| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 06, 2002 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I can't believe I made thru this chapter without trying to slash my wrists. So Specimen F was Frieza all along and I can guess what he's done to Veggie. I think I'm gonna be sick. It's bad enough that Veg is being held against his will and experimented on and that his memories are driving him up the wall. I want him to destroy Frieza once and for all. Great chap!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 05, 2002 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KUSO! Man! You--ARGH! Ok, flaming, stinking klfnsf (deep breath)... Ok, I'm slightly better. As soon as you said Specimen F I knew it was him! Turd! Bringing him back! You'd better make his death nice and long. OH! The suspense is turning my--nevermind. I must write now.... hmmm, interesting...my idea was along these lines too, but not quite. So, does Bulma figure it out and use her influence to save him, and who is useing Vegeta's card? That's how Bulma would find out after all.... |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, that was great, as usual! The bit with Gohan was well done, I really enjoyed it! Still feel really bad for Vegeta though...as always with your fics. Not to say that I don't like that, it's awesome!
Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I really liked your little Krillin/18 romance, it's so sweet. Man, it sucks to be a Saiyan's woman, though I do like Bulma and ChiChi's little two woman support group. I feel sorry for Gohan. He's all alone now that Vegeta is gone (I mean since there are no other Saiyans). True there's Trunks but he really doesn't count. Yet. Oh, speaking of Trunks, his little Vegeta-like antics are absolutely adorable! Well if you haven't figured it out yet, I loved the last chapter and can't wait til the fifth.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 25, 2002 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. I'm glad to see that both CC and Bulma are living together and supporting each other. Vegeta on the other hand...is just being Vegeta. I'm beginning to think that Bulma's better off without him. Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Maxine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, almost forgot you had an account here. Of course, I could have gone to your site too...oh well! I was going crazy when FF.N was down and I couldn't read the next chapter, then I remembered, duh!
Anyhoo, LOVED IT! The part with Gohan was hilarious, but also touching, in a way. I guess no one ever considered what it would be like for him to go through puberty without a father. Well, except for you of course. ^__^ Gah, I can't believe I have to wait almost two more weeks for the next part!! I can do it, I can! It's not...too...much...longer...right? *sigh* Well, loved it, and I'll be back on the 8th! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right Vegeta you tell 'em! That'll teach 'em to blame every thing on you! |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2002 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm loving this!! you are such an excellent writer! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 16, 2002 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Veggie's pride has led him to sink so low so as to stay at a roach motel where he wipes out some punk and gets some mind altering shit blown in his face. Now he's hallucinating and he's not alone (gasp). All this because he doesn't want to owe the Briefs anything. Tsk, tsk Veggie when will you learn. Great chap. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2002 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
March 25th uh? Well I guess I'll just here at my computer and wait till then.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2002 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you're good! That's all I can say. Wishing it was the 15th.-JB |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to review it here too!! Great start... why must you torture us by making us wait a week? Hmm... probably because it would take hours to read the *whole* story... tried to read FBTW in one sitting... whew! :) Good job as always. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my...That was excellent and extremely angsty. I loved it! I'm looking forward to the telling of your tale. You have a descriptively poetic style of writing and that imagination...hmmm, just when I thought I'd read it all, you come up with a original continuation to your FBTW. Bravo. The update was well worth the wait. Once again, I'm impressed....EM |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: March 07, 2002 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What did Bulma do to Trunks' tail?? For crying out loud, I'm going to be wondering about that until you tell us!! :P |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! |
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