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Reviewed By: vanilla22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! I'm not giving all the 10's just to be cute and over gratuitous. This is the first story I've read in a looong time that kept me wanting to read chapter after chapter. I almost growled at my phone. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: September 28, 2007 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No guilt...just want you to know you've got fans here, checking in regularly (okay, I'll admit three times a day is a bit much...call me obsessed) to see if there's more. I'm just dyin' to see Duo one-up Relena...he SO deserves it. I like the "dangerous Duo" edge he has in this story. Very, very cool...and sexy. And I'm curious about Tro, Quat, and Fei of course! What happened there? And when is Heero gonna face up to what his body's telling him? There's just so much going on here...PLUS a mysterious, gruesome bunch of murders to solve still. So, hopefully you'll be struck by inspiration to update SOON and lots! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: snapy pants [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 14:13 CDT
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PLEASE PEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUH-lease. WRITE MORE!!!!! I NEEEEED IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: September 21, 2007 23:18 CDT
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me agrees with snowdragon! you must update when you get free time yes yes?! PLEASE PLEASE!! I BEG! I NEEDS SEXY PLOTLINE!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: September 19, 2007 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More soon, please? Withdrawal looms again. No guilt, honest! But this story is so intriguing, with such sinister moods and a tense plot, that I can hardly wait for each installment! So...just want you to know how appreciated the story is. Hope you're well, and find time to update...but I know life gets busy. So, as soon as you can?
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Reviewed By: get_that_mokeY! On: September 12, 2007 20:47 CDT
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someone recommended me to this fic. its great so far i hope you dont give up on it...
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Reviewed By: lu_lu82 On: September 12, 2007 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
moar moar moar! peez! peez! PEEZ!
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Title: woot!
Reviewed By: Lady_Bugg On: September 06, 2007 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this fic was really well constructed. bravo! I hope there's more soon.
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Reviewed By: nana17 On: September 03, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the next time Heero is with Relena he mumbles Duo's name...she's just so bitch!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh yay! Update! *jumps for joy* I really am enjoying this story. I'm about to go into hysterics and rip all my hair out to find out what's going on between Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre. I loved how Heero had to use his memories of Duo's advances to get it up for Relena. That was awesome. And a possible copy cat killer or maybe the real killer trying to make it look like a copy cat, or maybe a copy cat trying to make it look like the real killer is trying to make it look like a copy cat or maybe..*head spins in dizziness* Gyaahhh!!! I'm so anxious to find out who the killer is!!!! It's KiLlINg meeeeee!!!! *grin* Good job once again on this chapter. Please have another chapter for us soon *bats eyes, begs, and offers chocolate chip cookies*
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Title: HORRAY!!!
Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: September 02, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKYOUUUU! This chapter was one of my favorites because its JUST SO DAMN ANGSTY!!! I hope I didn't make you feel guilty O___O! I JUST LOVE THIS FIC SOOOHH MUCH! I think i checked at the end of every week (probably more) to see if you updated it. EEE! Lovin' the mind games Duo is playing with Heero.
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Title: Shatter
Reviewed By: sseattle On: September 01, 2007 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see an update - it's been a while! I love this story - you can mix the tension and the humor with the best of them. Duo's character is brilliant - tough, sarcastic and vunerable. We haven't had a chance to really get to know Trowa, Wufei and Quatre yet - I hope to see them play a larger role. Heero is funny in his confusion and denseness, but hopefully he has had his wakeup-call now!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 31, 2007 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so now that I know guilt WORKS...heh, heh! No, really though...THANK YOU!!! I was out of town for 24 hours and came back and THERE WAS A NEW CHAPTER. You have made my whole Labor Day Weekend!!! After a 6 hour drive home, this was a perfect treat...except of course for Heero and Relena (ew)...but the fact that he had to think about Duo was PERFECT. That'll keep him thinking. In fact, I kind of look forward to him losing a little of that perfect soldier self-control with the "braided idiot." And who WOULDN'T want to think of Duo during sex, anyway? (Okay...maybe Relena...I gotta grant you that one.) But seriously, who in their RIGHT MIND? So, THANKS AGAIN. And I'll try not to lay on the guilt...but this story is so unique and so tense and edgy that it's hard to wait for! Always wanting more! ---snow
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Reviewed By: Monje EJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 16:38 CDT
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Wow ...ya that about sums it up. I haven't read a fanfic (specailly gundam wing) in awhile but I must say I'm glad I started reading your first. Keep up the awesome work! PS I absolutely love Duo's character =D
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 29, 2007 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Suffering from serious withdrawal! Hope you update again soon! (You spoiled us so last time with two updates three days apart. See what happens? We whine.) This is a seriously dark, intriguing story...and Duo is HOT. I'd really like to see them get somewhere in the investigation before someone else ends up dead. (Unless it's Relena...her I wouldn't miss.) But then, that'd sort of cut the story short, wouldn't it? Just, please, more soon...as soon as you get the chance.
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