| "Indentured Survitude" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 21:12 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a really cool story so far. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mt. haku On: August 30, 2006 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story i really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: SkatCat On: February 27, 2006 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellecnt chapters so far. I a big fan of this pairing, there are definetly not enough Sess/Kagu writes out there. I think this in a very creative take on their relationship, I'm really looking forward to more! Keep up the great work! ^_^
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Title: Very Pleased
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very good chapter. I wonder exactly what that smirk of Inuyasha's means? I'm thrilled you decided to continue, it would have been a shame to stop such an original. Here's to more in the future.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: yokai_chiyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far i am thoroughly enjoying your story it is so well written and detailed, I really haven't seen many Sess/Kagu pairings but what you have written so far truly has me intrigued.
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Reviewed By: Watercolor27 On: February 16, 2006 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more I enjoyed it so far and like the ideal of the story and would like more.
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Title: Unique
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been a fan of the Sess/Kagr pairing but just in the first chapter alone you have changed that(for your story at least). Your writing gives excellent visualizations and your characterizations are well done and interesting. No flat characters here. Love it and I look forward to more.
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