| "When in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Title: you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi great story...sorry i didn't review sonner....my baka of a brother claimed the computer before i could review...and it took me awhile to figure out how to review.....i'm writhing a fan fic myself but in this 1 there's a mana and atem parring...but i'll still make a seto and joey parring...i've only made 1 post but it's hard writing fics...and i'm trying to make a manga book....with my friend...my frist fan fic that i read was paper flowers,then alternate ending,then realizing,now when in egypt....i love the things you do with bakura and marik....and i like every time we touch too! have you heard of gaiaonline...cauuse that's the site i'm mostly on..if your a member my username is kitticat476...we could pm each other! and could you give me writing tips.....if you like i could give me email address..we could team up and create a really good fic...please.....post your answer on your next post of when in egypt if that's ok.....and i suggest you get mana and mahad in when i egypt they would really brighting up the fic...later and remmber please post your answer in your next post of when in egypt... hi great story...sorry i didn't review sonner....my baka of a brother claimed the computer before i could review...and it took me awhile to figure out how to review.....i'm writhing a fan fic myself but in this 1 there's a mana and atem parring...but i'll still make a seto and joey parring...i've only made 1 post but it's hard writing fics...and i'm trying to make a manga book....with my friend...my frist fan fic that i read was paper flowers,then alternate ending,then realizing,now when in egypt....i love the things you do with bakura and marik....and i like every time we touch too! have you heard of gaiaonline...cauuse that's the site i'm mostly on..if your a member my username is kitticat476...we could pm each other! and could you give me writing tips.....if you like i could give me email address..we could team up and create a really good fic...please.....post your answer on your next post of when in egypt if that's ok.....and i suggest you get mana and mahad in when i egypt they would really brighting up the fic...later and remmber please post your answer in your next post of when in egypt...
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Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 13:42 CDT
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Good plot! I've noticed your style improved from chapter-to-chapter. You might want to double-check your spell-checker though, found several misspelled words, but your meaning still came through. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!
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Reviewed By: Kastor354 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT IS GREAT!!!!!!!!! I love this story! Please keep writing! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 21:02 CDT
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moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoreMOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! -goes into fit-
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, good chappie! ^^ I know that song u were singing! it's every time we touch! I have that sonG! ^^
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 20:53 CDT
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@.@ so many odd endings. but then again that's what i like in a story. i wish i could write as well as you do. well, i hope the next chap comes up soon!
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Title: awwww =^-^=
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me? a fav reviewer! yay! this is getting good! (the ficcie) can't wait til the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Augh, i can't go on the laptop as much because my parents r getting cranky on like, u stay on too long so now u have to have permission and ya... it's getting harder... X_X this ficcie is going good! ^_^ well, at least I'll go on when i am not grounded anymore! (probably in a month... or so... X_X) *bangs head ageinst the wall* X____X (it's hard not to be able to go on the comp for a long time... maybe i have been on the laptop too long, cause i used to go on for like 4 hours, hehe!)
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: BabygrilKagome1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good. Really good. I love it so far. the mystery is what is wrong with the pharoh. This is awsome. Keep writen . sorry 4 the late R&R
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. I'm guessing that the story is slightly AU considering that Joey doesn't recognize that High Priest (Also known as Set) and Seto Kaiba look almost exactly alike. Oh well. I have a picture of Set if you want to see it, just email me or something if so. Can't wait 'til the next chapter, but I'll try. Ja ne! ^.^
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what's going on with the pharoah dissapearing and stuffs? omg, please update soon! *begs*
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Title: Like this story!
Reviewed By: xXDarkLightXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this, please countinue! Lol, Joey's having a hard time with Seto, lolz. (seto or seth ack) @_@ I tried to write a new story, but the chappies are short and I'm afraid that it isn't so good... augh... i didnt delete it though and i am still countinuing it.
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story~!!! You are a fabulous authoress! ^__^ I am very pleased~
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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PLEASE KEEO WRITTIN' YA CAN'T LEAVE US HANGIN' LIKE THAT!
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Reviewed By: Kome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ you must continue, i really want to see how this works out. Please update soon, i'm begging.
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