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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh yay! Update! *jumps for joy* I really am enjoying this story. I'm about to go into hysterics and rip all my hair out to find out what's going on between Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre. I loved how Heero had to use his memories of Duo's advances to get it up for Relena. That was awesome. And a possible copy cat killer or maybe the real killer trying to make it look like a copy cat, or maybe a copy cat trying to make it look like the real killer is trying to make it look like a copy cat or maybe..*head spins in dizziness* Gyaahhh!!! I'm so anxious to find out who the killer is!!!! It's KiLlINg meeeeee!!!! *grin* Good job once again on this chapter. Please have another chapter for us soon *bats eyes, begs, and offers chocolate chip cookies*
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Title: HORRAY!!!
Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: September 02, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKYOUUUU! This chapter was one of my favorites because its JUST SO DAMN ANGSTY!!! I hope I didn't make you feel guilty O___O! I JUST LOVE THIS FIC SOOOHH MUCH! I think i checked at the end of every week (probably more) to see if you updated it. EEE! Lovin' the mind games Duo is playing with Heero.
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Title: Shatter
Reviewed By: sseattle On: September 01, 2007 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see an update - it's been a while! I love this story - you can mix the tension and the humor with the best of them. Duo's character is brilliant - tough, sarcastic and vunerable. We haven't had a chance to really get to know Trowa, Wufei and Quatre yet - I hope to see them play a larger role. Heero is funny in his confusion and denseness, but hopefully he has had his wakeup-call now!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 31, 2007 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so now that I know guilt WORKS...heh, heh! No, really though...THANK YOU!!! I was out of town for 24 hours and came back and THERE WAS A NEW CHAPTER. You have made my whole Labor Day Weekend!!! After a 6 hour drive home, this was a perfect treat...except of course for Heero and Relena (ew)...but the fact that he had to think about Duo was PERFECT. That'll keep him thinking. In fact, I kind of look forward to him losing a little of that perfect soldier self-control with the "braided idiot." And who WOULDN'T want to think of Duo during sex, anyway? (Okay...maybe Relena...I gotta grant you that one.) But seriously, who in their RIGHT MIND? So, THANKS AGAIN. And I'll try not to lay on the guilt...but this story is so unique and so tense and edgy that it's hard to wait for! Always wanting more! ---snow
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Reviewed By: Monje EJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 16:38 CDT
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Wow ...ya that about sums it up. I haven't read a fanfic (specailly gundam wing) in awhile but I must say I'm glad I started reading your first. Keep up the awesome work! PS I absolutely love Duo's character =D
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 29, 2007 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Suffering from serious withdrawal! Hope you update again soon! (You spoiled us so last time with two updates three days apart. See what happens? We whine.) This is a seriously dark, intriguing story...and Duo is HOT. I'd really like to see them get somewhere in the investigation before someone else ends up dead. (Unless it's Relena...her I wouldn't miss.) But then, that'd sort of cut the story short, wouldn't it? Just, please, more soon...as soon as you get the chance.
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Title: PLEASE! IM BEGGIN YA!
Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: August 09, 2007 21:24 CDT
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You better update soon...I'm jonesing I tell you....FEED ME GOOD FANFIC. PLEAASSSEEEEE!!!! POST A SENTENCE! A WORD! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon- On: August 08, 2007 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm pining for more. This is a dark, compelling story...full of twists and turns, and just too interesting and unique to tear myself away from. Hoping you'll update again soon!!!
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Title: OH MY...
Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: August 04, 2007 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never...NEVER read a fanfiction so well put together. I have never wanted to read more of something ever. You MUST finish this. THIS IS AMAZING. I love how you present the characters especially your older version of Quatre. PERFECT! finally someone who doesn't think he would stay a soft quiet little thing for his whole life. The relationships you've created are really really intense. This. Is. AMAZING. I don't know any other way to say it. PERFECT!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch8, and with the closing door, heero's made Duo open game to the murderer. Though it was excellent planning... knowing that Quat's arrival would be enough of a disturbance to conceal a getting after the room had served it's purpose. ^_^ I love this story so much and I have to thank you again, if I hadn't before for sharing it! *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 01:51 CDT
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*hugs you* that's ok, when can we see some of your art? I love the progression of this story!! And I definitely agree about Quatre. I think there are something features that just won't change with Duo, but man the tension between Wu Fei -Trowa and Quatre has my interest peeked!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 15, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I LOVE you! Killer chapter! It's about time Heero got a clue. But now I can't help wondering if Duo's gonna pack up and leave or stay and help in spite of Heero...or to spite him...and Relena. Sure does seem like she was the first to overstep, but Duo sure stooped just as low. Cat fight is right! Yowch. I hope you're updating again soon, cuz I am SO hooked.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I'm so glad to see an update on this one! It's so intriguing and has me on the edge of my seat. I caught myself hoping Duo would say "hell no, I'm not apologizing to that b**ch." lol As much as I'm enjoying this, I'm hoping it's getting close to revealing not only who the killer is, but also what has happened to cause animosity between Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre. I have a hypothesis as to what it is based on hints within the story, so I'm anxiously waiting to see if my hypothesis is correct. I love the tension within the chapters between all the characters. It's palpable. And Duo is so aggressive in what he wants, though I do hope he's uke if they wind up together *waves Duo as uke banner*. Looking forward to the next update which will hopefully be soon!
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Reviewed By: cewo On: July 14, 2007 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Luv that we got two new chapters one right after the other!! The suspense is killing me! Damn that Duo is tenacious, but he'd have to be because Heero is a blockhead!! Don't know who Bill is but it is definitely someone on the inside (please NOT Duo!!) May we have more soon please? (yes, I am greedy) Excellent story!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 07:42 CDT
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2 updates? in a week? you love us you really love us ;) awesome characterization
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