| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 08:38 EDT
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I think this was really good. I'm glad yugi went back. I also gald he got his revenge, finally. Atemu declared his love so maybe now Yugi will comprehend what he has been feeling.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono-baka-deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai On: June 03, 2006 23:26 EDT
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Thwart (is that a word?) Yami.....I love this story...and am looking forward to the next update...you make me envious on how you can write such a fantastic story....hope your transcripts arrived to the right college on time and do not worry you will have a blast at your NEW college....catti
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 11:37 EDT
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Pretty good story, I like it a lot. I especially like how Yugi's going back to Atemu, it's so sweet. Cya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 13:19 EDT
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Great chapter. Yugi is still not sure of his feelings but I think it will come to him soon. It would help if Atemu could control himself a little better. He's much too emotional when it comes to Yugi. I know it's cause he cares but you can't force love. It just happens. See you next week!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:17 EDT
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wow love the new chapters!! good luck with the newest ones!!!
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Reviewed By: kirbyhavard On: May 17, 2006 16:53 EDT
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this is really good please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: May 16, 2006 16:07 EDT
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please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far, and I wish you luck on your finals!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 10:22 EDT
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I hope Yugi can do something about that asp! I thought maybe the Pharaoh would pass out on top of Yugi, but his way is so much better. Too bad Yugi is still denying his feelings. Good chapter. Good luck with your exams!
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Title: *thumbs up*
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was quick thinking for Yugi's part; The Pharaoh would probably try to kill himself if he realized what he had done if he didn't. Good luck on your finals!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 01:37 EDT
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This was fun. Good luck on your finals. I just finished mine, thank goodness.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:35 EDT
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Nicely written, well plotted. I hope to read more of this soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 02:00 EDT
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I see Malik's little stunt was a little of both. I was wondering if she was supposed to be Rebecca. Atemu should have talked to Yugi before getting drunk, I hope no one gets hurt. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this new chapter am Im glad you updated!! Thanks for telling when the next update will be, most of the authors don't do that. Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 03:40 EDT
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So Malik was the one to try to kidnap Yugi. I wonder did he do it to help Yugi or to hurt the Pharaoh? Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: BabygrilKagome1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good now I could not belive the Pharoh did that to Malik (my boy)but very well done.cant wait tell ya finish.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Dang...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Malik. I guess the Pharaoh didn't know that no means no. He lost two good friends and the loyalty and respect of someone close to him. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: bunny453 On: March 24, 2006 23:21 EST
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: If I only had a friend
Reviewed By: sexliesvideotapes On: February 10, 2006 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was quite excited that you had updated this story...I was afraid it was back shelved and would never had an ending...It has been a month now and I hope that you will update this wonderfully written story....arigatou for a great story...
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Reviewed By: bunny453 On: February 05, 2006 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Damn That Seto...Poor Yugi
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrr...damn that Seto...o dear, I wonder what would become of the pair now? Please update soon! ^.^
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Title: Awesomid!! >
Reviewed By: Kyo_Slave On: January 10, 2006 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I really hope that you write more....and hopefully later on the Yugi will trust the pharoa(cant psell) enough to sleep lol...please update soon!!!!
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Title: this is great!!
Reviewed By: Broken_Angel_Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I really love this story so far! your doing great and I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 02:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. I think that Yugi is very brave but he still needs to think before he acts. Atem is showing his trust in Yugi he's allowing m=him to see his weaknesses. Great story. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Jo On: December 27, 2005 21:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is so cute I hope you up date moe and soon. I hope yugi's life is now hopeful. I also hope in your story that Yami and Yugi becomes friends or more it up to you how this story is made. I just hope you up date and soon.
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: Jean is Jhoney On: December 27, 2005 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL XD I can't believe Yugi's slave name was "Rooster" This is a pretty cute story. Update soon yes?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At least they will all be reborn again. You left Yugi with basically no friends to help him, but he is a strong person and I know he will win over the king. This is really wonderful. Happy Holidays.
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Reviewed By: redconvoy1 On: December 24, 2005 21:58 EST
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You did NOT just say you got a writer's block on Awakenings! I was enjoying that, but I like this even better. You better write more soon!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far, I hope you get your interst in Awakening back, after you finish this. It is really good. Don't let bad reviewers get you down. I like the way Jounouchi is still protecting Yugi or did protect him in the past. Update soon,please.
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