| "The Sampson Effect" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! This is one of the fics that I always hold out for, so thank you so much. It's really good to. There's really not much I can say other than to encourage you to keep going and to please update soon, so keep going it's great, and please update soon. :P
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Title: you rock
Reviewed By: j...... On: August 30, 2006 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very enjoyable and your chacteriztion of dou anf chang were perfect 'for what Dou had been threw of course' now would you please be so kind as to add more?
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Reviewed By: inkie pinkie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wishing you would update soon again... Yeah, I love this fic! I didn't get to review the last time you updated, but I'm doing it now. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay for the update XD
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Reviewed By: Nicolette On: July 11, 2006 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! ^-^ w/ a passion if I havn't said it before....I felt so sorry for duo when he has stuck on the viens and shutters...man that was some bad luck. T.T...the I got so happy when Duo could talk again...I even did a lil dance sad I kno...but I can get really into a story..yeah...like I said..sad. one questioin though...Did wufei just remove the ball or the whole stud??? I really don't see as to how I'm gonna get an answer to that though. lol. I also fell very sorry for Wufei and you need to hook him up w/ someone...very soon...maybe 3 chapters from now?...just a estimation...whenever is fine though...as long as it happens! ^_^ great job keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: July 10, 2006 23:06 CDT
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[accordance] //Hmmm I would suggest either "punished equal to " or "punished to correspond " Unfortunately this is kind of an awkward sentence. A good one just one that sort of fumbles every word unless you can find the ultimate 'one'.// Did you forget to take this out? It confused me for a moment! Yes! Duo can talk - I loved Wufei's reaction to him being spanked by Heero. Hilarious. And that Heero thought Duo might have brain damage...I hope an update will be appearing soon? It would be cool if Duo got kidnapped...I would love to see Heero break down over that. I think I just love tormenting him when it comes to Duo.
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Reviewed By: Carrie's love slave On: July 03, 2006 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I've recently become obsessed with fantasy stories, but this is one of the best I've read so far! Keep up the good work and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: rosefaerietalered On: June 21, 2006 12:58 CDT
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I'm ejoying the story, but I feel sorry for Duo! I like the plot and some intersting tidbits about Duo. Keep it up!
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Title: xD
Reviewed By: Nicolette On: June 21, 2006 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny! I am now also in love w/ the saying 'hes as fustrated as a one legged man in a ass kicking contest' I think its hysterical..and the part w/ wufei and how he was annoyed and hoe he wanted to sleep but at the same the minute heero found dou and dou got the hiccups heero said 'i'll get wufei if you want me to...I just sat there thinking poor wufei he'll never get sleep. T.T anyway very nice story Duo is just so cute when he writes those notes to heero.. I love how heero will try to figure out what duo is saying ..and he'll get it right but he's just so he all 'ya y'kno what just tell me later'
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi) On: June 20, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! You updated! I hate the wait, but your chapters are well worth it. I love Duo making Heero worried by running off. I hope you throw a little bit of competition in there for Heero - maybe someone from Duo's past who was already in love with him before he became a slave? Heero jealousy and angst!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 02, 2006 03:44 CDT
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yay, this is one of the best stories ever! I love it and can't wait for the next update!
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Title: refer back
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 01:04 CDT
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your writing is good but i may suggest that you refer back to previous chapters...you mentioned before that heero was very ticklish below his belly. But in this chapter you changed. other than a few little things like that i enjoy the story and i have an idea conserning the tounge ring.^_~ keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi) On: May 31, 2006 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ye gods! This is a fantastic fic! I love that Duo has a tongue piercing, but I love even more how he uses it! I can't really summarize all the parts that I liked the most in this story, so rest assured in the fact that I love it all. BTW...in chapter 7, Duo is searching - to no avail - for Heero's ticklish spots, yet in a previous chapter (can't remember which) he was playfully tormenting Heero by assailing his ticklish area below his bellybutton...It got me confused a bit, or was Heero allowing Duo to tickle him to tears in the first incident? Nevermind me and my stupid questions...but! You can expect many more reviews for this story - you can't escape my lunacy! You're favourite marked...bwahaha...ahem...
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: May 08, 2006 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, please, please, please PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama nsi On: May 03, 2006 11:22 CDT
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yay!!! duo can sing at least. hope he gets to talk soon!!
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