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Reviewed By: Lunar Youkai On: April 26, 2006 12:08 CDT
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If you are going to have a feast scene right after they get broken by the sorceress, then remember that after a lond period of very little or no food. The stomach will seriously cramp and reject what they will have eaten. Unless it is eaten very slowly and thouroly. Just though you might want to use that in your next chap. I love the story, very good.
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Title: McSlave44
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 07:29 CDT
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I think this whole story is refreshing new idea. Just wow to you. I think my fav. part is when Sessy comforts Inuyasha through out the night. Aniother one is the angst I got when Inu was being "petted" like a dog by Naraku. The bastard. You can really put your readers into the shoes of the char. in your storys. I love it. The sorceress is an excellent person to have people move around. This is so good I am basically bouncing in my seat wanting to read the rest of your story. You are doing a really good job,scrap that. You are doing an excellent job and I can't wait for the next chap. But since I just spent like 3 hrs reading all the story and it is really really late......or really early I think I am off to bed. Quickly while I am asleep make another chap. spring forth from your imagination, so I can read it again in the morning. I just love it!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! I think I am sleep deprived.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 01:42 CDT
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Another awesome chapter!!! I am sorry to hear you weren't feeling well, i am glad you are better though! I am glad you liked my idea and you can use it any way you see fit weather for this story or not! Hope to see more updates soon!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, your story had definetly caught my interest. Although, I find this need to tell you that this story has alot of grammatical errors. I am by no means a proffessional english writter, nor is it my first language... but it's very obvious when the sentence is written correctly, yet some words have been misplaced. Anyways... Back to the story: Great stuff! Keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 18, 2006 13:50 CDT
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WHOA! I didn't realise that................I WAS THE EIGHTIETH REVIEWER!!!! I MADE 80 I MADE 80 I MADE 80 I MADE 80 and now it's eighty one! P.S. this is supposed to be sung in an annoying chant.
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 18, 2006 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The usuall rating of course! This was an eccellent update with all the satisfying touches that only the best of stories can bring. I'm willing to bet everything I hold dear, that this fic will get one hundred reveiws by the time it's done.........-Lady Orange.........P.S. I hope you are good at ending stories because somtimes I'll read a really good fanfic that has a very disjointed, badly constructed ending. Thank you.
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Title: i.............LUVER IT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kwelgurl On: April 17, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i could i would rate your story 100!!you are a great writer!!and the brotherly moments are seriously cool.i just have one thing to say....PLEASE CONTINUE!!if not my muse shaydee will come and force feed you chocolate covered carrots!!*not flame or threat*
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Title: You have nothing to worry about.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 17, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's pretty late so I'm gonna make this short. You got me wanting more. Again. So, now what? There's still that final fight with naraku... I hope Amaya will make it out okay. Well, thats all for now. Tryst.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:48 CDT
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OMG, OMG OMG!!! The moment I have been waiting 57 chapters for!!! Thier finally reunited!!! I cannot wait to see what coming next! I am sure you have plenty of ideas floating around that mind of yours! You always seem to throw us a curve ball when we least expect it.. so what is it? ohh I got a good idea.. maybe naraku suspects that someone might try and get kagome out so he plants a incarnation ro something in her, that lies dormant until she comes to sesshies place.. i dunno maybe its a dumb idea but hey maybe it will get your mental jucies flowing!! Your an amazing writer and I am always haning off every written word and feeling you convey! Keep it up!
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Title: YEAH
Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: April 16, 2006 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe how good this story has gotten over time. I can't wait for another chapter!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So many chapters! I was so glad that you got Kagome out too. Sango is such a loyal friend. That was a neat idea having Amaya create clones. Who is she going back to see? Naraku? *shudders* I am so glad that you gave some explanation of Sesshoumaru's change of heart. I've learned that I don't do that near as often as I should which makes my characters seem OOC. The reunion was so terribly sweet. And Inu and Kag's kissed! Oh yeah! And Inuyasha is no longer confused about Kikyou--bitch. Sesshoumaru's amusement was cute. Hehe. I'm sure that I've missed reviewing things, but I was just so excited at the progress of the fic. I can't believe that you put up so many chapters. I haven't been able to write hardly anything lately. Well, I hope that you have fun with whatever it is that you are doing. Snowfall
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Title: Fire
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 01:59 CDT
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Oh, I had been wanting to mention a little known fact. You had said that fire brought nothing back to life, however, there are certain plant seeds that will only sprout if first scorched by fire or heated by high temperatures. There is a little purple flower whose name I cannot remember. I saw a ton of them shoot up after a fire burned off the grass in a yard in my neighborhood. The same thing happened when Mount St. Helen's erupted. Some of the plant seeds that we buy in stores have been subjected to high temperatures so that they will sprout when we plant them. Pretty cool, huh? ^_^ Maybe Inuyasha will learn about that later, ne? The phoenix shall rise from the flames and our little hanyou will be stronger than ever! Erm, sorry, got a little excited there. LOL---Snow
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Title: Chapter 52
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I admit it, I've been a bad, bad reader for not reviewing more often. I'm drowning in a sea of angst and I love it. The whole scenario with Naraku with a tamed Inuyasha was very...titillating. Hehe. Call me a perv. You'd probably be right. Then there was Inuyasha's uncertainty after being rescued. You made me sympathize with him. I don't know how many characters are original or from further on in the series, but I like the sorceress all the same. I especially love the firehorses. Sesshoumaru is falling quickly to Inuyasha's vulnerability. Wow. So, was Inuyasha ordered to torture his friends and companions? Was that why he was so worried about their reactions toward him? Uh oh. Naraku is starting to worry which means that he will be on his guard and looking for anything out of place. Our sorceress better take care. I hope she is rewarded for all of her efforts though. I would hate for her to be killed off. She would be a great ally in battle. Perhaps her spells could throw the minions of the enemy into confusion. This is well written and has me intrigued. I don't usually begin to review a fic until I am certain that it will hold my interest. Your's has. I didn't get the last notify on an update or perhaps I missed it, but I decided to check and voila! There was another. I'm anxious to see what you will show us next. Great work.--Snow
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 22:14 CDT
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I love this story! it is sooooooo awesome! Im glad miroku was saved from certain death! thats a good thing. Kirara is so cute! I don't think i could picture Inuyasha singing ... but after what hes been through i can probably understand it. Naraku has becomed paranoid! Yay! I hope he dies b/c he's an evil meanie! lol. Well i think everyone hopes for his demise unless they are just weird like that and want him to live ... but ive yet to meet someone like that as of now. Well, just want to say that i love your story and to update soon!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 18:07 CDT
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OHHH! A peek into the mind of Naraku!!! A very rare view indeed!! Guess what totally off subject but eh! I bought my ticket for anime expo 2006!!! YAY! anyway great chapter, wish it was longer but then agian i am so busy i ma sorta glad its short cause then i know i have time to read it!
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