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Reviewed By: Chitoko Kanzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! Bet you didn't think You'd see me way over here didja? I'm the same Chitoko Kanzaki from ffnet. And you know how I love your story so. (don't mind the lack of a spelling grammer score... Because I can't spell worth a damn any way, so its nearly all good to me *slightly sheepish grin*
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Reviewed By: so good! On: March 22, 2006 19:43 CST
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lemons!! lemons!! please write the lemons. The story was sooo good and I'm sad to see it end. T_T good job!!
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: Wiiburingu On: March 21, 2006 10:11 CST
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**fangirl tackle** Woah, just... woah! I think I reviewed some of the chapters on AFF.net, but I can't remember. I've been following this story since I first found it when the first two or so chapters had been put up, though, and I've never found a bit in it that I haven't loved to pieces. For a first fanfic, your writing and style is exceptional to me.
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Reviewed By: Wiiburingu On: March 21, 2006 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**fangirl tackle** Woah, just... woah! I think I reviewed some of the chapters on AFF.net, but I can't remember. I've been following this story since I first found it when the first two or so chapters had been put up, though, and I've never found a bit in it that I haven't loved to pieces. For a first fanfic, your writing and style is exceptional to me.
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Title: 4 More Chap. Please
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 19, 2006 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story, it was one of my favorites but you dident explain how the war ended, and i'de like to see the othere couples together please! Wonderful fic I really enjoyed it! :)
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Reviewed By: paniwi(NLI) On: March 19, 2006 05:19 CST
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nice epilogue, the ceremony was nice...and lemons are always welcome *smirk*
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: March 17, 2006 03:10 CST
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love it, good ending. All that was missing was the big window they stared out of as they left for war, lol *cues epic music* I'm looking forward to the epilogue.
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Title: Opal
Reviewed By: Lyana On: March 14, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens across the board!!! Congratulations! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (can't be arsed to log in) On: March 12, 2006 03:54 CST
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well...you better not kill anyone off you know :p I just don't understand why humans declare war to the Kaitsunes? Didn't they think it was the kaitsune liberation front thingie? Or have they figured out it was someone else,if so, what are the consequences going to be for Ryou? ...yes, humans are assholes ^_^...
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Title: Opal
Reviewed By: IceAngel's Hikari On: March 06, 2006 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much it's so good I red it before on AFF.net wich I can't seem to find anywhere!!!!so if you now could you let me now at wolfsangel330@msn.com? anyway I love it and please update very soon!!
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Title: Wai!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: March 03, 2006 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Update soon for more yamyams!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: February 27, 2006 09:20 CST
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cute, but it's kind of the 'everyone's gay' syndrom hm? I have nothing against gay relationships (hell, why else would I be reading this) but not EVERYBODY is gay, I would like to see a straight couple floating around as well, even if just as a small side-character thing, it would just make everything alot more believable. I did enjoy the chapter alot, your writing style is engaging and amusing and Ryou's character never fails to amuse me. Poor Bakura, what a way to wake up, I had to laugh over that scene. Keep the good work up!
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Title: Awesome story
Reviewed By: TheBlackPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love this fic. I like your style and ability to write the characters as themselves is your alternate universe. BTW are Jou and Seto going to show up? Keep up the good work TBP P.S. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: February 20, 2006 10:08 CST
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nice chapter, but being the bitch I am, I'm the first to scream TOO SOON! Falling in love is one thing, but people generally don't immediately start fucking without second thoughts, I take it it WAS Ryou's virginity that was taken. Don't get me wrong, the lemon was ok (though I missed some blow-job action and the likes, lol) its just too soon. Otherwise nice chapter, also with the council
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Title: Yet another review ^^
Reviewed By: azndr3amer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW! I really really really really loved the lemon...one of the best ones I've read in a long time...wow...you have a great style of writing that kept me coming back, especially when I saw it had been updated ^^. Despite what the first reviewer said, I think that you focused on the more important parts and wrote them EXTREMELY well. I'd recommmend this to ANYONE. Love it very much, just had to say it again in a second review. ^^ -azndr3amer
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