| "Shatter" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 08:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Definitely Wufei who-dunnit. He was in the bedroom with ample time to spare when Relena was snoozing blissfully, coulda set the camera easily.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 13, 2007 14:06 EDT
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i'm really happy to see an update for this fic! you have no idea how long i've waited to read more about the unsolved conflicts between each of the pilots with each other in the midst of all the suspense around the "butcher." please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 12, 2007 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, sweet nectar of the gods! More of the story! Yay!!! I have a feeling I know where the guy Quatre sent ended up. Ewwww. Gruesome. Heh, and I can't wait to find out what happened between Quatre and Wufei and Trowa. There's a story there for sure! (Not to mention what'll happen when Heero ever admits that HELL YEAH, he liked what Duo did.) So much still to come. This story is intriguing, well-written, tense, and FUN. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 19:01 EDT
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:( cliffy? As always enjoyed, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 04:59 EDT
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Did good work on getting the tension up. Heero reacting is difficult to write at times because anything he does react to would have to be pretty intense. Feel sorry for the guy though, having no clue what's up with his friends. I'm still thinking it's Wufei who did it.
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: April 25, 2007 20:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wufei and the oatmeal is the most hilarious final line to any chapter of any story I think I've ever read!!! I still laugh when I think of it. It's fantastic. And here's hoping you update again SOON. It's been three weeks, and I've got serious withdrawal symptoms!
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Reviewed By: Animestar73 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!! OH POOR DUO AND HEERO!!!! I HATE RELENA!!!!!!!!!!! This is such a great stroy! The way you set it up, with a hint of mystery! Ur such a great author!!!!! Oh A Quarte x Trowa x Wufei traingle??? O.O! interestin!! Please Update!
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Title: Shatter
Reviewed By: snowdragon On: April 01, 2007 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I see recent updates have been coming fairly quickly, so I dare to hope there'll be more soon. This chapter was awesome. The whole story is very engaging...and I'm curious how it will pan out.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 01, 2007 16:24 EDT
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so duo finally shows heero that he's interested in him. what will heero do now? what's going to happen with the everyone else as the case gets deeper and everyone's relationships with one another get entangled? please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 23:32 EST
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I'm loving this fic, my only complaint is that there isn't enough of it. Although, i am glad i don't like oatmeal
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh I loved the final line in this chapter, with Wufei offering her oatmeal. That was priceless. You've done well with pointing out her double-standards in regards to idealism and what she practices. I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and glad to see you are focusing on it again. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Angel_wing On: March 09, 2007 17:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not stop reading! I read all the chapters in one sitting because the story was so compelling! Please update again, I'll be the first one to read (hopefully....)!
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Reviewed By: midori820 On: March 09, 2007 05:32 EST
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love love love this fic! ooo the tension between everyone is just fab. and who is the killer? cos the clues are pointing to everyone, wufie hates the bill, duo like wufie says in a true colonist, and trowa is so quiet he's always suspicious. mwahaha. really great fic, dialouge, characters, and plot development all spot on, cant wait for the rest! and for Quatre?
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 14:48 EST
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YEA!! Wuffers!! Dish her up some Oatmeal! That triffling idiot! She choices to ignore the problems with the Bill that Wuffers just pointed out...she's so stupid, I hope she finds something round and chewy in her food. *hugs you* keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 08, 2007 02:00 EST
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thank you for a bit more enlightenment on the bill that gorgenstein bill. it certainly gives more reason as to why the killer is committing these crimes and why many colonists are against it, even if only a section was discussed here. wufei and relena's conversation was enlightening, as well as the ongoing tension between trowa and wufei surrounding quatre. heero's knowledge of what's not going on with his friends and relena may be a downfall for him, but who knows. please update again soon! i'm surprised that duo and relena haven't douched out with the bill, but maybe it's because of heero that they won't.....
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