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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:52 PST
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Plot development, character development, and hot lemon. Awesome! Congrats on the IYFG. I almost won 3rd for Songifc, but lost by one vote. Shades deserved best lemon too, but what can you do?
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:48 PST
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YAY! *does happy dance* I guess it was nice fluff... at the beginning. the rest was just 100% smut... not that I didn't love it :D Sango was a real bitch in this chapter, I find. How can she judge Kagome like that?? But Kagome wasn't exactly sweet either.. Anyway, loved it! Can't wait for the next!! (And I AM wondering about the lemon award... Do people ENJOY reading rape? Wow O.o But I guess the Sha x Kagome action was pretty hawt...) Some more fluff coming any time soon? :) But hey, this seems like the calm before the storm, we haven't heard anything about Bankotsu in a while... and Kikyo... Where is she again? Ah, well. Love, IK Obsession
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: March 05, 2007 10:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sango and miro are on a roll now. they may figure shit out before anyone else. lol damn, things could get so very strange if they figure out the truth without hearing it from kag or yash. but then, if kag and yash find out the truth about eachother as well, dammmmn. i love it. and wtf is kikyo gonna do when she figures stuff out? oh hoho. scary. or, maybe she won't care too much *shrugs* still don't know so many things. as for for naraku, maybe he's not that bad, but still not 100%. your gonna have to spell it all out for me before i can really know. ha! sorry it took so dang long for me to get to this chap. *scratches life's eyes out* O.o ttyl
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't notice any spelling and grammar errors, which is really good since normally if I see any they really bother me (took an entire grammar course last year) This fic is really dark, and yea that one chapter was a bit disturbing but it seemed to need to be there for the story to have a turning point in the plot line. It wouldn't have been as interesting if Bankotsu just was like go away. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm wondering what will happen when Kagome and Inuyasha realize the he's Sha and she's "mystery girl" lol
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 23:14 PST
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i love miroku in this chapter, silly little monk that he is. poor guy getting left out of the conversations, hahah. i liked his attempt at getting kagome to reveal something about her attacker and failing miserably. his surprise was hilarious! can't wait for an update! .... any chance kikyo jumps off a cliff in the next chapter? or pushed by a mysterious character ^_^ teehee
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 17:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, so miroku's figured it out... almost. ooh. and what will he do with this information? and what about kikyo? and her mystery man? or whatever. hehe. please have more soon.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 14:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The bedroom scene kind of made me laugh a little... The whole am-i-suppose-to-put-my-arm-around-her? awkwardness was just too cute! lol! I now see how Sesshomaru is going to be in the picture...(patiently waiting for his arrival) Great job! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: February 24, 2007 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bank is going to get even more creepier? Wow... I wonder how that'll turn out. Probably f-in scary. lol. GREAT chapter! Inuyasha is so protective in this chapter, I love it. I thought he was going to admit his true feeling to Kagome in this chapter, but he didn't. Nor verbally anyway, heh. I can't wait for the next chapter, girl! Update soon! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: February 24, 2007 15:53 PST
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EXCELLENT!! (Laughing at the "Kikyo can't get past her nose comment") Update as soon as humanely possible, Yes? *smirk*
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 15:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I loved this chapter, Inu's not being a dick lol ^_^ hmmmm I wonder what the sub-plot is I think I know but keeping it hush hush for now :D Oh and one question, is Shippo gonna be in this? ^_^ Keep up the great work!! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:17 PST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 08:47 PST
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Awesomee :) I absolutely LOVED it! So much fluff!! And WOW I can't believe Sango and Miroku figured so much out so quickly O.O smart... lol. Love, IK
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: dion On: February 24, 2007 04:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm really glad that miroku is on the right tracc.I'm anxious to find out what happens when inuyasha an kagome realize how much they have a common. -Blaccwolf123
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Title: Chapie 16
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 21:54 PST
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Thanks for using my quote, it was a pleasure to donate it. I loved the couple interaction. Miroku's a regular Holmes. The brain of a detective and the libido of a stripper, what a combo. But Sango is still being a little bitchy, someone has to take her down a peg. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 20:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I love Naraku in this fic, he's so SWEET!!! Hopefully he stays that way though! I'm also glad that Kagome at least told Sango what the hell is going on, no doubt Inuyasha is going to find out VERY soon! Though I predict he'll figure out Kagome's Titania but he won't tell her that he's Sha! Just a guess though.... I also sense some Miroku/Sango time creeping in... or maybe it's just my imagination! I'm sad that Rin wasn't in here, but hopefully we'll see her soon! Awesome chap. please update soon!
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