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Reviewed By: spider-jen On: January 09, 2008 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed this story, it was well written and I think the epilogue made it a more rounded complete story. I always tend to wish for 1x2, but the story wouldn't have been half as good with any other ending.
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Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was what I call the ideal ending for a fic of this type and caliber. Given Duo's warped mind and the things he's done, to have it finish with a 2x1x2 would have spoilt the overall effect. Having Heero end up on L4 and starting a budding relationship with Quatre is a much more realistic ending. I'm glad though that Duo did manage to escape from jail and with the bill having gone through and changes coming into effect, he really doesn't have any reason to kill any more. Quatre summed it up very well with Duo's litany. Thank you for the roller coaster ride, I've really enjoyed reading this fic, even more so because of your attention to detail. *hugs and Gundam Pilots* Shen ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yuikey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending! I like that the ending was 1X4. Your right Herro and Duo for the ending wouldn't be right for this story. Your story was fun read. It never got boring.
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw, it's almost a little sad that you've actually finished, although congratulations since it is a rather large feat. :) Personally, I was secretly rooting for 1x2x1 despite the fucked-up-ness. Haha. Maybe it's because I was hoping Heero would be able to change Duo or something for the better and he'd stop himself from fulfilling the role of the Butcher. But it's sweet how you left it, and it's the most reasonable ending. Logical enough for Heero. :) Great story! Thanks for letting us read it.
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story, even if I saw the twist coming and really, really didn't want things to end that way! Look forward to the epi. Maybe Heero can end up with Quatre?? I always thought they'd make a good pair.
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Reviewed By: spider-jen On: January 03, 2008 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Being a 1x2 fan I was a little disappointed, but it didn't stop me from enjoying the story. It is well written, and creative. Normally I stay away from dark stories, but anything well written is worth reading. Maybe things will look brighter in the epilogue??? The happy-ending lover in me can still hope, right.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 11:51 CST
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The entire time I read this chapter, I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop... For there to be some twist that would make it simply not true. But, alas, it was true. Not that I'm really complaining. It makes things vastly more interesting to have it turn out this way. Also makes me wonder what on earth you could have in store for us in the prologue.
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Reviewed By: rayana On: January 03, 2008 08:21 CST
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I love how you made it all work out without putting too much sugar on it. I was truly scared for the character in the beginning. That Duo of yours was creepy - I couldn't agree more with that 'What did you expect?' line of his. It shows how things can change with just a little twist of destiny. And the Ralena moment was sweet, when she spoke to Duo at the end. It was such an unexpected thing but it still felt exactly right.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 18:53 CST
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hmm, Relena in power as a non-naive, colonist sympathizer is much more powerful & useful than her dead. and btw I like the fact that you aren't making the same choices with this story everyone else makes.
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Reviewed By: Shen On: December 16, 2007 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had my suspicions from the start that it would be Duo, even though I was hoping it wouldn't be. I love the twists and turns in this plot line, the way you grab and hold the readers interest with those twists. Despite not wanting it to be Duo, I have to commend you in the obvious time and planning you have put into this fic, it really shows. It's hard to find a fic that grabs the attention and holds it all the way through; you have managed to do that and do it well. I'm now really curious as to what Duo's reasons are for this 'insanity'. It would appear to me that 'Shinigami' is more than just a title to Duo, he's become a 'real' part of Duo's psyche. Thank you for writing and sharing such a deeply involved fic. I appreciate the time and effort that you have put into this and eagerly await the remaining chapters and explanations. Shen ^_^
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Reviewed By: rayana On: December 11, 2007 01:13 CST
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Thank you. Not for bad things happening here in general, of course, but for how you've handled this issue. I've been reading this story for some time but I've been reluctent to comment, since I was afraid it'll turn into one of the stories where Duo is that sweet little inocent wobbly (and I was getting just the opposite wibes from him - in this story - all along). Don't get me wrong, I like Duo in canon, but this is a continuation and I can understand you've made him 'grow' a bit (well, a lot) even if it is in a very evil and possibly mad direction. I actually found your Heero/Ralena sweet, if slightly doomed. It was obvious why they were together and why it didn't work like it should and most importantly you didn't push some unneccessary horrible guilt on one of them (it's Relena usually in stories I've read before). You've tackled a difficult and very dark theme and so far it's working admirably.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Br On: December 09, 2007 21:57 CST
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Well, I was very much enjoying the story until the last two chapters. It's a shame you went that direction. A suggestion - it is considered polite etiquette in the GW fandom to list the sexual pairing in the story. Some people absolutely do not like 2x1, and a warning is generally appreciated so that part can be skipped over, especially when it's practically rape (Heero being drunk constitutes impaired judgement). Good luck with the rest of the story. I won't be reading anymore.
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Reviewed By: Hymie the Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! I so can not wait for more!! (bounces in chair excitedly) Have you thought of entering this in a contest? I could win!
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Reviewed By: CottonSheep On: December 08, 2007 15:29 CST
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I'm so excited for this ending! I can't wait!! But wait..what about the man that was killed in the panic room? Didn't they figure that wasn't the Butcher? So who killed him?
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 13:14 CST
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Oooohhhh... I had worried it might turn out this way. And now I hope that maybe it's all a huge misunderstanding...though...that seems very unlikely. *bites lip* In any case, this is a thoroughly compelling story, and I simply cannot get enough of it! Such edge-of-your seat tension!
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