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Title: Hehehe. New chapter?
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 12, 2006 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm a bit behind. Sorry. But I loved these last few chapters. Update again soon. Please.
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Title: Yo!!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 20:47 CDT
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oh no way!!! YOU'RE THE 'CHAINED'?! hahaha, *slaps forehead* silly me... I just left a review for 'Subjection, Subjugation'. Jeez, how lame can I get. I feel so incredibly stupid right now... I had no idea it was the same author... I saw "Chained" and I says to myself, "... oh c'mon..." But anybob: I still love this story and It seems like i haven't reviewed to it in a while! ^_^ LOVE IT! Though it's driving me insane that Kagome and InuYasha haven't met yet! And that Sesshoumaru too, kind of very OOC... but's that to be expected, it's your story right? You can do whatever you want with Sesshy! hahaha. If Amaya returned Miroku first(seeing as how he was a bit under-the-weather), and now she's planning on Sango too, meaning Shippou and Kirara might come along too... meaning after all of that, then maybe Kagome will come for the ride on them flaming demon horses Amaya seems so fond of?? Bah, who knows now though, right.... I mean, it's just a theory.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 18:55 CDT
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good chapter. Its interesting to see the friendship between miroku and inuyahsa, b/c in the series and even other fan fics its there but never in any great detail its jsut assumed. Its nice ot see the effort behind it! Good job and please do write about kagome and sango soon i am fearful for them.. hurry and rescue them (if thats your intention) *trys really hard not to be impatient*
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:57 CDT
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another awesome chapter!!! so much seems to hapen in so little chapter, but i like them jam packed full of good stuff!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 21:11 CDT
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wow no matter how hard i try to make the chapters last they just fly by!!! Great chapters as always.. but i ma curious, what was that thing that naraku promised to destroy should amaya betray him.. some orb if i remeber correctly... anway update soon! it will be my only sanity come finals in a month.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:50 CDT
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Sorry i haven't reviewed in a while ... but i am still reading your story just to let you know. It is like a bar of chocolate that i cant put down until i've finished it ... or something to that affect. (i like chocolate, but i also like cats too ... but thats beside the point. Now where was i, oh yeah) There are tons of other similes i could have used, but that was the most appealing to me. What i am trying to say is that i really love your story and can't wait for more updates and chapters and stuff like that. (i apologize for the stuff about the chocolate and cats ... i don't know where that came from ...) Well, just update soon. bye
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 06, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWW that was so cute an satisfying. I do not think they're gay! I think it was just a bunch of satisfying, brotherly bonding moments, so there! Thank you again for updating.......-Lady Orange P.S I think Kohaku will talk when he sees Sango!
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Reviewed By: candace On: April 05, 2006 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter *has to peel her face off the screen* I am ecited, i don't know what's going ot happen next but i can feel something big brewing and i love it! The jail break woot!! Inuyasha and kagome reunited at last, but then again you could always throw a loop in there so maybe they won't be lol i will just have to keep reading to find out.
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Title: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe. Cool. Now, what can I say... Hmm. I know. What's Kagura's perspective on all this? And where did the sorceress go? Hehehe. Naraku is close on his heels. But Sess is there to protect him. That's good. So, I'll be looking for more. And thanks. I should update sooner myself very soon. Though which one I'm not sure. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: candace On: April 04, 2006 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! You are na excellent writer. A sign of a godo writer is one that evokes emotions and strong imagesthrough their words and you do it so well! Write more soon cause ya know i can't have a good day unless I get a frix from my fav. fan-fin authoress!!!
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Title: Hello.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/ Tryst On: April 03, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated. That goes with out repeating. Now I'm wondering. What's going to happen next? Hmmm. I have so many questions but I don't know how to word them. But, I did read your authors note. Hehehe. You like Naraku. Thats good. Have you read Heart of a Thief? It's about Naraku's past as a kid... And him growing up. Plus, I thank you. Your fic helped to finish and update my own. Keep up the good work. And please don't stress. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: candace On: April 03, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the interaction between kikiyo and naraku were very well done. You seemed to capture thier essence very well thier attitudes and manipulations of one another. Great chapter!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 21:16 CDT
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*has ants in her pants* WOOO The moment I have been reading for is almost here!!!! *gets excited* Write more soon please?!!
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Title: happy to see update!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
You know most people take SOOOO LONG to update! I am glad to see a new chapter! BTW I did decide to sit back a little XD I mean who would look after all my kids if I fell and hurt myself! (to much work for my husband) ;) I like that sess and inu are getting along. I always thought that it was sad that they couldn't "just get along"!
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Title: Oye!
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/ Tryst On: March 31, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still getting a kick out of you fics. Though I think that you should know that you and mshutts are the authors that inspired me to write FHI and My Tryst's Sake fic. So, keep up the good job. By the way, I was surprised to say the least with your oc. She reminds me of another oc in a fic called unplanned. If you get a chance look it up. I'm hoping to see more soon. And if you do decide to invite daddy inu, let me know. Hehehe. The look on Naraku's face would be priceless. Plus there's that whole 'sit,boy' thing. And since naraku has lost inu, is he planning to use kagome or one of the others? And does Midioriko have a future in your fic....? Ummm. I'm a very big fan of the jewel priestess and Inutaisho...:) Okay. That's about all. Tryst/Punishment of the Inu.
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