| "Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 14:57 CDT
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O_O...He raped her....Holy shit....He fucking raped her...That was really well written! I really liked it! I want an update ASAP or you shall die a very slow and painful death. Hell yeah....That was an awesome chapter! lol
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 01, 2006 10:27 CDT
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Ah no! Inuyasha go back! Go back!
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Title: shikon shard protector
Reviewed By: Master Inuyasha=^_^= On: May 29, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...this was a rollercoaster fanfic..lol....i was upset that you teased me, but it's all good. you are a very good author..please continue this
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story.
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dammit, i got so into your fic and then boom I'm stuck waiting until you update again. You always know you're a good writer when you have people complaining that you need to update soon. I didn't notice any big grammatical errors, which is good. I don't always catch the small ones just reading, but good job anyway lol and if I'm sounding weird it's because it's 4:30 am where I am right now.
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Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: May 23, 2006 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, new found love, insight, and emotion all the great things that make a story amazing. Keep up the great artwork and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl!!! Great chappie. You are updating left and right. Starting tomorrow, I'll get back to writing. It's summer!!!! I can't believe Katana found a man to love, I really never expected that. Not much fluff, but I loved Kags insights. Awesome update. ;-)
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Title: guaw!!! eee.. 0000oo.
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. i dunno wut to say. this is gotta be the best fanfic i ever read. its just so suspensful. its awsome. i know my title was weird, but then again how do u put this into words (suspensful: hands in hair. leaning at the very edge of my seat. and then all of a sudden fall of feeling embarassed and well..hehe embarassed) this is too good. i swear it. honest . ur so talented. i was expecting them to go to lemon mode. but once again the sweetness of waiting on their lemon mode is totally awsome. it makes it mind gripping cause u want it to happen, but if it did it wouldnt be such a good fanfic.heheh. which it is of course 100% i hope u win some award or something. u make it super intruiging. hope ur all right i read the last part in ur story in ur new latest chap. ill be praying for whatever difficulties ur going through. and i hope ur in good health and all ur family+ friends as well. p.s hope u update soon!!! this is way tooooo good!!. im in suspense. ur so awsome.heheh :) ice cream!!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww girl, you don't have to thank me. LoL. This was a really good update. Darn that Shippo for interrupting though. LoL, just kidding. That was some hot citrus I tell ya. Or should I say sour? LOL. Kidding again. Anyway, this was great chappie. Let me guess which review is his. Hmmm... LOL. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 15:25 CDT
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O_O I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! YOU'RE SO MEAN! How could you leave it like that?!?!?!? UPDATE NOW!
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Title: two world one love
Reviewed By: ilovefairytalechic On: May 15, 2006 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing, wounderfully written. The charaters are very progessive. the erotic sceens were written in great taste with sensuaous clarity.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: May 15, 2006 11:04 CDT
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cruelty indeed
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... I'm touched you advertised for me. LOL. I thought it was funny, here I am finishing off your chapter, when I read your AN and there's your message. LOL. That was one great update. That Katana really sounded like a hussy. ;p I'm glad Kags had the courage to stand up to her. I'm thinking Inu might be onto something by leaving Kags with a goodnight kiss like that. Your fic is GOOD. I could always use your help and guidance. :-) Well, just wanted to show some love and I did. I can't wait for the next chap, you did an awesome job with this one. Hot citrus, sista. LOL. TTYL!!! ;-)
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Title: AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good..that was good that was good GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD!!!!! i was so into it that women vixen fox was a good character and kagome was so funny in how she was so jelous hehehe!!!! the juicy part was that inu had her againts the tree and he gave her a passionate rise in her system and then he left her hanging hehehehe that was sweeter than candy. i love ur fanfic so much im gonna keep it in my favs forever and ever and ever .. keep up the good work and nice touches on the editing ,i dont think i found a single spelling mistake or grammer.. hehehe nice work . keep it up keep it up keep it up.. this gurl is a pile of sweet mush and the moosh is smiling!!!
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 16:45 CDT
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i LOVED it i really hope u update fast so i can find out what happens next.
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