| "Finding Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 17:56 CDT
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Peh! I really can't see why Micheal is being so stubborn! And wasn't he the one who could remember more that Seline? Well, I guess that just proves that girls have a better sense of self. Does Koga want the Jewel to defeat Sesshomaru! I like how you made him smarter, but the same imbicile from the old days. What I really don't understand, is that in every fanfic, there is this whole mating ritual, but it's different in every one. Very funny. But I liked how you made it simple without to many blood ritual complications, and weird stuff. The relationship between Kagura and Sesshomaru was a little hazy, but I think it was clarified in chap. 34. It was somehow cute and very worthwile.I think it would be really cool if you wrote a side story about how they fell in love and he got over the fact that she was one of Naraku's offspring. I am still a little confused about this Youkai council thing, and the amount of youkai in the area and how the majority seems to have ended up in America. Thank you ever so much for replying to my review, this is really a fanfiction worth reading and rambling about, and thank you for writing it and updating like a good, faithful author should. Lady Orange
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Reviewed By: FluffyKirara (still not loddeg in...) On: June 09, 2006 14:20 CDT
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awww that was soo cute!! not romanticly cute but i loved it!!it almost made me cry i was soo happy she membered him!!! i cannot wait for the next chappie!! hurry up with it please!!! but i wish i was the one in Inu's arms that would make my day- hell that would make my life /steals Inu/ kukuku u ain't never getting him back....mine now...^^
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Reviewed By: shippos girl On: June 06, 2006 19:40 CDT
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Love it love it more please. this is going to be my favorite chapter ever.^_*
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyyyyyy the delicious moment we've all been waiting for! Thank you for updating!,...........Lady Orange
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Title: kareemachan
Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fun. You've taken some of the tenets of an IY fanfic and are using them in a fun, original manner. I like the storyline so far - good mixture of dialogue and action, good characterization, good spelling and grammar all add up to a very enjoyable piece of fiction. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: tiggrchic On: June 05, 2006 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly have to say that I rarely rate fics with 10's, but I have so enjoyed reading this one. The characters and plot are extremely well developed. I just came across this fic the other day and I am hooked. Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: anth/bloodbrother On: June 05, 2006 15:55 CDT
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its gettin good and i just want to keep reading but 1 problem ..... you gota write and post get to it i love this story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 05, 2006 15:35 CDT
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*sniffles into proffered tissue* Happy now! Good times. Now onwards! Hmm?
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Reviewed By: shippos girl On: June 03, 2006 12:51 CDT
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I think i m falling in love with this story.This is probly the best inuyasha story I have read so far.
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Title: Too Lazy to Log in..
Reviewed By: Broken_Dreams On: June 02, 2006 22:19 CDT
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Goddamnit!! Have I mentioned how much I totally LOVE you?! Nice chapter, as always. Kudos! BD
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Title: presto
Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: June 02, 2006 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is keeping me on the edge! Great work and I can't wait until you update!
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Title: this is not a rag so please read it!
Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my current favorite in the entire fanfic world! The plot (wow you actually have a plot unlike most fanfic authors/ authoresses)is detailed and complex but still understandable. And there are just the right amount of funny parts and witty exchanges. I do have some questions. Well one question really. I want to know that if InuYasha stayed in the past after Kagome died for 500 years, how is it possible that (according to the Time Loop theory) he did not exist twice in the same time. Your story notes that after some time in the Goshinboku, he left. But woudn't his existance be negated every time he went into the future to get Kagome? Because if he went back to the past after burying Kagome, he must have lived through th Fuedal Era in Edo all the way up to 1997 when Kagome first fell into the well. When he first comes to get her when Yura attacks he would already exist in the future. I am also interested in the fact that it must be around the year 2045 for this story to be possible. Also, if it was 40 years ago that Kagome died (as it says in your esteemed writings pronounce) that makes it only about 85 years since she met InuYasha. And the second Kagome is not old enough for her predecessor to be merely her great aunt. But I am extemely worshipful of your ability to make such a riviting and plausible story and weave all the plot lines together in a seamless cloth. The fact that you update efficiantly and consistantly is a raw miracle in the world of mediaminer fanfiction. I really wish that I could use all of the optional space to review in, but I fear I have bombarded this space with my words to long. If you do not understand my lengthy ramblings, feel free not to answer my questions at all. I have never written a review longer that a few hundred characters before but I am surprised I had the patience to carry this out. *whew* Thank you so much for writing this,..........-Lady Orange
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Reviewed By: anth On: May 31, 2006 20:06 CDT
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YEAH!!!! that got my soul at ease finaly seein hojo trying to grope kagome .......... egh the very thought of that lol oh well good job i expect to read more. ps. i was wondering why sess isnt lookin for rin?
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Reviewed By: Dragodden On: May 31, 2006 19:50 CDT
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It just gets better and better! ^_____^ And thanks for the response to my question; much amusement in seeing it included in this chapter, and all. (I've had the question for a bit, but I'm a quiet fan.. ;)
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 18:18 CDT
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I forgot to put this in my last review- I had the impression that once you have "mated" with a demon, you gain some of their characteristics. I've heard alot of stuff about marking, but never in the actual series... Oh well, maybe I just haven't watched enough of the actual anime. *sigh* I'm really bad about that. And I was also wondering about the remembering stuff. Is that like their past lives invading their bodies or something? (Like when Michael and Sally are talking as if they are MIroku and Sango) I'm just curious cause some of that stuff was confusing to me. '^_^
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