"Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 19:10 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wish it was longer but still great! ...and sad, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 21:26 CDT Comment/Review: AAAAAH, what ya doin to a sista. Chapter was waayy to short. Please give it a happy ending, I hate sad endings. See ya nesxt chapter.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:56 CDT Comment/Review: oh gods this is heart breaking! Of all the bad decisions. kami I'm going to cry!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:07 CDT Comment/Review: *strangles you* update soon!!! Great chappie, but you need to make it looooonnnnngggggeeeerrrr. Too short and painful.
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Reviewed By: Starblade2007 On: October 04, 2006 11:22 CDT Comment/Review: OMG, this was a really good story! I just read it all in one day and...WOW! I can't wait for you to update it...*runs around room in excitement* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 01:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: write more dammit i need to know what happens next. i enjoyed the chapter but hope the next one wont be sad. cant wait til it comes FYI.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 06:24 CDT Comment/Review: *shakes finger at you* bad ending! Bad bad bad! Me no lieky you no more! Bad ending! *cries* I sound like a mother scolding her child...T.T...Hey, you should make Kagome get pregnant! Then Inuyasha CAN'T run away ^___^ That would be so pimped...
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 18:20 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh no no no no! Please dont do that she has to stay with him!!!!!!!!!! Argh! Well, I enjoyed this chapter and even though I know the next one will most likely be sad, I cannot wait till it comes.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:29 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey!!! It really has been a while, lol. This was a really good chapter. But the end revelation on Inu's part at the end was a little sad. But then again, without sadness or pain, there is no love and happiness. So, great job. I can tell the end is almost here. I know whatever you write up, will be wonderful. :-)I hope your doing good.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. I often get frustrated because people have a hard time describing how painful it is to love someone, like Kagome does Inuyasha, and feel as if they don't return it. I thought you did a brilliant job developing both of the characters and were able to really convey strong emotions. It has been very heart wrenching. I loved the time that they spent with Sango, Miroku, and Shippou. It was nice to see that they all still cared for each other as a family. You also had wondeful, tasteful lemons, not trashy like some of the ones I have seen before. Overall, I think you're a great writer and you've done a brilliant job with this story and I look forward to seeing more updates in the future. Thanks bunches!
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Title: u crative genius u! Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 21:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i havnt reviewed in a long time cause i been workin (full time shift eeeesh) its pretty hard for me to come to the library too when im so exhausted from work. but i really love reading ur story when i have time to kick back and relax. i find it like a soothing, relaxation thingy for both mind and soul. currently i been a little confused about inu's emotions towards kagome in ur latest chapter sweet ecstacy, hard reality. it seems like he's ....(super (cough**) horny) or something? it scares me to think that it goes on in his mind 24 / 7 heheh. but no doubt about it. im enjoying these chapters of yours. they are very interesting i must say. and i cannot wait for ur next chappie. sadly i want ot post my own story up and it would be an honour if u read it too cause u got lots of wonderful creativity in you that flows in waves..unlike me i dont really am not much of a writer. but i will try to write this one chpter up and see waht ppl think. it shall be called secrets. if u like u can read it. im not sure if ill post it next week or this.though. heheh but newasys no more about me. i love ur story and when it is over i shall cry and kill many trees because of the boxes ans boxes of tissues that i shall use for my tears and boogers...especially boogers (gigglez**) i hope ur creative mind shall invent another story for us readers to enjoy. i shall keep updated with ur next chappie and i hope it shows up soon.. mean while i shall go prepare my stock of boxes of tissues..hm? ...recycable or soft and quilty?
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi-sorry, too lazy!! lol) On: July 15, 2006 20:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey girl!!! Sorry, i took so long to read your chapie. But I must say, it was really hot. I could see the passion between the two. It was a very good chappie. And what an end! LoL. I can't wait for the next chappie. I can't belive your story's coming to a close end... I think I'm only half way for my story, lol. ;-)
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 14:26 CDT Comment/Review: That was some intense love making LOL Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 12:37 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon! Thanks.
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Title: wow Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: July 10, 2006 11:04 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow great update, that was a whole lot of lemons. i hate to hear your finishing in 3 more chapps. i really enjoyed this chap very wow and speechless.
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