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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch8, and with the closing door, heero's made Duo open game to the murderer. Though it was excellent planning... knowing that Quat's arrival would be enough of a disturbance to conceal a getting after the room had served it's purpose. ^_^ I love this story so much and I have to thank you again, if I hadn't before for sharing it! *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 01:51 CDT
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*hugs you* that's ok, when can we see some of your art? I love the progression of this story!! And I definitely agree about Quatre. I think there are something features that just won't change with Duo, but man the tension between Wu Fei -Trowa and Quatre has my interest peeked!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 15, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I LOVE you! Killer chapter! It's about time Heero got a clue. But now I can't help wondering if Duo's gonna pack up and leave or stay and help in spite of Heero...or to spite him...and Relena. Sure does seem like she was the first to overstep, but Duo sure stooped just as low. Cat fight is right! Yowch. I hope you're updating again soon, cuz I am SO hooked.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I'm so glad to see an update on this one! It's so intriguing and has me on the edge of my seat. I caught myself hoping Duo would say "hell no, I'm not apologizing to that b**ch." lol As much as I'm enjoying this, I'm hoping it's getting close to revealing not only who the killer is, but also what has happened to cause animosity between Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre. I have a hypothesis as to what it is based on hints within the story, so I'm anxiously waiting to see if my hypothesis is correct. I love the tension within the chapters between all the characters. It's palpable. And Duo is so aggressive in what he wants, though I do hope he's uke if they wind up together *waves Duo as uke banner*. Looking forward to the next update which will hopefully be soon!
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Reviewed By: cewo On: July 14, 2007 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Luv that we got two new chapters one right after the other!! The suspense is killing me! Damn that Duo is tenacious, but he'd have to be because Heero is a blockhead!! Don't know who Bill is but it is definitely someone on the inside (please NOT Duo!!) May we have more soon please? (yes, I am greedy) Excellent story!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 07:42 CDT
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2 updates? in a week? you love us you really love us ;) awesome characterization
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Definitely Wufei who-dunnit. He was in the bedroom with ample time to spare when Relena was snoozing blissfully, coulda set the camera easily.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: July 13, 2007 13:06 CDT
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i'm really happy to see an update for this fic! you have no idea how long i've waited to read more about the unsolved conflicts between each of the pilots with each other in the midst of all the suspense around the "butcher." please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 12, 2007 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, sweet nectar of the gods! More of the story! Yay!!! I have a feeling I know where the guy Quatre sent ended up. Ewwww. Gruesome. Heh, and I can't wait to find out what happened between Quatre and Wufei and Trowa. There's a story there for sure! (Not to mention what'll happen when Heero ever admits that HELL YEAH, he liked what Duo did.) So much still to come. This story is intriguing, well-written, tense, and FUN. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 18:01 CDT
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:( cliffy? As always enjoyed, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 03:59 CDT
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Did good work on getting the tension up. Heero reacting is difficult to write at times because anything he does react to would have to be pretty intense. Feel sorry for the guy though, having no clue what's up with his friends. I'm still thinking it's Wufei who did it.
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: April 25, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wufei and the oatmeal is the most hilarious final line to any chapter of any story I think I've ever read!!! I still laugh when I think of it. It's fantastic. And here's hoping you update again SOON. It's been three weeks, and I've got serious withdrawal symptoms!
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Reviewed By: Animestar73 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!! OH POOR DUO AND HEERO!!!! I HATE RELENA!!!!!!!!!!! This is such a great stroy! The way you set it up, with a hint of mystery! Ur such a great author!!!!! Oh A Quarte x Trowa x Wufei traingle??? O.O! interestin!! Please Update!
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Title: Shatter
Reviewed By: snowdragon On: April 01, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I see recent updates have been coming fairly quickly, so I dare to hope there'll be more soon. This chapter was awesome. The whole story is very engaging...and I'm curious how it will pan out.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 01, 2007 15:24 CDT
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so duo finally shows heero that he's interested in him. what will heero do now? what's going to happen with the everyone else as the case gets deeper and everyone's relationships with one another get entangled? please update again soon!
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