| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Riks On: March 09, 2006 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DDx Me again!! ^ ^; AUGH!! You MUST update soon!!! @_@;; Eeeek... v v;; I LOVE IT!! I'm gonna diiieeeee if you don't... -whimpers- Review, that is. > >;; And I'm insanely hyper right now... Wow... >
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Title: ^_*
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: March 09, 2006 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm honestly at a lost of words here.I just don't know what to write,what can I write?! Your F.F just leaves me speechless,its the best F.F ever,I'm probaly repeating myself but its true I love your F.F & so do alot of others Full metal alchemist otakus!I showed 1 of me friends at school & as soon as she read the 1st chapter she was in love w/ this F.F just like me,so now everyday at school when we see each other we ask the same question "DID SHE UPDATE?!" & at lunch or during class we sneak on the computer just to read your F.F to see what's happening between Ed & reader! You sure have alot of fans now must feel great doesn't it soon you'll have over 100 reviews keep up the great work you rOx!!
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Reviewed By: the brilliant dance x On: March 08, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-is practically bouncing off the walls- Oh. My. Gosh. I love the new plot twist XD I read the letter and I was like HOLY %&%^!!!!! Where do you come up with all these ideas? They are wonderful! I can't wait to see where you go with this.... if 'I' die in the end, I seriously wouldn't mind. It would make such a great -yet sad- ending...Yeah, I'm weird, I like angsty things... oh I can't wait for the next chapters! -fidgets anxiosuly- I seriously can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah, I had a question...Now what was it...Oh! This is techinically a reader insert, isn't it? Then how is it still on media miner since they banned them? I wanted to nominate your story for the featured stories thing....but I was afraid I would end up getting your story deleted because it's a reader insert...>.< Anyways, please update as soon as you can!!
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Title: Happy 60th!!
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm the 60th to review!! I hope your not being pressured to do this... Are you? I sometimes get the feeling that you want to get a fan fic complete as soon as possible to make your fans happy! But its tense work I know! (Ive done that too, but I died) I admire you for writing this wonderful story! I'm sorry for pressuring you but, PLEEEEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: carpadiem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying your story it's very exciting! The only thing is I sometimes find small spelling errors and things like that. I just thought I should tell you that it takes away from the overall story when I spot them. There were a couple in Ch.6 if you care to know. I really love your story, keep it coming!
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: Debke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_O oho that can't be good:s anyways update soon please^_^ i really love your story
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 06, 2006 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God, It's getting really exciting, since Thomas is back!!!!! You're killing me if you wouldn't continue soon, so UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: noooo
Reviewed By: Debke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
noooooooooo evil cliffieT.T please update soon this story is getting sooo good well erm except the whole thingy about the readers gonna die and stuff but still ^_^ i can't stop reading it please update soon !!! ^_^
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Title: DDx
Reviewed By: Riks On: March 03, 2006 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigod!! You're killing off your readers. Slowly and painfully, none-the-less. That's so evil...even though I'm probably gonna end up doing the same in one of my own fics... < /
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, you're going to leave it there?! This is getting so good and you leave it there....man...please update, you're making me throw a tantrum in front of my friend and she officially sees me for the freak I am! Just please update soon?
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Reviewed By: Chibka On: March 01, 2006 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wOOt! Loved it all (again). I got my one friends to read your fic finally, and they liked it, too. Now I don't get yelled at anymore for getting so absorbed. ^_^ Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Title: ARGGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: February 28, 2006 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn the EVIL CLIFFHANGER OF DOOM!!!!!!!!!!! YOU BETTER UPDATE, BECAUSE ITS GETTING GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, I'm finished....
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Title: AHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
ITS TOO GOOD TO HOLD ON!! Your story keeps slipping away everytime I finish it!!! You are SO good at this! (better than what I could do) You need ta write more! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! (i kno im crazy) -_-'
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Title: ^_______________________^
Reviewed By: Ta-Chan On: February 25, 2006 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another outstanding,prefect,wonderful,suspenseful,#1 fan Fiction *sniff,sniff*T-Thank you for writing such a great F.F I looove you!!Please,Please,PLEASE update >.< Especially now that the reader & Edward are finally in a relationship...*gasp* what will Winry-chan think?? -_- hmm anyway your the best & so is your F.F ^__^
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Reviewed By: Chibka On: February 24, 2006 12:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Another fantastic 2 chapters! update soon, please! :)
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