| "When in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 10:14 CDT
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was that girl haley in the chap based of me?
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Title: Oh no! You do not get to end this without a sequel!!
Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:00 CDT
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They are finally reunited with their loves! Cool! I would hate to see this end! WAAAAHHH!!! I love this!!!!
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Title: Great.
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, their hearts do remember. Poor Atemu feeling so alone and depressed. Now that he has Yugi I hope that will change. Good chapter.
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Title: cries
Reviewed By: tania2273 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 14:00 CDT
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when are you going to update the fic. its been more than two weeks.... i'm crying right know... "sniff"
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 08:03 CDT
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God chapter. I feel bad that they had to separate, but hopefully they will meet again, soon.
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Title: sequel?
Reviewed By: sliders245 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 06:44 CDT
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I love this story and are you going to write sequel to when in egypt?
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 00:35 CDT
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OK I admit it I cried....It was well written I only hope that things work out well for the four of them... *sniff* Someone pass the tissues please.
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Reviewed By: yokihsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 23:59 CDT
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more? -looks hopeful-
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 21:25 CDT
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luv the new chapters!! is there more coming? r they gonna meet again in their time? i just can't wait!!
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Title: funny
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 19:26 CDT
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*giggles* they forgot there p.j's *chuckles* i forgot about them that what makes it so funny *dies of laughter*
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Yay there is more!!!*does the happy dance* that totally made my day i was sorta sad to think that was the end. But yay two more chapters. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was such a sweet chapter. lol i love your lil beginning and ending thing...you know you could always take Ryou from him if he didnt give your book back XD i mean seriously who wouldnt take Ryou over a book any day? lol Keep up the great work i cant wait to read more of this wonderful story.
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:04 CDT
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this fic is almost over sooooo not fair *cries*
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 15:29 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad they finally got together and I hope Yugi doesn't go home at sunrise. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this!!!! I'm so happy they finally got together and I'm really glad you didn't do a 'wham-bam' type of thing but kept the feelings there...way to go! great keep it up. More please and soon ^_^
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