| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: January 23, 2006 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oooh!! Suspenseful! AND HOW COULD YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAT!!!! JUST AS IT GOT SO DAMN GOOD!! *cries* .. anyway! Awesome chapter! Never knew that it was coming! Absolutely love this story to bits. Everything just fits and works well. You should congratulate yourself on this marvellous, successively enjoyable story 'cos I am loving it with every new chapter!! I love all that thrilling action scenes! I hope you update very, very soon! Keep it up!! xX
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Title: I'm your newest fan
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: January 22, 2006 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fan fiction it had me on the egde of my seat on numerous chapters please keep up the good & hard work you put in you fan fiction don't change it,its perfect the way it is & I'll most defintly enjoy reading the rest good luck
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Reviewed By: I'm a human On: January 21, 2006 03:15 CST
Comment/Review:
The story's getting better and better!! Please continue!!!
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Title: Oh.My.God.
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: January 20, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASEOHPLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Title: *tears of joy*I found the fic.
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: January 20, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found one of the FMA Fic. I read this fic. on fan works & insantly fell in love w/ this story please keep up the good work I can't wait!!
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Title: CLIFFHANGER!!!
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: January 18, 2006 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!! A cliffie!!! Please update sooner,cause it's driving me insane just to think what'll happen next!!
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: January 16, 2006 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll have to keep this short. You'd BETTER update sooner or later.. I HAVE to find out what happens. It isn't like other fics that the reader does something wrong that caused the Elric brothers to hate them ... and I am telling you this has got to be a PROPER self-insertion fic because the qualities are there, it's not overdone, it's at the right levels and tha action and mystery are worthwhile reading.. Yeah.. so pls update soon!! xx
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: January 15, 2006 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! It's getting more and more exciting!!! UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: January 13, 2006 05:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whooo!! You updated!! Yay! Again another cool chapter. I have to say this is one well-written 'discovery' chapter. It's not too overdone, it's just as good, and I'm impatient to read more of this story!!! I hope you continue it again and also more faster updates!! I always pop in the FMA section to check if you posted the latest chapter.. and I'm glad that when I checked it today.. that you did!! Yayyy!!!! Please put the next chapter up ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: January 08, 2006 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey!!! You updated! Yay!! Can't wait for more of this fic! It's so, so coooooll!! Again, this is one action-y and enjoyable fic. I think you should give yourself a good pat in the back for the creativity- it's marvelous. I love how you used the Reader's last name thing (you get what I mean so I don't have to babble on) and I think the whole opening dimension portals with the Philosopher's Stone thing was a brilliant idea and it fits very well I think! Sooo ... are you gonna update soon? Hope you do. It'll be nice to see a new chapter added and more secrets unfolded next chapter. Alright! I'll pop in to see if you updated again! Like before!! Awesome fic and keep up the good writing and the great ideas going!!!! xx
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Title: Awesome fic!
Reviewed By: lunar alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fic! It's packed with everything I wanted inside a good fic. Can you R&R mine? It's called the "Ask Ed" Program. It's where you review your questions to me and Edward Elric will answer them. I have to update the questions and answers, though. Please update your fic! It was so good!
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Title: Nice Story!
Reviewed By: lolly99 On: January 07, 2006 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fanfic I read and I think it's great!!! Please update!!
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Title: Uber fantastic
Reviewed By: Brown Toffee On: January 04, 2006 07:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ddragonfly On: January 04, 2006 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wh00t!! What a story!! I've never read a self-insertion fic with a lotta action as yours!! Your ideas are cool by the way! I enjoyed the story a lot would you believe it - anyways, I hope you'd be able to continue writing this story. And also update as soon as possible as well!! Letsee .. I'll have to pop in every two days to see if you updated .. and I hope you really do!! Actually, it IS really hard to find good self-insertion fics. I'm guessing this is a readerxEd, right? Like most are anyway. I'm glad you made Ed in character and the fluffy scenes here and there. Just can't stand those fics where we get to kiss Ed too early! ^-^ Although it's not that I'm complaining.. Eddy's GORGEOUS and all .. heh heh.. anyway .. great job with your very actiony fic. Will there be any reader x other characters as a side pairing or just readerxEd? Just asking.. So ... update!!!! If you do, I'll write you another long review!! XD
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Title: YeAh!!
Reviewed By: I'm a human On: January 04, 2006 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE the story. Hope you post more soon!!!
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