| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 05:43 CDT
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I was speachless...... I had my hand over my mouth just saying over and over, 'oh my god...'.
Krillin's singing was so funny, and then Veg wakes up and boom! ack! memory loss! wha... Bu... OMG.....
Mind you, and hour later I was laughing... This story has done a complete circle. You could practically have to start again...
Where did you learn to write? I wanna join... |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! Vegeta is back! Mean...ahem...he's evil again. Well that was an interesting turn events. Where do you think up this stuff? Oh well looking forward to the next chapter. Oh and mm.org lost all the stories in the DBZ section so you have to go back and relist them in that anime section to have them show up there. Just spreading the word. Anyway great chapter and have I told you that your site is one of my favorites out there. Just thought you should know. Til next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 07, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Veggie has lost his memory! You gotta feel sorry for him, and poor little Trunks can feel his daddy's pain. Bulma's a basket case and she doesn't even know that Veg is back to his old evil self again. I can't wait to see what he plans to do while on earth. Please update asap!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 06, 2002 13:14 CDT
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Intense!! First, you had me crying because that scene with Bulma at Vegeta's bedside was so incredibly touching. Then you shock me with Vegeta's memory loss and violent awakening. Cool! They are all in a lot of trouble now... I hope Bulma can bring him back to his senses. She seems to be his soul mate so maybe she's the key. Whatever the outcome, I'm interested to see what your creative mind comes up with. Thanks for the update and hope you're feeling better. :) |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 12:47 CDT
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Wow! What a turn of events. This fic is deffinetly a one of a kind. Keep writing!
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO! That ending was too funny, and Krillin's bad singing; I didn't even know Krillin even sang. Was Krillin telling Vegeta about the first fight what brought this up, or has Vegeta just forgotten everything?! You leave me confused! Guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter, eh?
^_^ POAS -_- |
Reviewed By: kodomo On: August 06, 2002 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chpt 12 was REALLY Great!!! You are such a talented writer!! From "Bad to Worse" was terrific and "Two sides to a story" is even better!! I can't wait to read your updates! You give all the characters (esp. Vegeta) such depth and the range of emotions, The Ending is going to be spectacular, I know it~ Please continue to write more!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 02, 2002 12:33 CDT
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Excellent, excellent sequel to From Bad to Worse. You have such an original take on things and your writing is superb. Hey, nobody knows what happens in those missing timeblocks so why not have some fun with it? I love your storyline!! Poor Vegeta, though, he's been through a lot. Glad to see he got to Bulma in the nick of time... but what's going to happen now?? This is great, can't wait for the update. :) |
Reviewed By: Darkfire85 On: July 24, 2002 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need...next...chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Just re-read chapter 11, got all teary-eyed and stuff.
Hm. Let's see. Figuring this out. Vegeta has no heartbeat for the moment, has lost loads of blood, and is unresponsive. Yet, he obviously can't be clinically dead (I actually looked this up in a medical dictionary once--fascinating stuff) because it'd be a big hassle to wish him back and all them over at New Namek would be very hesitant towards using a whole wish just to bring him back. SO! Taking into account those two little details, it seems to me that a little healing action from Dende is in order here, don't you think?
Well, I'll wait till the next chapter. Don't strain yourself. I'm patient. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V_V Holy monkies. Wow, that was a truely, truely amazing chapter. The ending was just so...so right for the moment. I'm on the edge of my seat!! I can't wait to find out what you have planned. ^-^ Great fic so far and you'll hear from me again! -lol- |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I would be extremely upset right now if it wasn't for the fact that this story is written in the orignal timeline and Vegeta is so not dead right now. Well okay...he is but that's because I'm watching the Buu Saga.
Well I would have to say that this chapter rates a 20 out of 10 on my damness scale. It was simply wonderful and a real tear-jerker. Grade A stuff.
Don't worry about the updates because the last thing you want to do is make yourself worse. Here's to your health.-JB |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 15, 2002 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sad i almoat CRIED!!!!!
noooooo! vegeta can't be dead!!!!! and in such a gruesome way too... you've definitely got a way with words, that's for certain. i REALLY would enjoy your updating soon, but if you can't, well with a story as incredible as this, i can't hold it against you. it's gotta take time to pump those chapters out!
eleven! i give the whole thing an eleven! probably more! fantastic! |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Vegeta: ...
POAS: You really did kill him... *sniff* S'not fair... It's not fair Darke! How could you! *Cries*
Vegeta: That's not fair... People like to kill me...
POAS: Good chapter like always...
Vegeta: It's not good! I'm DEAD!
POAS: Shut up... Bye Darke! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, as usual. Don't worry about updates--take as long as you want. Your health is much more important, got it? Don't work on this unless you want to. And feel better soon, for the sake of being better, not just because thousands of people may be demanding the next chapter. |
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