| "Innovation of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Title: erm..
Reviewed By: Green_iPods [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is please take some classes. It does have an original plot, but a story takes more than two main characters and sexual tension.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: =^^=
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89*not logged in* On: August 12, 2006 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was flippin AWESOME!!! That was a wonderful first lemon! Congrats! Well I hope Kagome doesn't push them away to much...please update!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [NSI] On: August 12, 2006 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVED YOUR LEMON!This chapter was soo amazing!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 10:50 CDT
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yay, this is wat Ive been waiting for! I dont think the lemon sucked, and I dont care much if body parts are called vulgar things in a story. Except for boobs, i hate that. it was a good lemon, don't keep urself down.
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Reviewed By: Silver kitten On: August 12, 2006 08:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was hot. For your first lemon, you didn't do too bad you know. Please update soon. I want to know how kagome turns out.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: August 12, 2006 06:12 CDT
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Thats cold as shit how you just goin leave like that! After sex no less!!!! Whats goin happen with the 3. Is she sad or mad or lost WHAT??? Update soon. PS Loved the lemon XD
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 00:33 CDT
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i loved it!!!!!! not much more i can say ^^ i read ur message after the chapter.... only one more chapter till this is over? *tear* does it have to be so short?
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Reviewed By: Silver kitten On: August 02, 2006 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I want to see what happens to kagome when she comes back. I've never read a fanfic like this before and I really want to know how it turns out.
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Reviewed By: TwiLiteVixen (@ff.net) On: July 26, 2006 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please! More! This has got to be the first time I've encountered this plot.. And I love it! I'm hooked! Soooo.. Until you post another chapter.. I might have to "confiscate" Youko. I need something to... entertain.. me.
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: July 22, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Write more please!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Suuchii and Youko combining....hmmmm. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Narabeleth_Du [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi!! i love it!! The tension between Suichi and Youko is awsome.PLEASE update soon!! I wanna know what happens next!!!
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Title: Me LIke
Reviewed By: Mala V On: July 21, 2006 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Cool idea. I was thinking maybe you should do that. (Having them share her in Suuichi's body.) Ugh! I don't know how to word it. Anyway, plaese keep updating because more than me likes this story. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I luv it! I luv it! I luv it! I luv it even more that Yoko& Shuichi will soon be turnin to Kurama. Gosh I can't wait update soon!
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