28 EST
Comment/Review:
there soo beautiful togeather..shame yami is so afraid of his fate *hugs* lookin forward to your next chapter!
 Title: AW3SOME!!
Reviewed By: animefairy [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2007 15:30 EST
Comment/Review:
that fanfiction was great! ^^ it's a long one but i love when i read it! Great job! i suck at writing comments! T.T
 Title: I'm not logged in right now
Reviewed By: HF308  On: February 02, 2007 22:40 EST
Comment/Review:
You're a little rusty, but it was a good lemon all the same! NYA~! Update soon!
 Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2007 17:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I hope you are feeling better. Those stomach viruses can be nasty.
 Reviewed By: tinkletimekelly  On: February 01, 2007 15:20 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter.
 Reviewed By: HentaiFan308 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 31, 2007 20:16 EST
Comment/Review:
*evil smirk* lemon coming up... kekeke... update soon! ANYAHAHA!
 Reviewed By: yamimylove(again xD)  On: January 23, 2007 18:00 EST
Comment/Review:
i'm like addicted to your story xD u just made my day i had a bad day (a sucky baaaaaaad day x( ) but this made it all so great n.n!! thank uuuu and i can't wait to the next chap i'm so happy yami finally accepted
 Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 23, 2007 11:43 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. As I said Yugi is a horny little devil. I think, Yami is not far behind though. Cute.
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2007 19:19 EST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Hersey Kisses are the best chocolate ever... that's all I have to say. Cya!
 Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2007 10:43 EST
Comment/Review:
I normally don't like youi stories, but there are always those few exceptions. I can't wait until you post the next chapter. On a side note: I hope your father's well.
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2007 19:38 EST
Comment/Review:
XD Who knew Yugi was a peeping tom? Although it was a little weird that he touched himself and Yami saw... *blush* Anyway, I'm really happy that Tea broke it off! Although I wouldn't of mind if Yami broke it off and Tea cried afterwards... anyway, cya!
 Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2007 01:03 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Yugi is a horny little devil, isn't he. Yami was just comforting him and then Yugi is trying to molest him. Poor Yami so unsure of himself and his sexuality now.
 Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2007 23:41 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter! Looking forward to your next chapter. Best of luck with everything.
 Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2007 08:25 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I hope that wasn't Yami slapping Yugi for kissing him. Yami still thinks he's straight. Then why can't he settle on one girl at least for a little while. Good luck with your classes.
 Title: SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2007 02:23 EST
Comment/Review:
*currently squealing like a little girl, jumping up and downmaaking as little noise as possible* I LOVE your new chapter! I just LOVE it! So the next update is in 10 days? I can live with that... as long as Yugi and Yami get together in the end ^-^
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 03, 2007 21:55 EST
Comment/Review:
Yes, the first kiss! Although that "smack" might of been uncalled for on Yami's part... >.< How dare he hit Yugi-chan! Anyway, update soon, k? Cya.
 Title: SMACK!
Reviewed By: Aislynn G. (bein' lazy)  On: January 03, 2007 17:57 EST
Comment/Review:
I winced when I read that last word -- SMACK! In all-caps and bold to boot. Owwww.... I tell you what. I hope Yami gets what's coming to him! I hope when he finally does fall for Yugi, that Yugi gives him HECK for that smack! Now my dander's all up and ruffled...
 Reviewed By: yamimylove(to lazy to log on xD)  On: January 03, 2007 16:24 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
eeeeeeep!! i loved the thunder thingy! it kinda make me think of ouran host club lol but i love this chap! poor yugi, he has 4 months to live and yami smacks him xD lol keep it up i can't wait for jan 13 >.
 Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in  On: December 22, 2006 01:41 EST
Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE! The first one to die always dies first. YUGI HAS 4 MONTHS TO LIVE! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Nice twist you put on the plot! I can barely WAIT 2 more weeks!
 Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2006 08:54 EST
Comment/Review:
Poor Yuugi, only four months to live. I hope Yami does save him. Good chapter. Have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!
 Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 17, 2006 01:02 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
GOBBLE GOBBLE! (I have no idea why but I had this sudden impulse to type that...) YAAAAAAAAAY! I LOVE your new chappy! *cyber hugz* YamiYugi RULZ! And congradjulations on getting married! ALL 10's!
 Title: 8)
Reviewed By: pequena [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2006 22:32 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story hope you write more soon!!!
 Title: squeee!
Reviewed By: furubafmanarutohngfan (not logged in)  On: December 14, 2006 18:55 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOOO I CANT WAIT FOR TEH NEXT CHAPTER I'LL BE WAITING FOR WHEN IT HAPPENS! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS FIC!
 Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2006 16:48 EST
Comment/Review:
i luv the newest chapter so far. keep on updating pleaze!! and congradulations on your engagement.
 Reviewed By: Tasa [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2006 07:04 EST
Comment/Review:
I loved the update! I can't wait to see what comes next. And how did Ancient Yuugi keep yugi awake? @_@
 Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2006 02:20 EST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Yami is still in denial. Poor Yuugi is left hanging. Good work. Congratulations on your engagement.
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 10, 2006 20:04 EST
Comment/Review:
>.> Yami as a soccer player? I dunno, that doesn't seem right... and him trying to date Tea is wrong! *coughs* sorry, I still don't like her... Anyway, I feel bad for Yugi-kun, his true love doesn't know he's his true love! T_T There's nothing sadder... anyway, cya!
 Title: O_O
Reviewed By: furubafmanarutohngfan(not logged in)  On: November 25, 2006 11:57 EST
Comment/Review:
omg omg omg i cant wait for thenext update poor yugi i fell so bad for him *sobsob*
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