| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: RFox On: March 21, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the originality of this story. I wish there were more chapters for me to read. I enjoyed it so much. You really know how to build up the readers anticipation. And what happened to Ed when the girl's memory of him was erased, I really felt sad for him. Poor guy. However, there is only two teeny little things I have to address. There are just a handful of spelling errors and a few grammer overlooks(errors) ^^; Other than that, this is one of the better stories on Fullmetal Alchemist. ^_^ I'm eagered to read more from you and I really can't wait.
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Title: Ta-chan
Reviewed By: yamikitsune1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah~~~ I love it the changing of the point of view was awesome! You really know how to keep Edward in character thats another reason why you & your F.F totally rOx.And the flash backs from when we first met >.< I really loved the lake part haha__ b-but you..you left it at a cliff-hanger again, must you break my heart when you end every chapter heh I'm just kidding but I really WAS crying at the end of the chapter please please please please update!!! I love your F.F soo- much its the only thing that cheers me up everyday when I come home from school,so please update & as always your doing a great job keep it up ^_^ From one of your many fans- Ta-chan
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so cool! You updated twice during the whole spring break! Loved the cliff hanger even though I hated it for...well being a cliff hanger. Update quick because...just because!
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Reviewed By: Riks On: March 19, 2006 23:49 CST
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Aww... Poor Edo... -huggles Ed- I can't believe you'd torture him like this, you evil, evil person. >/ Bah. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 17, 2006 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww.....Poor Edo-kun.....He's really depressed... Hope ya update soon!!!!!
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Title: Oh my God!! o_o;;
Reviewed By: Riks On: March 16, 2006 16:15 CST
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OH MY GOD!! I can't belive you... Why Ed??! My poor Ed... ;-; I can't imagine how bad he must feel... He must dead. Or atleast close to it. > O;; Poor, poor Ed...
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Reviewed By: queen of magicians [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 15:17 CST
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You better update soon. This is such a good story... I almost cried a few times. She has no memory. cruel cruel equivelent exchange. anyways awsome story, and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: carpadiem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just couldn't hold it back...I LOVE your story! Ch. 10 is great! and oh-so sad:( But it's amazing all the same! Well keep on writing! Whatever you write, i'll read and review!
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Title: YAY! 70 reviews
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: March 14, 2006 17:37 CST
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Why why why why why,normally I can stand a cliff hanger but you managed to get me to a point that I almost cried that it ended.I-I never saw it comming its just so- *on the verge of tears* I even went as far as to print it out 7 o'clock in the morning just so I can read it again at school ^.^ Pleaaase update I can't take the suspense any more
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Reviewed By: the brilliant dance x On: March 13, 2006 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh nooo! T_T I lost my memory of Ed! NOOOOO!! T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T No more kissing and hugging T_T T_T T_T Ahh I wasn't expecting that to happen! I wonder why I only forgot about Ed....aw, he must be heartbroken! T_T Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 13, 2006 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn the Equivalent Exchange!!!!! Anyway, that was an amazingly great chapter!!!! I hope ya update soon!!!!
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Title: *sniff* *Sniff*
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! Why?! WHY?! Did you have to end it right there?! It was so GOOD!!! (and have you noticed that when you update...we review after?) BECAUSE ITS THE BEST IVE READ!!!! Please take your time on the next one so that it is better than the next!! ^.^ (this one was so AWSOME though)
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Title: WOAH! ^_^
Reviewed By: OpenWounds [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Stupid equivalent exhange! Anyway great chapter this story is totally cool!!!!! ME want more Update sooon!
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Reviewed By: Soruka On: March 12, 2006 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO SAD!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I can't wait! I always count down the days until you update! Please continue!
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