| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: May 11, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update!! I loved the scene in the bathroom, specially when Yamcha came in to relieve himself. Poor Trunks is suffering but thanks to daddy it looks like he's gonna be okay, even though Vegeta's "treatment" seemed somewhat unorthodox. Can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of everything that is good and holy why do you keep stopping?!?!?!?! Damn... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a dramatic chapter! Well worth the wait! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
EW! Omg.. He ripped open his wrist.. O_O At least he got to Trunks on time. Scared me shitless when the bleeper thingy went dead.. Ohhhh man darke, you rule the world XD All KOP writers should be shot.. |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn is all I can say. Damn. |
Reviewed By: Duo's Dame On: April 27, 2002 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got it! I JUST got the JOKE: The opera singers in Chapter Six- "Blueberry the Fruit" and his wife "Assorted Nuts" OMG! Where do you come up with this $hit? Too bad about Trunks but I know you wouldnt put the little tyke on the chopping block without a motive up your sleeve. Then again, knowing you... maybe you would! Can't wait for Seven!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Damn... |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Trunks, why? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 26, 2002 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Christ Almighty!! You should be crowned the King Of Angst! Trunks is in a coma and Veggie's been missing for all this time. Poor Bulma, I don't know how she can deal with all this. I can't wait till you update, cause there's got to be a light at the end of this tunnel. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! "You taste like chicken"-great line (to everyone except Furiza). Good riddance to the Installation and all the assorted a$$holes that worked in it. Furiza met a fitting end, along with another part of his anatomy ^_^. What's gonna happen to Veggie now? I mean he can't die, specially after thinking of Trunks and Bulma. Maybe he's starting to regret that he left Capsule Corp. Awesome chapter!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...
-JB |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I can take anymore of Vegeta getting the blunt end of it all. He's been through so much...and you have to admit, if he left CC he wouldn't be where his is now. Besides finally getting revenege by killing Frieza now, is it worth his life? His ability to summon his ki? And will he ever get back home, and make things right with Bulma & Trunks? Oh! I just can't take it...but you I'll be here on the 26th! Laters! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2002 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, you bring new meaning to the word "original" This is excellent, even though I found one spelling error. Frieza's such a dirty it. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is soooo f*** up!!!! Man, I really can't believe this happening to Vegeta. Again!!!! Poor guy just can't get a break! I hope that slimy pink freak is brutally tortured after this. And the guards too. How dare they leave Vegeta with HIM!! I really liked your memories they all fit perfectly into the timeline but then again that's what you do best. I checked out your webpage the other day and man, you're as talented an artist as you are a writer. Sheesh, some people get all the talent. Anyway looking forward to the 15th.-JB |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* that whole "full of shit like your father" sent me rolling on the floor ^_^ and i have to agree i got pissed at goku when he didn't come back, it was pretty selfish of him. |
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