| "When in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as good a job as ever keep it up. your spelling is sliping slightly you should get a proff reader.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! loved the last two chapters....please keep it up....
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 00:49 CDT
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Good chapter. I like the way the relationship is developing between Yugi and Atemu.
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Title: nice chap
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job!
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Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I've got a slight guess of what Yugi needs to give to Atemu, but I'll keep reading! ;) *AxY lemon soon! AxY lemon soon!*
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 15:57 CDT
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luv the newest chapters!! please continue on!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 10:59 CDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad they admitted their feelings for each other. Joey and Seto will always argue. Glad the rains came and the Nile flooded as it's supposed to.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 10:31 CDT
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Great chapter. I hope yugi and Atemu can admit their feelings to each other and come to an understanding. I hope they meet in the present and both remember.
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Title: hm....
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 10:25 CDT
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sure i'll come in the next chapter! but for fun i'll bring all my pets! frist cat is moose his a boy and his the oldest thing in this house! but he still acts and looks young accept his a little hubby.... he has multicolored fur! and it's white, black, and brown whith a white nose! (his my room mate everyone loves moose!) next cat! mandy! she's a girl! and she has orange fur with a pink nose! (she's my favorite!)ext cat is trixie! she just has white and black fur with a pink nose! (she's a momento of grandma!)she could can jump to table to table! she act's like a tiger but is still sweet to people she know's!!!! (hint hint) you know marak and mid! but still there twins so i'll tell you how to tell the diffrence! midnight is sweet! she slightly weighs more than marak.... marak is really skiny! his very shy! he doesn't like company! but he can jump table to table to! (he's very fast!) but the kittens have diffrent eyes colors marak has dark green eyes mid night has light green! the kitten are never apart! now last but not least my dog qunnie! qunnie is a sweet heart! she loves everybody! she gets along with cats to!
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Title: ha!
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 20:37 CDT
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ok i'll turn marik back to normal but bakura will have to pay the price *holds up a maids outfit* ha ha ha!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:57 CDT
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luv the newest chapters can't wait for more!!
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Title: AHHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW come on now I know you are doing this on purpose!!!! thw suspense in killing me..... Great chapter by the way
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Title: grr
Reviewed By: mahado cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 10:07 CDT
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*casts a spell on marik* ha ha ha now marik is a kitten! a a white haired kitten! muhahahahaha!!!!!
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Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww come on you're doing this on purpose!!! talk about suspense *groan* love it keep it up!!!! Hey the pre and post chapter make good reading on their own....wanna make a story???
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i so love this fic!! i would have reviewed sooner but alas i have been banned from using any of the comps in my house lol. anyways keep up the good work!
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