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| "Chained" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: Chapter 66
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops, I don't think that I reviewed. Short chappie, but interesting. So, Inu can speak with the horses. I'm glad that they are willing to take them and I hope that they succeed. If I was Kagome, I sure would be tempted to stay in her time. I am anxious about how the journey will turn out. I'm really impressed with Sesshoumaru's attitude about this entire thing. He seems to be taking it quite well. Well, I hope that you are able to get another chappie out soon. But, don't take that as pressure. Feel free to email me if your need a sounding board in order to help you get the plot moving. Snow
| Title: Noooo.......
Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Where's the rest?! I NEED more!! (JK) seriously though, you can't just leave it that way! It's getting too good! (even if it is a little long ^_^) But i love ur writing. i love the way you make all of them seem so real...i wish i could write like u do. this is awesome! please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Lamb (formerly ....###.....####....###) On: June 01, 2006 17:23 CDT
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lol, don't worry about it! believe me, most of the people on this site are willing to give a LOT (sometimes too much in my opinion...) leeway for stories, and yours isn't REALLY soo bad. just a little, so it's nothing to concern yourself with, especially cause I think that all of your loyal readers will also be MORE than willing to give the needed leeway, and ignore any inaccuracies. :) hmm...I'd like to say another great chapter, but it was soo SHORT! *pouts* sigh, I guess I just have to suffer and wait for the next hopefully *coughs* LONGER chapter.... and just so you know I'm only joking, I really don't mind that your chapter was so short. A lot of people get really stressed out when someone says something like that, so, while you may have been able to tell that it was just a litte (very little) bit of humour, I just thought that I would take the extra step to ensure I wasn't pressuring you or anything....Oh boy, I think I'm babbling again....
| Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 12:54 CDT
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wow your back! Thought you fell off the face of the planet taking your story spinning skills with you. Glad your back! Hope you get some rest soon from your busy life, i cna understand that though, i jsut finished finals.
| Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: May 30, 2006 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, it's really late. I'm going to say, that was pretty good. Wanted to add a d word there, but lang. Anyway, I loved the new update. Good for Inu. Avoiding a fight. Hehehe. Also, ummm. I lost my train of thought. Tryst. LOL. :)
| Title: it's me again =)
Reviewed By: Leanne5582 =) On: May 16, 2006 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again.. AWESOME! I just wanted to give you one little sugestion. Since you kick arse and answer every ones review.. you might want to start doing a seperate chapter for the Author's Notes.. Just a thought... I'll actually go read the chapter now *smiles* lates
| Title: Chapter 47
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe that I reviewed this chapter, but I was reading back through the fic. This chapter brought tears to my eyes more than once. Inuyasha's suffering was raw and you made us feel his undeniable need for Sesshoumaru's comfort. The whines were what got me. *sniffles* It was comforting that Sesshoumaru gave in to Inuyasha's needs. All in all, well done. I do believe that you achieved your goal here. Snow
| Title: Chapter 65
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 23:15 CDT
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Oh, to answer your question about pavlov's response. He was a behavioral researcher and proved that you could train an animal to respond in specific ways to specific stimuli. So, what I was saying was that Naraku had so ingrained the desire to be subserviant into Inuyasha that he automatically behaves that way with one that he sees as more powerful than himself, one such creature being Sesshoumaru. A pavlovian response. We might call it a habit, but it is much stronger than that. Snowfall
| Title: Chapter 65
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha feels so guilty. I feel so sorry for him. And Kagome doesn't seem to know how to help him. It was very nice of Amaya to put a spell on the cloak for Kagome's protection. The description of the dagger was wonderful and it obviously has some hidden power. I am so worried about this trip and hope that Sesshoumaru follows them in order "to protect". I didn't get the significance of the thought that their father had Inuyasha in mind when he asked Sesshoumaru if he had someone to protect. I don't know if I could handle a big showdown before Kagome gets to see her family again. She does have a shard now, right? Okay, so you don't think that Sesshoumaru would care for a bazooka. How about a sniper rifle filled with bullets blessed by Miroku? Hehe. I can still see 'K'. Sesshoumaru should go and find SOMEthing that he would really be impressed by. I can see him smirking as he tosses a grenade without anyone seeing what he has done. Maybe Ji-chan...OMG! I can't give out the spoiler, but you know what Ji-chan has! Please send Sesshoumaru back to get it. Hehe, plus I want to see his reaction to a woman dressed in a bikini as she lays on the beach inside of the box in Kagome's living room. I can't imagine his reaction. LOL And mistaking the fire on the stove as a weapon. No one and nothing would be safe! LOL And then there is the tree that his brother was pinned to for fifty years, the brother that he didn't protect. Ah well. Enough musing. Chapter 65 was very nice. I liked the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. And if I didn't say so before, the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha was befitting how males would communicate. It was strange and beautiful. Great job. Snow
| Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 20:30 CDT
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such a sweet chapter and i love its simplicity. YNot much actually happens but you give the characters such life that it feels like a whole eon is happened. I can see it all painted inside my head...
| Reviewed By: ....###.....####....### On: May 09, 2006 19:32 CDT
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ooops! *is slightly embarrased* no I didn't realise you meant that as a joke - but no harm done. I actually did that once though - or almost. I started typing out all the ....####'s before I paused and took an actual look at what it was I was copying, and with a slap to my forhead realised what I was ACTUALLY supposed to do. XD lol well anyway, I am quite enjoying your story, although I must say that the whole inu/kag going back to her time is a little...hard to swallow. I mean I tottaly get WHY, I don't know if I personally could stand being away from my family for so long in such away etc. etc. But there are just sooo sooo (too many actually) risks, as well as the fact that they are going to be needed for the battle and need as much practice and training as possible. and what happens if they do manage to get back there, what then? I wonder if kagomes mother would 'allow' them to go back to fight this battle - or at least kagome.(I say 'allow' cause I'm not sure that if she did forbide it, that she could actually stop them from going back)Or Inuyasha might'n even try to keep her there to keep her safe. I dunno I just see a LOT of problems with it. Other than that, like I said, I am quite enjoying your story, and can't wait for more. :D P.S yes, I do listen to you...most of the time ;D but I guess I did miss that one in which you said that you were joking...unless perhaps it was merely a response to someone else's reveiw saying what I said, which since I haven't reall read any of the reviews, I wouldn't know that that's what you were talking about....eep I hope that made just the tiniest amount of sense. Also, I really like your choice of music :D (or most of it anyway)
| Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story yesterday, and it is REALLY good!! I must say, I'm impressed with the way you have portrayed Naraku. That seems like exactly the kind of thing he would have done. I think that Kikyou and Sesshoumaru were a little OOC, but such is what has to be done to keep a plot rolling smoothly. I am anxiously awaiting your next update! :D
| Reviewed By: ....###.....####....### On: May 06, 2006 22:12 CDT
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OI! I just left a review - most likely the one immedietly previous to this one - and in it I gave an example of how the ###'s and...'s formed the letter y, but you can't see it, as the site rearranged them XD so it was basically just a waste for me to have added that in my review and I hope that it didn't/doesn't cause you any confusion.
| Reviewed By: ....###.....####....### On: May 06, 2006 22:08 CDT
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I was just reading one of your authors notes, one of the ones mentioning how difficult it is to wite a review on this site because of al the ####.....#####.....'s you had to tyoe out, and (keeping in mind that I don't know if anyone else has already mentioned this to you or not) I figured I should write this and let you know that you're not actually supposed to write out all those ###'s and ...'s but the letters that the form..for example: ##....## .##..## ..#### ...## ...## ...## ...## is Y. I just really thought that maybe I should mention that to you, and hope that if someone else already has, or you figured it out that you won't be irritated by this. As for your story I am quite enjying it. and can't wait to read more :D
| Title: loved this chapter!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:32 CDT
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I have been away for awhile but am back now!! I absolutly LOVED this chapter. For the most part I don't like sess. but I really like how you moved his character but stuffed up to almost likable. Thank you!
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