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Reviewed By: me!!! On: March 07, 2002 07:34 CST
Comment/Review:
ok, let's just say i gave you a 10 on everything and if i could give you more, i would. this story made me cry because it was so moving in my heart. the words that you used conveyed bulma's feelings so much that even i, the reader, felt it. but in all honesty, i do believe that that is how vegeta would've reacted. poor bulma for hearing such cruel words and poor trunks for having such a cruel father. i hope the next chapter explains the reasoning behind his words and i hope he realizes that to be a real man, he has to be a father to trunks.
overall i enjoyed this fic and it's very original. can't say that i've read one like this yet so keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
J. Christ can you write!! This was brilliant, just brilliant. So I guess I missed out on alot when I did'nt take the time to read the prequel. I supposed I'm gonna have to rectify that (^_^). This was a really dark chap. Will the whole fic be like this? Let me know so I can get some "happy pills" in advance. I can't believe how cold and heartless Veggie was to Bulma. And to say to her that he wished her and the baby died during the birthing was totally unreal. I'm surprised she didn't slap him right then and there. Frankly, if I were her, I'd never take him back. Unless of course he consents to some heavy duty therapy, which I believe he is sorely in need of. Great chap. Can't wait to read more of it. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
J. Christ can you write!! This was brilliant, just brilliant. So I guess I missed out on alot when I did'nt take the time to read the prequel. I supposed I'm gonna have to rectify that (^_^). This was a really dark chap. Will the whole fic be like this? Let me know so I can get some "happy pills" in advance. I can't believe how cold and heartless Veggie was to Bulma. And to say to her that he wished her and the baby died during the birthing was totally unreal. I'm surprised she didn't slap him right then and there. Frankly, if I were her, I'd never take him back. Unless of course he consents to some heavy duty therapy, which I believe he is sorely in need of. Great chap. Can't wait to read more of it. Peace |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(jumping up and down in excitement) Finally! And boy is this worth the wait! Wow! Glad you went back and told us how he reacted to her being pregnant! I was wondering that.
So, he's left.... :( *sob* And why will Bulma regret whatever she did with Trunks's tail? How does Vegeta get back to CC? And what's he going to do in the city? Let's see Saiyan+humans+culture clash=Bulma bails him out? Or does he just destroy alot of stuff? Wouldn't mind seeing that. Does he run into that--(will not call her that) Devoure(sp?)?
MORE! How will Vegeta find purpose? dum dum dum! Ok, nough said!
PLUG: Come read my stories? |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this is different from what I'm used to. Majorly angsty, no doubt. I'm very interested in where you're going to take this fic. ^_^ If the last one was any indication that, I bet this fic will be even more exciting and enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
10's all! :) This was great... suspenseful, funny, and I can't wait for the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 16, 2002 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I can't believe that Veggie's dead! Don't get me wrong, I'm happy as shit that the blackmailer is history but Vegeta gave his life to bring that about. At lease we know that he cares for Bulma and Bulma still loves him. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chap. Since you haven't been well, take your time and focus on getting better. I'll wait as long as I have to for an update. Take care. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well! I guess Vegeta told them! Damn... |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, now you're starting to remind me of a Robert Jordan story. Bury my favorite character under a pile of rubble and leave him there for a whole book!
Maybe it's not that bad, it's good that you able to keep me so anxious. Oh, I don't even have to wait a whole week! You're updating right before my b-day! Happy B-day to me!!!
lol, anyways, can I take a venture and say the mysterious person who now has Vegeta is none other than 17? Only unaccounted for male I know of that wouldn't pass up the opportunity to use the credit card and order room service....
Poor Bulma. If only she knew.... Are the disappearance of Vegeta and the letter linked? If so, it might just throw my 17 theory out of the water. Didn't 17 already know about Trunks? And why would he care anyways? (sigh) Kay, need answers now....
I'm prepared for Vegeta's fate. Surprise me! I love a wrench in my cogs! |
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