| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Open Wounds On: February 06, 2006 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHHHYYYYYYY!!!! DID YOU END IT LIKE THAT?!! I HATE EVIL CLIFFIES!!! UPDATE UPDATE!!! This story is off DA CHAIN!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf727 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 22:16 CST
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You still manage to keep the Full metal alchimst storyline the same(but with a interesting twist) & the characters still have their original personality (more or less) & you don't have many original characters either ^_^ you have almost everything that should belong in a fan fiction I know you can still make your fan fiction better then it already is,so good luck with your fan fiction
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Title: My heart!
Reviewed By: Phantom.Neko On: February 06, 2006 22:07 CST
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It was 11:30p.m & I was looking at full metal alchemist clips & a sudden thump in my heart told me to go check your F.F (its a silly habit of mine ever since you updated I check in occasionally)& I thought you haven't updated but when I saw that you did I clapped my hands over my mouth so my Mother wouldn't hear my scearms of joy!! Thanks for updating finally I have something to read during lunch at school!!Keep up the excellent job I love your F.F!!
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Title: Your the best
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: February 05, 2006 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You added Russ-kun & Fletcher-chan I LOVE YOU!! But I hope Edo & Fletcher-chan are gonna be allright,your a great writer I know you'll make it exciting,oh & it seems like Edo & the reader are getting closer...does that mean more romance *shoujo backround*...*cough* s-sorry I'm a hopeless romantic,but I hate it when in the first chapter Edo & the reader are already kissing.The 2nd reason out of 50 why I love your F.F is because a relationship grows between the reader & Edo & later on (hopefully) they admit their feelings (if Edo can swallow his pride long enough to admit he cares about & loves _____)But either way I know you'll end the F.F w/ a bang!! So until then UPDATE,UPDATE!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! From your fan *wo0t*
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: February 05, 2006 02:36 CST
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I kept checking up on this story to see if you updated and I'm so happy that you did!! I've got two chapters to read this morning!! Yay!! WoW! Loved the danger and action!! Definitely the best!! I'm so excited to know what's coming up next! I hope you update soon as well! I can't wait until the next chappie is up!!
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Title: Great Update!!!
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: February 03, 2006 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ed...Being poisoned by a chimera(is it? OMG!!! Fletcher's been kidnapped!!!! I Hope you update, cause I can't wait!!!!!!!
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Title: *starry eyes* I love it
Reviewed By: yamikitsune1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you sure this is your first Fic!?!? It seems as if you've been writing #1 fanfics for a while,your story defiantly tops any F.M.A fanfic I ever read or wrote!When I think this is gonna happen you take me by surpise & make it even better then I could have imagined (no seriously)I'ne shown this fanfic to at least 3 of my friends & its almost all I daydream about during school it roXs my nonexistent Socks!!!! Please,please,PLEASE update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MakiyuHimura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 19:39 CST
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Hurry up and update. I mean I know you just updated, but update again. I'm like so into this story I wait every afternoon to get on and check for updates. When I see one I literalyl yell YAY, and with a couple of weird looks from my family, I start reading almost instantly. Your a great writer and an idol to me like another friend of mine. So keep up the good work and don't change a thing because the story is perfect the way it is. It's the best story ever.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: January 30, 2006 03:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT UPDATE!!!!! Your story's getting more interesting every time you update, so continue soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! (again) You updated!! I really love this story; I really want you to continue!! Please?! This story is going really well, I only wish I could write this well...
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Title: I love you & your fanfiction!!!
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: January 29, 2006 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR THE BEST!!& as proof of that you have 2 adoring fans Ddargonfly & me.Every time you update I scearm w/ joy *sweatdrop* it's kinda of silly,but I just become so thrilled because you wrote more of this absolutely wonderful story *shoujo eyes* I'm sure you've been told this over a 1,000 times but your fanfiction is the best Full metal alchemist fanfiction that I've ever read!!!please UPDATE keep up the GREAT JOB!! Don't change it because its the way it is.Can't wait I (REALLY) can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: January 29, 2006 04:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gonna say this again and again.. this is the best Self-Insertion I've ever read!! (Not like there's many anyway). I'm so happy that you've updated!! Yay!! Loved it, loved it, loved it!! Enjoyed all the action scenes and all the angst as well!! You write very well in a first person's point of view. The story *really* made me feel as if I'm in it!! I can't WAIT for the next chapter and I hope it's a faster update!! QUICK!! WRITE UP NEXT CHAPTER!! UPDATE!!!!! YOU ROCK!!! xx
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Title: Thanks for the update
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: January 26, 2006 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always you write the best, my heart jumped when I saw you updated I've been checking ever since chapter 11 I so HAPPY please please please update! Your fanfiction just keeps on getting more & more interesting by the hour!! I love it
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: January 26, 2006 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK GOODNESS YOU UPDATED!!! I WAS DYING OF EXCITEMENT ON WHAT WOULD HAPPEN!!!!!(oops, sorry if the caps on) Anyway,UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OpenWounds On: January 25, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUrry and UPDATE!! ME WANT MORE!!!!
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