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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 › » ] | Reviewed By: CLipse On: November 07, 2007 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write Kikyo in this story. She's not too bitchy but not little ms perfect either. Nice balance. Was that Naraku at the end? Guess I'll find out next chapter. There were a few grammer errors here and there but overall it was nicely written. :)
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 07, 2007 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I was completely blindsided with the duo update! SWEET! *LOL* It was so funny 'cause when Kagome stopped Sango and said that Souta was not her moms child I instantly knew Kagome would say it was hers. At first I thought she was raped by her father but I was way off base with that one. I looooooved the chapters. It's hard finding fics where you never know what's gonna happen next and this one is definitly one. You did an amazing job for someone who was sick. :) Keep up the good work girlie!
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, omg, omg! souta! WOW that came outta left field. and her dad is an ASS, i hope he gets it in the end. love yash's brother!!! yay! cant wait to read more about him! great chapter!!!!! can't wait to read more!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun, Dun... Duuun! Oh yesh! The famous, or rather infamous, bro is on his way... shall we set up services now for Bank or sit on it a while longer, lol. :D And Kags isn't the only one with probs I see. Bad Kikyo, bad, hehe. Would still love to see Sha kick his ass tho, and then some, lol. Oh, and thanks much for a quick update, its awesome. Till next time... Update when ya can! ;)
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:30 PST
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OMG!!!!!!!!! O_O WOW and..... im speechless. fantastic, f__kin fantastic writing!!!!! i am going on to read the next chapter!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:06 PST
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Woooo, speedy update! My god, the Sota thing, I never would have guessed...sorry if I missed it, but I'm assuming Sota doesn't know, right? Damn....and the mysterious Kagejiro arriving, nice. And overall, lots of good set-up. But hm...something Sango thought got the wheels in my f-cked up little mind spinning like wild. Naraku. He's here, but you haven't done much with him, he just pops in now and then, but thus far he hasn't had any real bearing on the true plotline. I can't help but grab a baseball mitt and wait for the left-field curveball you're gonna chuck at us when his character inevitably takes center stage. He good, bad, what? You've made him into a real wildcard, and I can't wait to see him ger played. Anyway, now that I've blasted my tank of metaphors dry...oops, one left...I know somewhere in the back of my head there's a real good quote about darkness and evil and blahda blahda blah, but I can't find it. I'm gonna get back to ya, I know I got at least one more good quote in here somewhere, I'm gonna check in back beside the radiator. Anyway, chow, awesome chapter. Drake.
| Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY! Really fast updated! Man So much Drama in this Chapter i loved it soo much!! i Felt Like i was watching a soap opera loved it hehe.. cant wait till the next chapter!! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 19:44 PST
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oh man I'm so happy that inuyasha knows who everybody is, even if it is gonna make his life a lot harder (I'm selfish). Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one!
| Title: blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Astrid44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah.Bank finally got tha ass whoopin he deserved.I hope Inuyasha doesn't go to jail.that would really succ.Thanks for the update it has been a while.
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this update yesterday and i was so mad that i couldnt read it cuz i was out all day since we didnt have school XD BUT!... you really now how to make ppl happy! I thought for sure you might not of updated like roun christmas cuz it's been a while... but now i understand and this chapter was... O.O!! I cant decide if i should hate kikyou or love her! I mean the girl is like a freakin weather! She's folling kaggie, ne? And another thing! What's up with kaggie? Can she really be that much of an idiot?! I mean she puts herself behind others but it's her life dammit! I thought she would of figured out inuyasha to be sha... *sigh* Sha was so fucking hawt! I think i'm messed up but the site of an angry inuyasha is such a turn on; lol. He slick ways--like when he hugged kaggie roun the waist while avoiding kikyo's attention...it was so hawt! And who eva said that inu was slow? He figured out everything so easily... it was all amazing...and the best part about it, is that he's gonna follow kags 2night. So now he's risking his identity, among other shits. Isnt sessy more powerful than bank? or i mean it is THE sesshomaru we're talking about!! yesh it is... lol... kk am done babbling, but know that i so freakin' love this chapter n story ofcourse! I can only imagine what the other chapter will be like and am sure even then it'll surpass my imagination! *__* I hope all things are well with u.. .and sleep well! I know how little sleep can be *sigh* Ja!
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is getting so good! Kikyo isn't an idoit after all! Yay!!! I'm so excited about the next chapter. I can only imagine what's going on it that wicked, wicked head of yours. Thanks for the update!
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 02, 2007 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahoo! The bitch is back better than ever! *lol* Loved the chapter. It has been a long wait but this update was amazing! Kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what you post next time. :P
| Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter had my heart racing ten fold. It was so damn good and totally worth the wait. No explanations needed, life has a way of making us all busy. But I am so glad to see you back. I almost wanted to cry a couple of times while reading this chap. Kagome is seeing her life flashing before her eyes, and part of me while reading it started panicing with her. It was crazy...I kept asking myself 'what would I do?' Damn, Bank is nuts..but I can see how a girl would like to be dominated, there is some appeal in it. But to be beaten, that is just so scary. Part of me doesnt believe that Bank would go to the cops, there is just too much at stake, but threatening Kagome with it, he knows that will work. She always puts others first before herself. I wonder if Kikyou knows what is truly going on between Inu and Kagome. This story is very well thought out, and is so much fun to read. The drama......cant live without it. You take care! Neddi
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, even tho I actually like Bank as a character, you can really make him a truly evil one, lol. Loved as the scene unfolded on what was what between them all. Now they all know. And tho Bank got the beating of life, can almost bet money on it'll be nothing to what lay in store for him. Nope, don't see Inu lettin this go. Or rather, Sha? ;) Great chap Hun, update when ya can! ;)
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: November 02, 2007 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you pieced this chap together just fine. i think it's refreshing that inuyasha is the one that found out who everyone really is. usually it's the girl who finds out the truth and has to hide it. i wonder how long he can keep it from her, tho. as for kagome meeting oberon again... ugh, i can't imagine. he's psycho! but, she does want to help her friends. i can understand that. it's just that i have a feeling things are about to get so much worse. every chap i finish, i wish there was more. i'm glad you found time to write, and i'm sorry life is so hectic. hope to see more soon. take care!
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