| "The Sampson Effect" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: ch. 6 On: April 30, 2006 18:32 CDT
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It's all in his vocal cords. Whether I am right or wrong. I still like this fic. There are some parts I would love to be with out but it's a very entertaining fic none the less.
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 11:50 CDT
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Samson effect...hmmm... I'm starting to get an idea of what's going on... ::Waits to see if he's right:: Please update soon, this is good.
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Reviewed By: Silver Harmony On: April 30, 2006 10:09 CDT
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Stumbled upon this fic ... and so far it's been great ^_^ It's interesting, well-written and quite in character too. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Codan On: April 30, 2006 05:28 CDT
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I really like the horse. You've made Chang perfectly IC, it's great amnd I thought the bit with the pregnant women was very funny. Poor Heero at the end, he really oughtn't be King.
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I'm late in reviewing. Anyway, really good story thus far. I really can't wait to find out what happens! I am on the edge of my seat and also up at 2 in the morning because of the slow internet and waiting for things to load like the chapter and the review page! Arg... anyway, I'll be checking for updates on a regular basis, or at least when I'm not working another 24 hour shift. Please update soon! ^_^ Arigatou gozaimashita! ~France
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Fic!!!!!! Please up date soon:)
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Reviewed By: priscel _ =^_^= On: April 09, 2006 21:17 CDT
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"He swore like an Anchorite..." there's that reference again, I think Duo maybe an Anchorite and the poor horse in the stables is his. I'm still wondering what happen to Duo's lesson? prehaps is was that guardsman that Heero sent packing, he seemed very forward and took pleasure in Heero punishing Duo to have the same instruments ready for Heero's use at the door. When, and I say when because Heero's is becoming more opening and trusting toward Duo, Duo is free to roam the village, he should be watchful and careful. yea, Wu Fei asked him! Update soon!
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Title: Really Great
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 16:31 CST
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This is an awesomely well written AU fic. It's so touching. Duo is just so sweet and priceless that I want to just hug and pet him, lol. And Heero is just hot. This is really wonderful storytelling. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ShinigamiGirl [too lazy to log in] On: March 31, 2006 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story and the amount of mystery you have makes it very interesting. The way you portray Duo is pretty unique: how he has a stubborn strak in him but how he also really want's to please Heero. I just hope you make it to where Duo can talk soon! *smile* Update soon!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: breathnight On: March 17, 2006 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this story is really good, but I really want Duo to speak again, at least some words, it´s quite frustrating like that(sorry if that sounds like a complaint) PLEASE write more soon, I can´t imagine what will come next!!!
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Reviewed By: France On: March 16, 2006 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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I love this story thus far. You obviously know many things about the time they are to be in, and you know many words I had to look up! ^_^ I am adding this story to my favorite list and going to check to see if you have other stories just as good as this one. Haiyaku apudetu kudasai! (Hurry with the update please).
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: priscel - hey! On: March 15, 2006 10:59 CST
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This is getting better every chapter. Just one thing though, Wufei says '"He's a slave. Your property. He doesn't have a choice, much like a minor child. You make the decisions and he obeys." in this chapter, when before he said that he wouldn't operate unless Duo gave him the go'head, since it was his life they were risking. Now I thought that it was a little confusing unless Wufei said that because he had become attached to Duo and didn't want to see him die or suffer anymore from the pain and so he changed his view on things and put the decision in Heero's hand since he knows that Heero would say yes if it made Duo better. But that's a long shot and I maybe reading into it too much. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitty Neeka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap!!! I love this story so much! Its so much better then the other Heero finds a beaten slave and they get together fics! Please update soon.
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Title: ch 1 & 2
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
** this good, a few spelling errors but not all that noticeable. Had they every considered that the tongue ring maybe spelled/cursed so he couldn't speak..hence holding his tongue? Keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 13, 2006 23:23 CST
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woohoo! an update! duo sounds like he is in a healthier mindset and is getting stronger by the day. i wonder who has been taking his work? and what exercises does he do everyday? well, hopefully you'll be able to explain it in the near future. update again soon!
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