| "My Slave for All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: ROAR! On: June 17, 2006 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I WAS JUST GETTING HORNY! >=O I HATE YOU AUTHOR!!! .... no no i dont hate you ;__; i love you and your writing. -bows- ALL HAIL THE GREAT AUTHOR ... BUT WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH THIS BURNING PASSION INSIDE OF ME!?!?! >=O
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 16:17 EDT
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Argh! The whole cult thing of Marik makes me so freaking mad... especially the maidservants!! Raping the maidservants like they belong to him is not right! Although I guess they kinda do belong to him mentally... Anyway, cya, try not to go over your deadline.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 15:08 EDT
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Good chapter. I hope Marik doesn't find out that the baby is still alive. Marik seems to be using his position the way men ( and some women) have been for ages. I wonder if Anzu is really pregnant. Marik doesn't deserve to have any children.
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Reviewed By: kirbyhavard On: June 11, 2006 22:33 EDT
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love the newest chapter good luck on the other ones!!!
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Title: *at the edge of seat*
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Now it's getting tense! Please update before I go nuts. @.@
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 23:05 EDT
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Hm, this brings back memories of when Malik was mind-controlling Anzu... anyway, good fluffy moment, I liked it. And I'm kinda excited to see the lemon, it's been a while since I've read any Y/YY ones. Cya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 16:23 EDT
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Good chapter. Anzu is evil now or completely brainwashed. I can't beleive she would kill her own daughter just because she is a girl! I know it happens I still can't believe it. I hope she has another girl.
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Title: Review? O_o
Reviewed By: Sabre Black On: June 10, 2006 15:14 EDT
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>___< MARIK YOU SONUVA *insert long strong of profanity*!! I'LL KILL 'IM!!!! *runs off* Cain: Uhh... -_- She wanted to say, "Aww, They finally are gonna hook up ^.^" But... Me: *comes back with bloody dagger* ^.^ Anyway, the last part was super cute, and I can't WAIT till they finally get together. Excellent work! *Locks myself in my padded room to await the Next update*
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Title: Review? O_o
Reviewed By: Sabre Black On: June 05, 2006 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAHHHHH!!!!THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!! *ahem* Seriously though, That little scene was so pretteh, I almost melted. But I decided not to cause this happens to be a carpeted floor and it's hard to clean myself off of it. x_X *thwacks Yugi on the head* Hurry up already!! Anyway, I LOVE this fic! looking very much forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: June 05, 2006 14:22 EDT
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LOVE THE NEWEST CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT FOR FUTURE ONES!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 08:38 EDT
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I think this was really good. I'm glad yugi went back. I also gald he got his revenge, finally. Atemu declared his love so maybe now Yugi will comprehend what he has been feeling.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono-baka-deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai On: June 03, 2006 23:26 EDT
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Thwart (is that a word?) Yami.....I love this story...and am looking forward to the next update...you make me envious on how you can write such a fantastic story....hope your transcripts arrived to the right college on time and do not worry you will have a blast at your NEW college....catti
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 11:37 EDT
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Pretty good story, I like it a lot. I especially like how Yugi's going back to Atemu, it's so sweet. Cya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 13:19 EDT
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Great chapter. Yugi is still not sure of his feelings but I think it will come to him soon. It would help if Atemu could control himself a little better. He's much too emotional when it comes to Yugi. I know it's cause he cares but you can't force love. It just happens. See you next week!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:17 EDT
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wow love the new chapters!! good luck with the newest ones!!!
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