| "Innovation of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: July 20, 2006 12:50 CDT
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please write more please good story!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagsinred ~not login~ On: July 19, 2006 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love the story so far update very soon
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: July 19, 2006 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. It was really nice to get youko's point of view. But, I can not wait to read more. I really want to see what happens when Youko and Kurama talk. Or see how Kurama feels about Kagome and if he knows about Youko.
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Reviewed By: sunnybunnie On: July 19, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow this is a really good story I love how u put in the anita blake series hehehehehe. anyway when u update this story email me at sunnybunnie@gmail.com keep up the good work and update soon please i would hate the suspence.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 17:55 CDT
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heehee!this was really great! I liked reading about what youko feelz. it was good. laterz
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Reviewed By: formally known as FoXy_hOtTiE On: July 19, 2006 17:24 CDT
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this is a really good storie!!!Please update it soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: July 19, 2006 14:49 CDT
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a very good chapter. trying to write in a males point of view is extrememly difficult but i think u pulled it off excellently. anyways, please update soon. ^^
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Reviewed By: Tori~Chan On: July 15, 2006 17:16 CDT
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yum. lol thats all i can say is yum. although i love this and the way it's going lol Youko is to devious for his own good and i can wait to see what Suiichi does to gain the affections of Kagome as well...but i will admit i would like to see them both have her...maybe it would be a three way? and it can be Kurama/Kagome/Youko. ^_^ well i look forward to an update ^_^ goodluck with ur writting and ja ne!
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Candi On: July 12, 2006 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i really like this story,especially the creavitity! You see alot of IY YYH crossovers but none quite like this. I hope you update soon, for my sanity's sake! Great job,i really love it. Candi
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Reviewed By: Kage of Wind On: July 11, 2006 20:42 CDT
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Awsome I love this storie.....PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: B-girl On: July 06, 2006 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. And I'm very curious as to how Youko is reacting to all this, so please, continue with it! The reason I rated it the way I did, is because number one: I'm sorry, but I tend to be very critical of writing, but with good intent of couse. And Number two: It's the way I also rate myself when I do myown writing, though I've never posted it before, but I will eventually. But all in all, the story is well done.
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Title: Innovation of Light
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru's-Babygurl-n-v-me On: July 02, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH ME LIKEY!!!!! I THINK U SHOULD HAVE IT A KAGOME/KURAMA BECAUSE WHO CAN PICK BETWEEN SEXII YOUKO AND KAWII SUUICHI (sp?) PLUS THINK ABOUT IT ONLY BOTH CAN HANDEL KAGOME IF ONE TRIED TO TAKE HER ALONE THERE WOULD BE LOTS OF PROBLEMS ^.^ i love how shippo is in this fanfiction he's just sooooooooo damn cute!!! i wonder what type of trouble kagome will get them in? cuz kagome attracts trouble like a moth to a flame. I MUST THANK YOU FOR THIS INTERESTING STORY THAT IS A EXCELLENT SUMMER (OR ANY TIME) READ. I HOPE I CAN GET SOME LEAMONS AND LIMES LATTER ON ::miroku's grin,youko's smirk:: i just cant find words for this interestingly, amazingly, wonderful story!! much luv SeSShoMaru'S BaByGurL
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Reviewed By: numanumayay On: July 02, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome/Kurama!!!!!!! Because............ don't really have a good reason i just want them together. Anyways update soon!!
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Title: Tear
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: July 01, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv ure story very much. An I feel so bad for Yoko-kun right now...Ooh u should have Yoko an Shuuichi come to gather in some way or another so they both can have Kagome! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: June 29, 2006 15:42 CDT
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AHHHHHH!!!! Moremoremoremoremore! Please? If you don't mind? lol Thankies! ^-^ ps: very good chappie. ^-^
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