| "Shatter" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fascinating! I am intrigued by the start of this story and plan to stick around to see what you've got planned next - a giddy feeling tells me my inner sadist would enjoy it ") So don't take your time in updating and deliver another dose of excellent fiction to us! :D - Lap aka Nocens
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 06, 2006 04:20 EDT
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very suspenseful.... and it sure looks like relena and duo are going to blow up at each other sometime soon. i can't wait for that to happen! update again soon!
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Reviewed By: sun-falling On: April 05, 2006 12:25 EDT
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Very intriguing. I'm interested in what comes next.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very enjoyable chapter! I was thrilled to see an update and am on the edge of my seat with the suspense. Who is the murderer? It could be almost anyone. Duo is so jaded, bless his heart. Look forward to the next update which hopefully won't be very long in coming.
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Reviewed By: Sony_Mouse [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:25 EDT
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Soooo cruel, poor Duo. My heart is bleeding for him. I love heero, but I want to smack him...grrrr. Anyways, excellent story, well written, great depth in characters, and a story I WILL be reading till you finish... on that note, please right more soon :) ore ±
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Reviewed By: Codan On: April 04, 2006 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Back for more and this chapter is as good as the last, I like the business with the cigarette. Please update soon! This story is GREAT!
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Reviewed By: ShinigamiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 01:22 EDT
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I think your story has a lot of potential, and the way you set up the story line so far was very flowing. I like it. I would love to see an update to this sometime soon. :)
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Reviewed By: mgp On: March 31, 2006 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For such a fanfic, I give giddy thumbs up. I like mystery, gore, and adore angst. The whole plot and setting, I love it. Heero being engaged to Relena, I'll keep loving when Duo continiously angsts. Aw, my 1x2 love is outweighed by my love for Duo-sadness... If it ever turns 1x2, I'd like to bash Heero for being an idiot and ever thinking of marriage with Relena, bleh. At least Relena is being a somewhat pleasant character, except she seems naive and talkative in an annoying way.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 00:00 EST
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one more thing '...I thought he was a prince? A prince fallen from the stars, just for me..." She trailed off, eyes content and far away.' *shivers* I just wanted to shut her up with something! maybe I can super glue her mouth shut *smiles*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 23:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is interesting and I really didn't want to stop reading soo, pretty please with a cherry on top, update soon, kay?!
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Title: Darkanger
Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm hooked. This has great potential. I love a good mystery but angst is the best and it sounds like Duo is going to get a good deal of it. I hope to see a more jaded Duo than most writers seem to come up with. So far I think you really have taken account for the growth the guys have gone through in the years after the war. It seems most realistic. I applaude that. As for the muderer, well.. I'm on the edge of my seat. There are so many ways this can go. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 24, 2006 16:44 EST
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the starting of the fic sounds good. i'm interested to see how the relationships between everyone in the story develop so update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good start! I'm hooked and hope to see more of this in the very near future. I look forward to finding out who the murderer is. And nothing against Relena *wrinkles nose* but I hope the ultimate pairing is 1x2.
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Reviewed By: Codan On: March 23, 2006 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the best word for this is probably intriguing. It's brilliantly written and realistic. POOR DUO! *sob*, please fix that *sniffle* Update soon!
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