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Reviewed By: priscel - hey! On: July 16, 2006 01:31 EDT
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*hugs you* you are forgiven! Wahoo!! Duo stepped up into his personal space! I really love the dialogue here and dangit is Relena anoying. screaming like that again!!... probably another false alarm.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: me On: July 13, 2006 22:07 EDT
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suspense! ohmigosh - i dont want relena to die, but it sure would be nice if she were out of the picture so Duo and Heero could get together. silly Heero - so lacking in self-awareness. i cant wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another addictive chapter! I feel a little bad for Heero - poor dear seems so lost about his own feelings on many things. This is an interesting view of the classic 'the Perfect Soldier has no feelings' line which I find more believable since he seems to have said feelings but is either in denial of them, doesn't understand them or both. I can't wait to see what he'll discover on that line ...and who he'll discover it with. In other words I'm deperately awating next chap! :D Update soon! No! Sooner!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 17:03 EDT
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This is certainly turning out interesting so far. I have a guess as to who the killer could be, but hope very much I'm wrong. Hopefully it's not anyone the audience already knows... I'm also very much enjoying the play between Duo and a rather oblivious Heero.
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Reviewed By: WD On: June 04, 2006 10:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is an intense thriller! You've got my mind spinning in all these directions--I basically think everyone's the killer! Lmao. Just joshing. Although, I seriously think it's either Duo, Trowa, or Wufei . . . but really, I have no idea. God, you have me really guessing! Argh, this is very amazing. Your characterizations would make even the best sniper proud! Yeah, you're that good. Your style of writing is so clean and precise, very appropriate for this sort of genre if not the preferred. Argh, you're just the shiznaez. So amazing. Anyway, I hope you update really soon! I must know what's going to happen! Keep the AMAZING work up, you're writing awesomely! :D
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:35 EDT
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hmm the tension between Relena and Duo is wonderful, yes I know it's always there but Duo's more subtle about the shots he takes at her through Heero, which makes it even better. And hey I have to take offense toe the 'knight in shinning armor bit' though it was a constant in varying degrees for me and my sisters but I never really expected a night to come and scoop me away, more like an alien or a werewolf -they have wonderful fur... haha don't ask, but I'll give you hint that I was a little girl with a killer imagination. I wonder about Wu Fei and how he just completely avoids Duo...or at least taht what it seems like when Heero mentions that Quatre had spoke to him, but then Quat didn't tell Duo. Maybe the two of them had some sort of falling out or Wu Fei had something or felt something toward Duoo that he wasn't ready to face. *shrugs* this is a getting good. The whole time Heero was freaking out about there being some in his room, I though 'Duo' then thought that no one would be crazy enough to linger in their room with heero awake, then I thought about the 'cameras' -Do you ever get the feeling you were being watched, then damnit you shouldn't have given them a prime way to do it- with your own equipment nonetheless! Damn, cameras even in the bathroom, I wish I could hack into that system and get some prime footage of Duo and Heero. *smirks* Heh heh I think I've talked enough...Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fascinating! I am intrigued by the start of this story and plan to stick around to see what you've got planned next - a giddy feeling tells me my inner sadist would enjoy it ") So don't take your time in updating and deliver another dose of excellent fiction to us! :D - Lap aka Nocens
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Reviewed By: camillian On: April 06, 2006 04:20 EDT
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very suspenseful.... and it sure looks like relena and duo are going to blow up at each other sometime soon. i can't wait for that to happen! update again soon!
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Reviewed By: sun-falling On: April 05, 2006 12:25 EDT
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Very intriguing. I'm interested in what comes next.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very enjoyable chapter! I was thrilled to see an update and am on the edge of my seat with the suspense. Who is the murderer? It could be almost anyone. Duo is so jaded, bless his heart. Look forward to the next update which hopefully won't be very long in coming.
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Reviewed By: Sony_Mouse [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:25 EDT
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Soooo cruel, poor Duo. My heart is bleeding for him. I love heero, but I want to smack him...grrrr. Anyways, excellent story, well written, great depth in characters, and a story I WILL be reading till you finish... on that note, please right more soon :) ore ±
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Reviewed By: Codan On: April 04, 2006 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Back for more and this chapter is as good as the last, I like the business with the cigarette. Please update soon! This story is GREAT!
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Reviewed By: ShinigamiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 01:22 EDT
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I think your story has a lot of potential, and the way you set up the story line so far was very flowing. I like it. I would love to see an update to this sometime soon. :)
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Reviewed By: mgp On: March 31, 2006 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For such a fanfic, I give giddy thumbs up. I like mystery, gore, and adore angst. The whole plot and setting, I love it. Heero being engaged to Relena, I'll keep loving when Duo continiously angsts. Aw, my 1x2 love is outweighed by my love for Duo-sadness... If it ever turns 1x2, I'd like to bash Heero for being an idiot and ever thinking of marriage with Relena, bleh. At least Relena is being a somewhat pleasant character, except she seems naive and talkative in an annoying way.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 00:00 EST
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one more thing '...I thought he was a prince? A prince fallen from the stars, just for me..." She trailed off, eyes content and far away.' *shivers* I just wanted to shut her up with something! maybe I can super glue her mouth shut *smiles*
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