| "Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: July 10, 2006 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
great update!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow girl, you truely are a romantic. I love it!! LoL. That was one hot, and sweet lemon. This chapter was just so cute and sweet, I could actually see Kagome sitting in a field making flower crowns with the sun and the wind. It was great. Loved the fab update!!! ;-)
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: June 26, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. . . familiar. . . great. . . can't put my finger on how familiar this is. I can not wait to see whats going to be on the next chapter. Where??
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Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: June 26, 2006 12:00 CDT
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That was soo sweet. THat was sweet, tender sex. I myself prefere in the moment, rough sweaty sex, but hell, this was great too. Keep up the good work, and I would love to see something extreemy unexpected for next chappy ^^
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Title: Yummy!
Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very passionate, thanks for the update :). I really wanted that scene that Inuyasha apologizes to Kagome and I loved how she handled the response. I'm glad you had him speak to her instead of just physically showing her he loved her. I needed that closure haha. She needed to see there was more to him feelings that just passion, but true love even though it came off as violent at the time. We all know Inuyasha's "rape" was truely his unbridled intense feelings for her coming out all at once while he was driven insane with jealousy. Thanks for that. I appreciate you staying up to write more, I know it's a lot of work. Can't wait for more though, sorry I'm greedy :).
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Title: sorry i havnt reviewed for a while..
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive had tons of stuff to do ..essays, final,,u name it..but neways i also moved and the library is more far away now..but its all good..i just love ur latest chap...so KAWII!!!! im glad that u have put up alot of creativity in ur story...most dont have that..but thats why ur on my fav list...cuz of creativity.. neways after im done and all(around june 22) i will start putting up my first fanfic and everything...plz be one of my readers...it would mean alot to me hehehe. thankx great chapi!!! lub yas tons....keep up the awsome work..
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Reviewed By: InuyashaAnime4ever_Brittany On: June 08, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story I found your story in one day and I read it all in like 3-4 hours I think it is So Cool cant what for the next chapter hope you keep writting =)
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Title: WHEW
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, I got the lemon I was waiting for even though it wasn't really romantic ( I'm sure you'll make up for that later hmmm?) but I'm glad they did the do. Keep the updates coming. Thanks for having Katana come around, I was hoping she wouldn't be a bitch.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: : ilovefairytalechic On: June 03, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. . . speechless. . .WOW. great update very great did not expect that. you my be the best at what you do. you really did work hard on this one. i can not wait to read the next chapter. WOW again (appluase)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there girlie!!! I finally got a chance to read your update, so here I am. I must say, wow, that was one really good chap. I'm glad they finally got together, but sad it ended the way it did. Your really good at writing angst. LoL. Anyhoo, awesome chappie, and I'll ttyl, kay? Bye!!! ;-)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i must say i really enjoy your story.. its had me at the end of my chair wanting to know whats going to happen next! i just started reading it today and i am amazed !!! really good job i love it !!!!!! update soon
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Title: inugirl2003
Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I wanted to say how much I really enjoy your writing. You are one of my very favorite authors, I just wanted you to know that up front. Reading this story through, I was a little confused. It went from typical Inu and Kagsome not being able to admit feelings, to down right hot and nasty sexy. Not that that's a bad thing haha. We had several chapters of back and forth they can't get it together, then you threw in Inu and his little head game, (which I thoroughly loved btw), then he just got mad and did the deed. I guess the confusion was how fast he changed from he "wasn't the marrying type" to you're mine forever. I guess you're saying he just wasn't admiting it to himself then he decided he did want to be the marrying type? Just never really saw that mind turnaround. He never did tell her he wanted her to stay, she doesn't question why he's not so insistant that she leave anymore or curious why he's making passes at her when he doesn't love her (in her own mind). Anyway, just saying I was confused at the sudden change of direction in both characters, the transitions, I hope I'm making myself clear because I'm not much of a writer haha. BUT I gotta say I do love the directions you've taken them in! I loved that he was playing with Kagome, and making her jealous, and wanting. I loved where he got so jealous he couldn't take it anymore. I thought that scene was totally believeable. You definately have cliffies where I say, "Oh man it's over again?" and I can't wait for the next installment. I really love your writing style, use of words and the way you paint a picture of what's happening so that I forget I'm reading and just get involved in the story so much. It's like a good book you don't want to put down. Thanks so much for you're tireless effort. I for one am one reader that can't wait to see more from you, so again, thanks so much for the wonderful pleasure of reading your story. Wish we had more stories from you of course...I'm a greedy reader :)
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Title: shikon shard protector
Reviewed By: Master Inuyasha On: June 01, 2006 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..this last chapter...it's very very detailed and i love it!!!..god, the love scene was amazing!!..please do more..*blushes*
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update!
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: June 01, 2006 15:32 CDT
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Woah, now that was intense. I didn't expect that to happen. Knowing Inuyasha he is going to try to get her to leave instead of talking hto her about what happened. And as usual Kagome misunderstood his feelings. Oh boy I guess the drama is going to come.
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