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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 23:03 CDT
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Another dazzling chapter!!! Hehehe you have quitea following now!! I am curious to know how sess knew it too.. but then agia nhes pretty sharp maybe he jsut deduced it ne?
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Title: Hello. Double review....
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu/WinterMoon/Lalamoon On: May 04, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, well consider this a double review. Tryst: I liked this update. Rather troubling in some regards. But, that was a new switch on me. Rather than Sess getting intriguided with Kagome's world, he is put off by it. Hope Rin never get's dragged into the future... It my hurt his eyes when she gets back. LOL. Moon Girl: Cool. I hope to read a bit mre soon. Both: Update soon. Please? Tryst and Moon
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Title: Mind Control
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone accused you of stealing the mind control idea? Give me a break. That has been around since the dawn of time. I used Tokijin to control Sesshoumaru into attacking Inuyasha and I fully intend to use the idea in my next fic. After all, Naraku used a shard to control Kohaku's mind. Geeze, it's cannon. *rolls eyes* I also used King Oberon in a fic. People who didn't know their history accused me of stealing it from Tolkein. LOL Oberon has been around for centuries. He was a real bastard too. LOL Some people. Snow
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, all I could say is wow on those last chapters. And I don't get why do you hate Kagome I don't get why some people hate her? Well thats all I have to say, so keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahaha! Luke! I am your Father!! I'm okay... So I found you... It is I! Clouds of the SKY! under another alias on this lovely site!! Mahahahahaa! Finally I have discovered your wearabouts!!!! jk.
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Title: Chapter 63
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
63-Off to see the big bad demon. I sure hope that the consequences of them going there doesn't cause problems with Naraku. If it does, Amaya is not safe anymore. And I swear, if you kill her off, I"ll so totally flame you! I already like the picture of this demon character that you have drawn up. What kind of demon is it? I'll check back and see if you said before. Short chappie, but informative. Snow
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Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
62-LOL Miroku not groping Sango was a clear sign of the apocalypse. Good one. *sniffles* Inuyasha's eyes are so haunted. You really know how to make us curious, you know? And being subservient to Sesshoumaru is new. Is it a Pavlovian response or is it more than that? Inuyasha would have never accepted Sesshoumaru's protection before. Has he realized that he can't do it all alone? There is so much that we don't understand about Inuyasha right now. 'Kohaku'. Yes, I've used him as a reminder to the group in fics that I've written. Inuyasha defending Kagome's desire to go home was a wonderful turn around. So, next they have to get past Sesshoumaru. That might be a tough one. I don't think that he will let them go without him; not since he has become so protective of Inuyasha. Hm, hey! Maybe he could go through the well. That would be too cool. He could find weapons against Naraku. I guess all of that is a bit farfetched. But I could see him in battle fatigues with a bazooka hanging over his shoulder. Think: "K" from Gravitation. LOL Okay, a little more insanity for you. But, Kag's is going to be his sister-in-law. Maybe he should meet the family. Eh, I'm going to run out of room here. Again, great chapter. Snow
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Title: Chapter 61
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
61-I wonder why the captivity doesn't seem so far and away and distant to Inuyasha like it does to Kagome. Just what happened to Inuyasha? Are we ever going to find out? It was very thoughtful of Sesshoumaru to tell everyone not to question Inuyasha about anything. I think that is was good that everyone paired off so that they could recover before facing each other; keeping the pain level under control and re-enforcing relationships. The misunderstanding of Inuyasha's statement that they should be in bed was really cute. Him smelling her hair was so bittersweet. LOL Her long explanation about needing to go was done so funny. Almost a complete run on sentence. The way that you had him answer her was so angsty sweet and, of course, Inuyasha won't let her go alone. But, what will Sesshoumaru and Amaya say? That's going to be tough. And she told him that he was way more comfortable than any bed. And inside, he knew that he would never leave her again. How are his memories coming along? Maybe I'm just forgetting. Awesome chapter. A lot of interaction between the characters. Snow
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
60-That is great that Sesshoumaru is trying to drum up help from the group. I guess that whatever happened to Inuyasha really got to him. Bouts of silence causing suspicion. Don't I know about! That was too funny, but true. So, he is beginning to understand his father. Nice progression. Aw, Kag's and Inu play fighting. That was so cute. Oh wow! With Tensaiga's reaction to Sesshoumaru's thoughts, it's almost like his father is alive! Cool! Snow
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Title: Chapter 59
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
59-Hehe, Ayama's interactions with Kaede are quite amusing. Her thoughts are so sarcastic. Oh boy. I wonder just how Kaede is going to manage riding a fire horse. Hehe. Snow
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Title: Chapter 58
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
58-Kagome's condition is really sad and poor Inuyasha feels like he failed her. It isn't unlike him to be on a guilt trip. Poor guy feels responsible for everyone. And as always, Kagome tries to comfort him. Ooh, and belly butterfly kisses. Aw, he was given an excuse to take care of it. That was so sweet. It's going to take awhile for Kagome to get back on her feet, I guess. Snow
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Title: correction
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 01, 2006 09:28 CDT
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Opps! Discretion, not discetion.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 01, 2006 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I am late jumping on this train (your story.) I would like to say that I am really enjoying it. The chapters are shorter than most others; however, they are usually sharp and to the point, and your updates quick to appear. The only part that was awkward for me, was the OCC of Sesshoumaru, where his brother was sleeping on his chest. You know that we really want them to love each other, but it was hard for me to think that the boys would be this sensible, and lower their testerone levels this much. In your writing style, you waste no words. I think you are doing a great job! Want to also put my vote in on Kagome and InuYasha having a happy ending. I know this is at the discetion of the writer's direction of the storyline. Again, great job! Cynbad146
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:12 CDT
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sorry about not reviewing sooner! i was in the middle of one whe nthe power went out, by the time it came back on i had quite forgotten what i was doing!! Great chapters, i am excited to see where this little excursion of thiers leads. If i know you you have something up yoursleave and its probably devious.. but thats what i love, i love the not knowing, the twists and turns that keep me begging for more!! are you sure your not using some of amaya's mindspells on me? =P
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Title: really last thing..
Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:05 CDT
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Am I annoying you yet? Just wanted to say that I really liked the title of the one chapter.. "Sess's voice and kag's kiss" tee hee! (sorry if I got that a little off... later
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