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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 ] | Title: FUCK YEAH!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: February 09, 2006 21:21 PST
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Girl, you are writing your ASS of, ne?? Over 18,000 words? A damn epic :P I lurved it of course and the little capper at the end was 'licious!!! God, can you imagine such a sight? InuYasha's hand stroking his thick length, his inkwell mane swishing across his back with his every move, his mouth slightly parted expelling ragged breaths as his eyes fluttered closed in ecstasy... Um..heh..yeah...well..uh...great chap. -Kiki 0.~
| Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: dogdemonandkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter, nice size as well, I can't wait to see what happens.
| Reviewed By: leila-chan* nSi On: February 09, 2006 20:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god, for me to say what i like best about this fic so far would be impossible. it's all so f*ckin' great. i love kagome and her secret double life. this is too good. you're right, a 'nice' kikyo? weird, but i'm gonna go with it. i don't hate her. i'm just used to her being portrayed as absolutely Evil. there is so much going on here. it'll be neat to see it all unfold as everyone learns about eachother. omg, the yura part was too funny. inu's mouth had me rolling!!
| Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 14:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i didn't know that you had started this already. i just thought that you were still thinking about it, or hadn't posted it yet. i didn't get notified. i am loving it. who is this sha, and who is oberon really? i mean, i gotta know, woman. i have my theories tho. you have an awesome fic started here. you have the best imagination!! i swear, i get lost in your stories. this one seems so mysterious. i am hooked.
| Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 22:39 PST
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Absolutely amazing! I can't believe it took me so long to read it! You should sent out e-mails when you update *pout* Anyway, lovely as always, though I love the mysterious and dark element. But I was little confused when the man shouted 'Sit down' and she crashed on the stone bench. What that a subdueing spell? And I'm guessing the guy is Kouga, though I could definitely see him being someone eles... a little darker... a little sexier, like Bankotsu. Very interesting, the idea of Naraku always being the evil one owning Kagome has been so overused, so this is a refreshing idea. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting, very impatiently!
| Reviewed By: TheDayHasCome On: January 30, 2006 11:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, "Sha" has to be about the sexiest nickname I have ever heard in the entirety of my life. Plus the boy spouts Shakespeare, and not the 8th grade Sonnet all Americans are forced to remember, but real lines from his plays. I am amazed with my Yash's new characterization. Very nice, please update soon!!! P.S. I'm guessing Oberon is Bankotsu, if so, we've gotta get Kag away from him and with Yash ASAP.
| Title: DAMN! I never got a notification!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 17:06 PST
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You posted it, girl & i'm LOVING it!!!! I'm so ready for this, i can damn near taste it. *jumps around* you already set the stage for a HUGE explosion & unlike COD, I won't be playing catch up!! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 16:29 PST
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Great story. I love the level of your writing. Very hot, very entertaining from the first word to the last. I also love the change of character in Kagome and I also love Sha, the nickname you gave InuYasha. I'm just wondering who's Kagome's Oberon. Anyways, great story and thanx for reviewing my fics. Sexy_Cap
| Reviewed By: musheesuh On: January 24, 2006 14:18 PST
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great story! this is the first gothic story that i've read. it's kind of dark, but not too dark. i can't wait for the next chapter. :]
| Reviewed By: Princess-Cairo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this, I can honestly say that I have yet to read anything like this before. And I truly do like the Mid Summer Night references, I caught on right away. I look forword to the next chapter.
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